OS: Talaash

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OS: TALAASH

Amit and Amita are finally married after all the misunderstandings'

Amit and Amita in car' after bidaai

Amita: crying in car'

Amit recalls' his naani's words'

Naani: Amit .. Amita would be emotionally down after bidaai' har ladki ko ye lagta hai ke kaise woh apne sasural me apne aap ko sambhal paayegi' uska sahara sirf uska pati hota hai.. tumne amita se chahe jo bhi wajah se shaadi ke liye haa kaha ho' lekin ab woh tumhari patni hai.. uske har sukh aur dukh ke saathi ho ab' dhyan rakhna ke uska tum poori tarah se khayal rakhoge'

Amit: Amita' ye lo rumaal'

Amita: takes the hanky and wipes her tears' and says thanks..

Amit: nods and adjusts his specs... and looks outside window

Amita: Driver yaha rokna zara'

Amit: kuch kaam hai tumhe??? ghar pe sab raah dekh rahe honge'

Amita: jaanti hoon amit.. lekin' mujhe bahut zaruri kaam hai'

Amit: Amita' kya tum ye baadme nahi kar sakti'?

Amita: nahi amit'

She gets down from car.. in her bridal wear' and crosses the road and walks down'

Amit: driver tum yahi ruko. main abhi aata hoon.. ghar se call aaya toh kehna.. ke.. hum traffic me phase hai'

Driver: ji sahabji'

Amit: ye ladki bhi na' ajeeb hai.. ab isse yaha aisa kya kaam hai'?

Amit crosses road and follows amita.. he is stunned to see Amita.. walking towards beach'

ye amita ko abhi beach pe kya kaam ho sakta hai'?

Amit: runs behind Amita'and says.. amita' yaha kya kaam hai tumhe'?

Amita; talaash hai amit'

Amit; talaash.. kiska?

Amita; looks at the sea.. and says.. ye samandar dekh rahe ho amit'

Amit: isme dekhne waali kya baat hai amita.. samandar hai' sirf khara paani hai aur kya hai.

Amita: dekhne wale ko sirf paani dikhta hai' dher saara paani.. dur dur tak sirf paani' haan.. khara paani.. lekin jitna andar.. jao.. utna samundar gehra hota jaata hai'

Amit: kya ye baatein abhi karna zaruri hai amita.. ghar pe sab raah dekh rahe honge'

Amita: amit' jaante hain.. jab.. ek sailor apna jahaaz leke samandar me utarata hai.. usse apne.. manzil ka pata rehta hai.. aur woh apni manzil ke raah par chal padta hai' ya phir ye kaho ke woh apne.. manzjil ko pane ki raah talaashta hai'

Amit; ye sab kya keh rahi ho tum ghuma phirake' when amit's phone rings.. maa ka phone hai amita' chalo.. ab.. and moves ahead' but amita does n't'

Amit turns back and sees amita is still standing he looks at the call.. and turns his phone to silent mode' and goes back to amita'

Amita; looks at amit' and speaks to amit in a serious tone .. hum.. shaadi ke is samadar me apne.. rishte ki naiyaa me uttar toh gaye hai .. lekin.. naa hame hamari manzil pata hai aur naa hi.. is samadar ki mera matlab hai is shaadi ki gehrai ka... sach kaho toh.. hamari naiyya' bhi' khokli hai amit' hum naa ek dusre se pyar karte hai.. aur naa hi ek dusre ko jhel sakte hai.. main itna janti hoon ke maine ye shaadi mere parivaar ke liye ki hai.. lekin.. aapne kyun ki ye mujhe nahi pata' jab do log ek hi naav me sawaar hote hai.. ek dusre jo samjhna bahut zaruri hota hai.. aur samjhne ke liye.. baat karna.. yaha toh.. hum baat toh.. door.. ek dusre ko dekh bhi thik se nahi rahe hai' toh hum hamare rishte ko kitna aage bada paayenge? ' kya hai hamari manzil amit'? jab manzil hi nanhi pata.. toh.. rishte ko kaunse disha par le jaayenge'?

Amit: main samajh raha hoon.. amita.. ke tum kya puchna chahti ho' maine ye shaadi' mere parivaar ke liye kiya.. aapke parivaar ke izzat ke liye kiya' kyunki.. shayad.. main khud apne aapko' iska zimmedar manta hoon' apni ego ke wajah se main do parivaaron ki izzat se nahi khel sakta tha'aur rahi baat..hamare rishte ki.. toh' dekhne waalon ke liye.. hamari shaadi.. aam shaadi ki tarah lagegi.. gehra aur pyara lagega.. lekin.. asliyat me.. khara hoga' bilkul is samandar ke paani ki tarah'

Amita:smiles and says.. ye toh main jaanti hon amit' ke hamara rishta aam pati patni ki tarah nahi hoga' isliy toh main is rishte ki manzil jaanana chahti hoon amit?

Amit: abhi toh hamare rishte ki manzil mujhe bilkul is samandar ke paani ki tarah lag raha hai'.is rishte ki naa hi koi manzil hai aur naa hi koi' disha' haalat ke saath.. hamari naiyya' bhi apne disha teh karegi' amita'

Amita; aur agar' isme hamari rishte ki naav dub gayi toh'?

Amit; toh' ye shaayad is rishte ki destiny hogi amita.. lekin abhi ke liye mujhe kuch pata nahi... and moves back'

Amita; aur agar aisa hua ke beech raah me hamari manzil ek hui aur hume' hamare rishte ko ek nayi manzil mili toh'?

Amit: turns back looks at amita and says... jhoothi umeedon ke sahare jeena meri aadat nahi hai'amita'

Amita; lekin' umeed ke bagair jeena bhi toh' aapki fitrat nahi hogi amit'

Amit: looks back and looks into amita's eyes.. which had loads of question' she just wanted answer from Amit.. for which unfortunately he didn't have any answers'

when Falguni's phone call.. on Amita's phone interrupts them'

Amita; mummyiji' and moves back towards car..

Amit looks at Amita who moved on.. and turns back towards sea' and the sun set and thinks' jo sawaal aapke mann me uth rahe hai amita.. unhi sawaalon ke jawaab toh main kal raat se dhund raha hoon' kya jawaab doon aapko.. jab.. khud un sawaaalon ke jawaaab talaaash raha hoon main'

In car' both are sitting facing outside window.. looking at sky'

when there is a song played on radio'

O Maanjhi Re O Maanjhi Re

Apna Kinara

Nadiya Ki Dhara Hai

O Maanjhi Re

Amita and Amit look at each other'

Amit: lagta hai.. RJ ne bhi tumhari baat suni hai'

Amita: nahi.. Amit.. shayad kanhaji chahte hai.. ke aap meri baat pe gaur kare'

O Maanjhi Re O Maanjhi Re

Apna Kinara

Nadiya Ki Dhara Hai

O Maanjhi Re

Saahilon Pe Behenewale

Kabhi Suna To Hoga Kahi Ooo

Ooo Kagazon Ki Kashtiyon Ka

Kahi Kinara Hota Nahi

O Maanjhi Re Maanjhi Re

Koi Kinara Jo Kinare Se Mile Woh

Apna Kinara Hai

O Maanjhi Re

Paniyon Mein Behe Rahehain

Kahi Kinare Toote Huve Ooo

Ooo Raaston Mein Mil Gaye Hain

Kabhi Saharein Choote Huve

Koi Sahara Majdhare Mein Mile Jo

Apna Sahara Hai

O Maanjhi Re

O Maanjhi Re O Maanjhi Re

Apna Kinara

Nadiya Ki Dhara Hai

O Maanjhi Re

At Shah mansion'

Falguni was waiting for amita and Amit'

Falguni: ye amita aur amit bhi naa.. kab se phone try kar rahi hoon.. receive hi nahi kar rahe hai'

Tina; falu bhabhi' dono ki nayi nayi shaadi hui hai'ek dusre ke saath kuch private moments share kar rahe honge..

Falguni: car me.. driver ke samne tina!

Tiina; well.. you never know..

When Amita and Amit enter'

Falguni; amita amit.. kaha the tum dono.. kitne call kiye tum dono ko'

Amit; woh maa' phone silent pe tha toh.. sunai nahi diya'

Falguni; thik hai' and smiles and does aarti.. and says amita beta' daahine pair se kalash girao aur andar aajao..

Amita: ji mummyiji' and picks up her lehenga.. to kick the kalash' when '

Falguni notices.. sand on Amita's legs and so on Amit's legs'

Amita enters house' and Falguni enquires..

Falguni; amita beta.. tumhare pairon par ye ret?

Amita: woh mummyiji' actually hum.. beach par gaye the'

Falguni; beach par?

Tiina; maine kaha tha na bhabhi.. ke dono love birds.. kuch private moments bitana chahte the..

Amita; interfers' nahi kaaki.. waisi baat nahi hai..

Falguni; job hi ho.. Amita.. ek call karke toh bata diya hota.. hum kitna tensed the'

Amita; sorry mummyji aage se aise nahi hoga'

Amit: sorry mummy'

Tina: waise... bhabhi agar aapka tension kam ho gaya ho toh' main kuch sawaal puchu amit aur amita se'

Falguni; haan zarur.. tina'

Tina; waise.. love birds.. aisa kya karne gaye the.. beach par'?

amit: woh kaaki'amita ko bahut bhuk lagi thi.. woh hum dono ne subah se kuch khaya nahi tha.. toh' hum log beach side pe naariyal paani peene gaye the'Aur koi baat nahi hai kaaki'

Falguni: smiles and sys.. agar waisi koi baat bhi hoti toh kya amit' ye din hai tumhare' ek saath pal guzarne ke..

Kirit: haan.. main aur.. tumhari mummy bhi jaate the roz beach par'

Falguni: bas kijiye'

Amit: smiles and looks at amita awkwardly' and adjusts his specs'

Falguni: jao amita beta.. aur change kar lo' phir kuch naasta karte hai'bhuk lagi hogi naa.. amit beta' amita ko apna karma dikhana'

In room; amit and amita get fresh' and are getting ready' when amita tumbles while turning back' and amit holds her' and they both share an eye lock'

When' Tina and Falguni enter amit's room'

Tina; oh oh.. we are sorry.. humne kuch nahi dekha'

Amit: nahi.. kaaki.. woh.. amita.. girne waali thi' toh' maine usse pakad liya..

Amita: ji mummyiji'

Tina: arre.. amit .. shaadi ke baad.. pehle pehle.. koi na koi girta hi hai.. isliye.. apne kamre ka darwaza band kar lena.. taaki.. koi tum dono ko interrupt na kare..

Amit: kaaki.. aap ko bhi .. na taang khichne ke bahane chahiye hote hai bas'

Falguni; amita beta' tum na apna saaman unpack mat karna..

Amita; kyun mummyiji,'?

Falguni:uska pata kuch der me chal jaayega' ab chalo.. sab tumhari raah dekh rahe hai.. tumhare bina aaj koi kuch nahi kha sakta'

Falguni enters with amita nad tina'

When Amit looks at Amita' and looks around'

Kirit; amit,.. utho jao.. aur amita ko apne paas bithao'

Amit: ji papa' and gets p and tells amita.. chaliye'

Amit is about to turn' when Amita.. holds amit's hands.. and says.. rukiye.. and holds amit's hands and says. ab chaliye'

Amit: amita.. tum mera haath kyun pakad rahi ho..? gharwaale kya sochenge'

Amita; woh aapke shirt pe lipstick ka mark hai' shayad mere trip hote samay lag gaya hoga' agar tina kaaki ne dekh liya toh aur chidayengi..

Amit: kya? And is about to check his shirt.. when amita says.. abhi seedha dekhiye amit..

Amit smiles and says' pehle nahi bata sakti thi,' main apni shirt change kar leta'

Amita: pehle batane ke liye aap kamre se bhaag gaye naa.. mujhe mummyji aur kaaki ke baatein sun ne ke liye'

Amit : haan uske liye sorry'

Amita: smiles and says you must be' waise.. mummyiji ne.. mujhe apna saaman unpack karne ke liye mana kiya hai'

Amit: kyun?

Amita: mujhe kya pata? Aapki mummy hai aapko pata hona chahiye..

Amit: mujhe nahi pata'

Amita: acha..

Amit: speaks to amita pata nahi.. mummy ke dimag me kya khichadi pak rahi hai.. kuch kahengi toh mana bhi nahi kar sakta'

Amita; lagta hai.. hamari naav ek bade toofan me phasne waali hai amit'

When kirit says.. arre.. tum dono.. 10 kadam chalne ke liye itna time le rahe ho' jaldi aaoo' tum dono ka zyada waqt nahi lenge hum'

Amit: nahi papa.. woh..hum aa hi rahe the'

Amit and amita sit beside each other..

Riya serves food to both'

Both have food'

After dinner..

Kirit: amit amita.. meri aur falguni ke taraf se.. tum dono ke liye ye.. kerala ka honeymoon trip.. tum dono ko kal subah nikalna hai..

Amit/ AMita: Honeymoon??

Falguni: haan.. beta'

Amita: lekin mummyji' meri toh abhi pehli rasoi, aur kitne saare riwaaz baaki hai..

Tina: woh kya hai na beta.. tum dono.. ki' closeness ko dekhkar.. hum sab ne ye faisla kiya hai ke tum dono pehle kuch pal akele bitao.. rasam ka kya hai.. honeymoon ke baad bhi ho jaayega'

Amit: kaaki.. lekin.. office me mere meetings scheduled hai'

Kirit: amit beta.. main hoon naa' meetings maine reschedule kar diye hai' toh jao' aur ab so jao.. kal subah 9 baje ki flight hai..

Amit/ Amita: kal subah'

Tina: oh oh' amit amita' ruk jao.. woh.. tum dono itni jaldi kamre me nahi jaa sakte'

Amit; lekin kyun kaaki'?

Tina: bhabhi.. lagta hai.. amit ko kamre me jaane ki kuch zyada hi jaldi hai'

Falguni: ek minute' and goes to kirit and says.. aapse kaha tha.. koi bahana banake' amit ko kuch der ke liye le jaayiye'

Kirit: haan haan'. bhul gaya tha main falguni'

Kirit: arre amit beta.. woh thoda.. ek meeting ke bare me discuss karna tha'

Amit: ji papa aaya'

Falguni/ Tina/ Riya; decorate amit's room'

while amita was busy chatting with naani and baa'

In room;

Amita was sitting on bed' waiting for Amit'

when amit enters' and finds room being decorated' and closes the door'

Amit: amita.. ab aap ye ghunghat nikaal sakti hai.. kamre me sirf hum dono hai'

Amita: removes ghunghat and gets up' and says' mujhe change karna hai'

Amit: hmmm'

Amit moves around and smells.. the rose petal.. and smiles'

Amita: observed amit and says' rose aapka favorite lower hai kya?

Amit: drops the petal and says.. haan..kyun tumhe kaise pata..?

Amita: woh aapki smile ne'

Amit: hmm' woh hume kal subah' kerala

Amita: amit.. kaha tha na maine.. ke hamari shaadi hui hai amit' ye rishta' dher saare toofan laayega' aur sabse pehla toofan hai.. honeymoon' ab batayiye.. kya karenge hum'?

Amit: haan' toh kya amita.. hum thodi real coupel hai.. jo waha jaake.. apna honeymoon manayenge' waise bhi main jaanta tha ke shaadi ke baad.. ye honeymoon ka topic niklega.. isliye maiine pehle se hi tayari kar li thi..

Amita: matlab'!!! kya hai aapka'

Amit: amita'don't worry kuch aur matlab mat nikalna' hum kal jaayenge' aur waha jaane ke baad.. hum chahe ek kamre me rahe ya phir alag alag kamre me kisse pata chalne waala hai' waha jaayenge.. sightseeing karenge ghumenge.. aur waapas aajaayenge'

So just take a chill pill aur so jao' ab samandar me utre hai toh.. toofano ka saamna toh karna padega naa'

And sings.. O maajhi re' and goes to bath room'

Amita: thank you kanhaji.. ke amit honeymoon ke liye maan gaye' ab jab saath kuch pal bitayenge.. toh' inhe samjhne ke liye thoda mauka mil jaayega' bhale hi unhe is rishte se koi umeed na ho.. lekin.. main aise umeed haarke toh nahi baith sakti naa' manzil ki talassh toh main zarur karungi' waise bh.. yunhi hi thodi aapne hamari jodi banayi hogi.. kuch acha toh socha hoga naa aapne' hamare liye'

Amit comes out singing song.. and finds.. amita looking up and smiling'

Amit; kya hua???

Amita: kuch nahi.. aap gaana gaayiye.. O maajhi re'.

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