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Originally posted by: shona136
Tina, i hold my ears, and and do sit ups 🤢...!!! I am extremely soorrryyy for not being able to comment on the last three chapters of this mindblowing and my second favourite story on IF...(sorry the first place has been taken by appyindy's PAWN/ ONS2🤔)...it is a sin on my part for ignoring this for last the three brilliantly mesmerizing chapters, i APOLOGIZE FROM THE BOTTOM OF MY HEART...😭 i was busy like hell the last three weeks, with a quite a few shows, and dance is truly a physically exhausting thing...though i had read the chapters once i got the pm, i simply did not want to write just one or two words of praise as you and DH deserves much much much more than that...!! i will give part of myfeedback to the last three chaps here (tried to keep it reasonalbe as i know three chap review will become very long and might irritate you u). i can only request you to bear with it🤔...!!!
chap-7-i loved seeing the possessive ASR back😉, and arguing with his men to get khushi to the healer, despite knowing the sandstorm coming. nothing seemed to make any sense to him when khushi was concerned, not even the desert which he so very well knew. and again a pang of hurt when he saw khushi refusing to go with and he taking it as her siding against him and getting pissed at that. howhe took it to be natural for khushi to always side with him,😆😃 in such a short span of time. how sweet of her to wait for him to come back and apologize to him so softly😳😳. and she also promised to tell him, to confide in him everything from the next time. how much she trusts him. their soft conversation spread a wave of warmth in me, to see these 2 bonding so close, so quickly. khushi's jealousy at hearing another woman's name from his mouth was cute as well. she unconsciously wanted to be the only girl in his life. and my😃 they held hands and slept, arnav knew khushi would sleep peacefully in his touch. how well they know each other already. khushi's comparison of his horse and arnav, both being mule headed was hilarious😆. good that khushi wanted to impress him for all that he had done for her till now😃. it's nice to see khushi getting used to arnav's touch and being so comfortable around him. the saddle slip was a treat👏, her first uttering of "arnav" sent butterflies in my stomach. arnav had giver her the right to call him by his name. maya's words of fortune telling were very comforting for us😊, khushi should really move forward and accept what her heart wants and that is arnav. khushi ran to arnav , embraced him to be in his arms and how protectively he comforted her throughout and took her to be with her through her medication just like her guardian, maya was right no one can separate them. waiting now for him to give the neckless at the right time...😉😉chap-8its truly wonderful to see khushi and arnav both getting so attuned to each other's touch, and relaxing in the close proximity and presence of the other. hell tey even began to communicate silently and just understand or realise each others shift in emotions and moods in no time, that i guess it was true passion and love is. you will be bound to feel that way once you meet your other half😳. i so feel bad for poor taj, he has to bear all of ASR's heated glares and resisted punches for now fault of his. arnav is so possessive, but he was always like that. i dont think taj has any interest of that type in khusi, but e is just excited to have a new member in their pride (as i feel them to be a lions of the desert😉) and also someone sloe to his age. i hope arnav understands this and does not give him a hard time in his jealousy, but as long as we get to him being all aroung khushi being protective and possessive we welcome anything, i guess taj has to bear it for sometime. khushi did not want him to ga away wile she slept in the hut. the hut front hte beginning gave khusi negative vibes, but that i guess increased because of arnav's absence and therefore she freaked out imagining the baby's cries. as usual arnav was there to hold her and get her relaxed, each time something like this happens it feels like a treat for them, bcs they seem to battle with their desires to be in each others arms and this incidents just give them the perfect opportunity to be close, they never seem to get enough, demanding more. thier causal talks at night are so overwhelming. i loved the way arnav said khushi was beutiful and she actually understood that he meant it for her, and did not even shy out of it. i like this carefree relationship that they share, not backing out from each other. khushi got worried at knowing arnav would not be there with her for sometime, i guess, she did not want to let go of him at any cost. and we got khushi cooking for the pride, how ownderful, looks like she is the lady of ASR's pride. arnav has also disconvered that khushi was equally effeected by him as he was by her. this is good to move forward in their relation. i am glad that shyam got a good treatment from arnav, for even daring to speak out khushi's name let alone say rubbish about her. in no way he could he stand that, and i so hope he gets back his kingdom soom. it tears my heart to see the mighty ASR going frm to door to door ask for assistance to get back what is rightfully his. i hope khushi is the laxmi in his life and brings everything back in his life with her presence. good that arnav did not pay heed to omran's words. good that he does not care, never let her go arnav. see you left her her for a day and she was almost harmed and hurt. even though he considers himself to be not fit for her, i am glad he listens to his heart than mind.chap-9the fore was lit before between them, but now the flames are being fanned. its getting hot. both coming forward as being drawn to each other by strong cables pulling them to the other. heat is at its peak😉😉. khushi only in his white sirt, what a delight for us as well as arnav, and just as she longed for him, he was there for her. the honest admission of their feelings for each other is what i love best about arshi in this story. i am glad that they dont keep it intheir hearts and ponder over it in their minds wasting precious time with each other. both wer aching to be touched and to touch, and finally they gave in to their desires and their body gave away their hidden desires of heart, and hten we get a beautiful kiss☺️ and willing and a tender one. but we get it khushi is new to these kinds of feelings and things so she was sacred and nervous, her mind taking over as she pulled out, but her heart and body fighting to go back to him and finish what had started.😳😳 and arnav realized and decided, they both needed each other and had to stay with each other at any cost, so he would do it the proper way, as he was the mature one. he would make khushi realize they were destined to be together. arnav admits that he longed to kiss for a long time, and will do it again and again. and tere comes a challege between ASR and KKG...wow its been ages since we got such challenges...resisting temptation for khushi, awesome.👏 glad that both did not have an awkwardness after the kissing and agained resumed on beign the casual carefree and comfortable around each, strengthening their relationship even more. i guess both felt cherished,c ared and loved at the other's care and concern with they were devoid of from their childhood. its good that khushi also cares for him equally and that too with an air of right. arnav i guess indeed pushes himself too much. as khushi is now there i guess he can relax a bit. both are tempted but lets see whose resolve breaks first. i hope its khushi...!!😃wow that was something...thank god i got it done, had a burden in my heart...!! hope you didnt get bored and irritated. but i had to let you know atleast some of the unexpressed feelings in my heart for DH...i wont say anything for your writing and all, you know how brilliant you are...!!👏 just hats off and hugs and kisses🤗...and kkep the heat up, i guess start raising it even higher...love U and DH and also SP so so so much...just like arnav khushi i dnt seem to get enough of it...damn good dear...bless you...!!!now waiting for khushi to break her resolve, stop fighting her feelings and go running to her prince...!!!😃 awesomecheers👏
wow😲😃 wonderful analysis hun🤗 yes, this arhi are very much attuned to each other and drawn to the other--soulmates in the truest sense of the word😳 glad u liked it!
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