TAAREY OS- break k baad

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Posted: 12 years ago
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note - all the haters back off from my work...

okkk guys i am again here with a new taarey os i know i am writing so much that too in very short time but kya karu mere dimaag amai aise aise ideas aate hi rehte hai, sp plz adjust karlo...


haa so come to the os as title already suggest that it's after a break up story...


after a break up with rey , taani become a lifeless body , she go back to jodhpur , she break all the contacts with gang and even with swayam too , after a one month she decided to move on her life for her family and give a chance to her singing talent , she participate in voicef india show and she is in final round of V.O.I...

here after a break up with taani he thought that this break up give her chance to focus on her life or she still remain infront of her eyes but hen she left him alone he thought that he made a big mistake of his life he try to contact her , apologise her but her family didn't allow him , when he come to know about her situation he consider himself as a guilty of her all vows , pain and tears , he hought that he is big wrong of her life and for that he never forgave himself , he left the dance and his frnds forever , he laos go to jodhpur to handel his family bussiness in jodhpur , he wnted to alwys around her not as her partner but as her shadow , he is so happy that taani focused on her life and she become popular...

taani- [ shouting] taai ji taauji , naani sa, mai ja rahi hu...

taau ji- itni jaldi...

taani- haa taau ji vo mujhe practice bhi karni hai so isliye jaldi jaan ahi but aap sab bhi time par aa jana...

taau ji- thik hai mera bachha ...

she strat moving towrds the door when her taai ji called her...

taai ji- taani ruko...

taani- haa taai ji ...

taai ji- daahi - shakar toh khati jao...[she fed her curd and sugar ] all the best...

taani- thank you taai ji byeee...

she goes from there , in mid way she stop for taking a blessing of krishna ji , she goes in tampel where rey allredy prayer for he success but she couldn't see him as his back facing her ...


taani- krishna ji plz aaj aap mera sath dena mujheye competion jeetna hai at any cost or aapko toh pata hai kisi ko ye dikhane k liye mai bhi kuch hu mujhe ye copmpetition jeetna hi jeetna hai ...

her melodious voice fall in his ears , he turn back to see her , the sight infront of him making him frooz on his position , his eyes start getting wet , but she couldn't see him as her eyes still closed but when she open her eyes the realiy infront of her which she never want to face in her whole today infront of her , it make her numb , her eyes also starting get wet , the old familiar ached return in her heart , his words start echoing in her ears ...


flashback--------------------------------
rey- taani mai ek aisi ladki k sath apni life spend nahi kar sakta jiski life mai koi gaol hi na ho...

taani - rey aapko jo kehna hai saf - saaf kahiye...

rey- okk taani tumhe saaf - saaf sunna hai toh suno i am breaking up with you...

taani- [ shocked] - what rey aap aisa nhi kar sakte...

rey- mai aisa kar sakta hu kyoki mai nahi chahta ki meriGF ek aisi ladki ho jiska dream sirf mujhse haadi karna ho...

and he goes from there leaving crying and broken taani behind...

flashback end-------------------

taani start moving towards the exit she didn't want to face him , but something stop her yes rey called her from behind...

rey- [ broke voice]------ taaaniii...

she stop at her position , he move towards her and hug her tightly as much as he can , he is totally crying the tears o happiness start flowing from his eyes but she didn't respond after sometime she pushed him...

taani- [ in anger ]- why did you come here ye dekhne ki mai jinda hu ya mar gayi but sorry your wish isn't complete mai abhi tak jinda hu [ he nodded his head in no] wait a minute let me guess kahi tum yaha isliye toh nahi aaye ki mai ab popular hu toh socha ...

but rey cut in her mid , now his eyes reflected a so much pain which is given by her words , he held her by her shoulder his nalis digging in her soft flesh but both of them couln't realise that because their emotions overwhlamed them...

rey- how could you even think taani , tum aisa soch bhi kaise sakti ho , i broke up with you because i want that you focused on her carrer but jab mujhe pata chala ki tum jodhpur hali gayi hamesha k liye toh trust me taani mai aaya tha vaha but tumari family ne mujhe tumse milne nahi diya or jab mujhe tumhari situation k baare mai pata chala toh mujhe laga ki ye sab meri galti hai or maine dance , apne frnds sab kuch chod diya sirf tumahre liye or aaj jitna khush mai hu na tumhe yaha iss mukam par dekh ke shayad hi koi ho or tum aisa sochti ho taani...

taani-- haa rey haa aapne hi mujhe ais asochne par majboor kiya agar aisi hi baat thi th aap mujhse baat kar sakte the mujhe samjha sakte he mai smajhti nahi but aapne toh sidha break up aapne socha bhi tha ki iske bad mera kya hoga jiski puri life aap the usse uski life ne hi naata [ relationship] thod diya kya soch k aapne brek up khyal bhi apne dil mai laaya ...

rey- uss waqt mujhe jo sahi laga taani maine wahi kiya ...

taani- yaa right rey yahi toh baat hai jo aapko sahi lagta hai aap hamesha vahi toh karte hai bina ye soche ki uske dusro par kya sar padega isliye rey ab mai bhi vo hi kar rahi hu jo mujhe sahi lagta hai or mujhe ye lagat hai ki ab aapki meri life mai koi jagah nahi hai...

she goes from there , rey is crying badly , but she almost took a two step away from tempal when a boy come to her and held her wrist tightly...

guy- tum aaj raat k competition mai participate nahi karogi...

taani- mai uss competition mai participate jaroor karungi...

guy- [ he took out revolver from his pocket , keep it on her head ] ---- agar tumne participate karni ki sochi bhi toh mai tumhe jaan se mar dunga ...

taani- mai participate jarur karungi...

now he held her by her hairs ...

taani- save me plz someone save me [ shouting at top of her voice]...

guy- jitna chillana hai chilao but koi nahi aane wala tumhe bachane k liye...[ evil smile]

rey- ladki ko chod de...

guy- hey ladke yaha se chala ja ye iska or mera matter hai...

rey- or mera bhi...

guy- badi chinta ho rahi hai tujhe iski lagti kon hai ye teri...

rey- mai tumhe batana jaruri nahi smajhta fir bhi bata deta hu ye meri zindgi , meri khushi , meri aasu , mera dard , meri saase , meri dhadhkan [heat beat] , meri soul , meri duniya , mera pyaar in short mera sab kuch hai vo...

guy- woo so love ka chakar hai toh ab tu hi samjha isse ki ye participate na hi kare toh iske liye achha hai...

rey- vo participate karegi jarur karegi or tumhe toh mai nahi chodunga...

he start taking a step towards them...

guy- dekh ruk ja tu varna mai shoot kar dunga tujhe...

but didn't stop ..

taani- plz rey aap ruk jaiye...

but he didn't stop...

guy- ruk ja nahi toh mai goli chala dunga [ but rey didn't stop he fired a bullet but it missed and in no time rey snattched the revolver from his hand , pointed towards him...

rey- now ab tum yaha se chale jao varna tumhare liye acha nahi hoga or mera nishana kabhi miss bhi nahi hota...

a guy ran away from there , taani come to rey and hug him so tightly...

taani- [sobbing] - rey. aap thik toh ahi na aapko kuch hua toh nahi...

he broke the hug and cupped her face...

rey- taani relax i am fine dekho mujhe kuch nahi hua ...

taani- rey apko kya jarurat thi ye sab karne ki agar aapko kuch ho jata toh...

rey- taani agar tumhe kuch ho jata toh mai th apne aap k kabhi maf toh kya mai toh mar hi jata meri jindgi sirf tum ho taani sirf tum i love you taani i really do ...

taani- kyo rey kyo kate hai aap muhse itna pyaar ...

rey- kyoki pyaar kiya nahi jata pyaar toh ho jata hai...

both smiled and hug eachother with a lot's of promise in their heart , after that they reach on the venue and taani won the competition , her parents also accept rey and she forgave everyone , come back to mumabi with rey , and helped him to rejoin his paasion , they both become good singer or dancer in a country and a exapmpel of true love to everyone...

ok finally done i really hope ki maine aap sabko jad bore nahi kiya hoga and if you don't like it so plz don't blame me guys because this thought come into my mind and i wrote it here and if you like it so plz don't forgive to hit like button and o comment...😊😊😊


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DesiiiiGirllll thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesme!
I alwayz wantd taani to e a singer!
I was planning a SS on dat too :p
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow lovely update dear!
awwe taani as singer so sweet!😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wow!! That was an emotional OS!! Loved it !!!
Keep writing such works!! :D
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Posted: 12 years ago
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It ws pretty nice dr.I lvd it.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome os. Liked it a lot. Taani as a singer! I too wanted it to happen in the show. Thanks for pm.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice..taani a singer..wow n thnkz 4 d pm..😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wow!! Amazing os! Taani as a singer was awesome!!!!! Loved it! Thnx for d pm! 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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superb just loved it amazing :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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superb os dear
it was emotional n sweet
thanks for this amazing os n pm

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