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Hey Guys!

Hinal here! I wrote this OS in 10 minutes, and haven't proof-read it at all, so please kindly ignore the typos/ grammar mistakes

I randomly thought of this idea, and had to pen it down

Please do comment at the end, and let me know what you thought of it!



The Special Girl OS


Every time I see her, my heart gets butterflies

I fall in love again

Her innocence, her guileless character… She's an angel… My Angel

Her smile makes me feel happy once again

Her laughter echoes through the empty house, radiating it with warmth that was long gone before her arrival

People say you can only fall in love once

But that's wrong…

Obviously this is a different type of love though

Just seeing her in front of my eyes is good enough for me

In fact, having her around me all the time makes me forget about Riddhima completely!

How's that possible when basket was my love, my life, my jaan? I don't know… But it did

This girl was even more special to me, than anything else in the world

And to be completely honest, I didn't even feel guilty about it

How could I?

But should I?

I don't know… I honestly don't…

Sometimes I feel like I should feel guilty, but then I see her again, and I forget about all the doubts in my mind

She makes me feel loved… needed… wanted…

What else could a man want?

Yea, I was THE Armaan Mallik… Owner of the biggest corporation in Asia, but did it really make me feel better? No?

But she… Only she made me feel special

Riddhima used to be able to do that… She used to be able to make me feel like the luckiest man alive… But now, it's my Angel who does…

Wait… you guys know who I'm talking about right?

I don't write posts on blogs often, so I guess in all my rambling, I forgot to introduce you to Angel

Angel aka Pari Mallik… My daughter!

Riddhima, my wife, gave birth to her before leaving our world…

I was depressed, and upset, but Pari would always make me feel better

Her face glowed every time I played with her

She smiled her toothless smile every time I sang her the lullaby that her mother used to sing to her when she was one month old

I don't have any other family, but that doesn't matter because for me, Angel is my life! She is the reason I wake up every day! It is her face that I need to see, and want to see

I hope I haven't bored any of you with this post…

But I just felt the need to share my feelings…

As I sit here, beside Angel as she softly sleeps, I would wish for you to appreciate all that you have in your lives!

My life was snatched away from me a year ago, but luckily, a part of that life was still here with me… My special girl, my special angel, my life.

I don't even want to think about what would happen if even Angel weren't with me

So remember to, "Learn to appreciate what you have right now because God can take all of that anytime!"

And at this point, I would like to officially end my first post on the blog

I hope you got to learn something, and I most certainly do hope that you absorb the underlying message before it's too late!

Take care bloggers, till next time

Armaan Mallik



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dhruvikaluvsKSG thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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RESSS

Holllaaa nautankiii

now my longgg wala replyyy
:$:$:$:$:$:$:$
this was amaaazinggg
after reading this
How's that possible when basket was my love, my life, my jaan? I don't know' But it did
i was like W*F she is writing a ARSH OS like what is wrong with her
:O:O:O
but then this one Angel aka Pari Mallik' My daughter!
made me AWWW
it was sooo sweet
how after Riddhima's death he is living for his daughter
and

So remember to, "Learn to appreciate what you have right now because God can take all of that anytime!"

this statement is sooo truee :)
i can say that becoz u know the reason :)

n now is this lamba comment for u to talk to me again?>????? :O ;(
now byeee
tata see u on fb or txt or whatsapp :P
byeee
ttatttaaa

loveee
sleepyheaddd
Edited by dhruvikaluvsKSG - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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That was so nice OS. The feelings were described very well.
Keep it up. 👍🏼
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice OS . i m arsh fan nd i thought Shilpa is the one who took away his pain but whilst reading i realized its pari . Awww so sweet. I loved it .
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Posted: 12 years ago
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First i was confused that who could be his angel 😕
But then become happy that it was his and riddhima daughter 😃
And sad afterwards knowing that riddhima had died... 😭
Full of emotions...Do write more...Love to read ar stories...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Beautiful OS Hinal...loved it... ❤️
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wow Hinal.. This was super duper awesome.. Mahn this is 3rd OS of yours am reading and you always bring tears in my eyes.. Though i dint cry this time.. But mah eyes got filled with tears.. Keep it up Girl ... Write more... This was A.M.A.Z.I.N.G. 👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
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I'll read it soon and let you know, okay?
basket_101 thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Thanks for the comments guys <3 :)
Will reply back to individual comments soon (:
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Posted: 12 years ago
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My Buddhu Ram, I loved it <3

One tends to think that it's a new woman but yeah it's his daughter. Beautifully written <3

Loved the concept of blog writing :)

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