ARHI FF-THE MIRAGE -Thread 3 Chap-37,p 146

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Dr. Anupama Ramakrishna

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Posted: 12 years ago

#791

THE PURSUIT-28

(THE MIRAGE-II)

"Aap sochbhi kaisey sakhthey hain!"( how can you even think of such things) Khushi was now furious...

" Nai Khushi!Myne tumsey Zabardasthi shaadi ki hain!Ho saktha hain jaaney anjaaney mein...

( I married you by force! So may be I might have unknowingly...)

Arnav never got to finish as Khushi pushed him suddenly making him free her.

Khushi just got up and left in a huff and Arnav stared surprised at her sudden exit!

THE PURSUIT

Somewhere in a busy internet centre in Dadar, two men exchanged two packets! One of the men called a number and said," Ho gaya! Kisey pahunchaana hain?"

The voice on the other end gave him the address!

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Shru9ti

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Posted: 12 years ago

#792

Loved it

Anu d update ws upto our expectations

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rdforfun

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Posted: 12 years ago

#793

hey loved it

i dont know y u didn't feel it is good.

for me it is awesome as usual.

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dsbj

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Posted: 12 years ago

#794

There's nothing wrong with ur update .. Its awesome like always..
I luv da conversation between two luv birds as always.. They really need to talk like dis as much as they can.. Its necessary..
Ohh! Deepu .. Feel sad for him he really luvs khushi that was thouching, i hope u find ur mate vry soon.. And yeah thats great to hear u r also bk in action ..
Holi din main kya hone wala hai ? Muje to dhar lag raha hain yaar ( forgive me if i wrote it wrng in hindi coz i knw only a little)

Well waiting to c wt hppn next
xoxo

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Dimz13

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Posted: 12 years ago

#795

Chapter 28

Can't imagine business tycoon ASR sitting on the floor amidst the unwashed public to watch a show in a stuffy tent...and to top it all amorously courting his reluctant wife...!

Kushi's fear for Arnav is very real for her and is unable to get past it...I wonder what Arnav can do to convince her it's a chance at happiness she has to take...!

What's happening with Mann...very mysterious...and Kushi is his love now..? I thought he was past that...? Why is his family still holding on to the fact that Kushi could have been with Mann...?

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ILoveFF

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Posted: 12 years ago

#796

Discussion of fears may at least provide a channel to find solutions.

This emotional outbreak by both teasingly and sharply was well written.

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shoobie

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Posted: 12 years ago

#797

Loved it👏
Deepu makes an entry! Yeeaahh. I somehow always liked his character too.

A request, could he (Deepu) have a new love interest in this story!