FF: Betrayed by Love: T2 *Note and a teaser page 143* - Page 16

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Posted: 12 years ago


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Posted: 12 years ago
Wokay.. *Rubbing her palms together*
Saavdhaan.. Kadardaan.. Hoshiyaar!!
B2 is here!
Comments will follow, but right now, I want to peck you on your cheek for that dedication.. Thank you for the loving gesture! 😳
Muah!
(Behnawali kisshi!) 😉😆

Wokay.. Moving on..

I know, you know, how much I've been looking forward to this bit.. The day they'd both actually talk!! And now that it is here, I am speechless.. Coz this is waayy better than what I'd imagined it to be..

And please excuse the antennae( They refuse to snap shut this time around!) 😉😆
Shuru se shuru..


because somewhere deep down Arjun knew that he was also to be blamed for what she did. He forgave her for deceiving him and also for what she did but he could never forgive Roshni for her baseless hatred of Priya.

So, he's already forgiven her for having deceived him.. Well, that is the most logical thing to do.. And the 2nd forgiveness will come at the right time.. He will have to forgive her eventually..

Now the most awaited track # 2: Sikky's re-entry.. He is one shrewd and smart man.. I wouldn't be surprised if they remain empty-handed for a while.. Looking fwd to this one, B1.. And I'm sure it's going to be a riot!

An Aha moment right there.. So now that the hard feelings and guilt has been done away with, the next logical step would be them getting back to being the friends, they were once..
Bring on the tug of war, behna.. I'm reserving a front row seat with a bucket of popcorn and lemonade! 😉😃

Aww.. I know, I'm being repetitive, but honestly I love them both a bit more with each passing update.. Swati-Sameer.. Adorable duo and perfect cupids! 😃

Priya narrowed her eyes on her friends; she was sure they were up to something but couldn't for life of her think what it could be.

Swati knew if Priya weren't distracted quickly she would figure out what she and Sam were up to.

Haha.. Tigress alert! I pity Swati at times.. She's going to have to put in a lot of extra hardwork in the future! 😉😆

The cabin scene made me grin widely.. Subtle, just barely there.. They're slowly getting back into their comfort zones, which is the first big step considering them..

Haven't decided yet. It all depends.

Another reminder of just how entwined their lives are.. I'm not sure how Priya would react to it, but yes, she will probably give in; one for Arjun &/or when she feels she's ready to face them.. two, for her friend's sake.. Or the best; both!

Swati pushed her towards the door with a grin. "Your turn."

Haha.. That wass soo typical 'girl-friendish'.. Feels so good to watch them lead a normal life, even if it's just the beginning.. 😃

Tiger-Tigress convo in the balcony: Pat yourself on the back, dearest behna.. That was amazingly done! Really, so subtle, genuine and direct dil se! 👏
The dormant emotions resurfacing and mingling with their turmoil was beautifully portrayed.. Another emphasis on they are the cure to each other's heartaches.. 😃


You can be with someone and still be alone. Ahem! SM alert.. Where are the credits?! 😉😆

Aww.. That little bit of insight into their friendship in the past was cute! Now that I think of it, the dynamics haven't really changed, have they? I hope a day comes when they'll be the thickest of friends yet again, without any guilt, pain or insecurities amongst the trio..

And finally, the most awaited apology! gosh! You must think I'm crazy.. But yes, behna.. Each one of their interactions makes me go all awwie.. Kya karoon, it's the die-hard mohabbatgirl, that refuses to back off!


Priya sighed, "Would you do me one favor Arjun?" She asked softly.

Arjun finally looked at her. "Anything." He said without thinking twice.

Okay! sorry.. 😆 Now, with this done, I can't not hope for the day when the favour is returned.. 😉


"Then you are lot stronger and more courageous than me." Arjun said as he moved close to her and took her left hand in his.

Arjun moved her watchstrap further up her arm and traced the two flowers on her wrist. "This is a perfect example of that."

Haila! Ee ka hui gawa.. Tattoo ka parda fash! Chalo koi nahi.. So the smarty Hotwa has decoded it already!

Arjun didn't have any answer for her because she was right he wouldn't have thought twice about giving up his life for hers, not then, not now.

He finally admitted to himself what his conscious has been telling him for a while now. He loves her with the same intensity and the passion that he had loved her with in the past, but the question is would she have accepted his love then? And would she accept his love now after all that has happened?


Excuse me.. But this calls for a celebration!! And I demand that you take a bow, lady!


Honestly, all of this may seem crazy, but it really feels as if the Hotwa is someone really close to me.. And that his acceptance to himself and musings have delighted me!

OMG!! Do you have any clue as to how many times, I've re-read that last conversation, only to grin each time at the concluding lines.. 😃😆


Fine! OTT Drama aside, yet another brilliant one done and dusted, B1.. This one is being added to my favorite Chapter's list at the moment..

And If I've understood you and your characters well, a lot of smiles and tears are on the way!

Needless to say, do write more soon.. And yeah, thank you for all the bribes and gifts, behna.. Really appreciate it.. 😃😳


Before I shut my trap, here's something for our Tiger, Tigress and you, darling! 😉

Har ehsaas mein tu hai har ik yaad mein tera afsaana..

Do lafzon mein yeh bayaan na ho paaye..



Edited by _Mohabbatgirl_ - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

...I have some connection hamesha second hi aati hun aap dono ke FF main😆😆

To the update it was amazing didiya!
Dont i just love Swati ..and her plans !
So finally Arjun ji ki dil aur dimag ki ghanti baj hi gaya ..and finally realization c dawns upon him ..Thanks heavean for that!!
And finally Priya and Arjun atleasts its a start between them ..but Oriya wouldnt accept it so easily ,,,
And then the impending Sam & Sawti Engagement ..confroting Arjun family ...
U make us wanting so much more !!!!!
Thoda jaldi update karo na
Edited by sips_crazy - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow.. a long lovely post
Sree's bday party and the work for it... good one dear.
loved the way all 3 friends are there worried and caring for each other.
its a good turn
Arjun gets to know that he is still in love... huge move up
Swati and Sam really make a grt pair...
loved it
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome...

arjun realises his love for her...

shree nd chottu...

sam - swathi's engagement...

update soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Really nyc 1.
Thx 4 PM Di..
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
Nothing seems perfect than to get back what one owns !!!

wonderful part !!
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Posted: 12 years ago
di 🤗
thank u fr d double treat wow
amazing
lov d bonding btw trio
swati superb
hope i knw its nt easy
priya make arjun bro guilt free
samswati eng wow
shree bday make arjun priya talk together
hope things get back to its place realy very soon
love u di
tc
hugs
ps. exams sry di fr short coment..!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wokay so here i thank you for this super long wala update...i cant tell u how much i love long updates!...n when it comes from u it all the more better!😊

Well putting in shree's bday was a great idea n perfect opportunity for arjun to clear out stuff with priya!😉

Well sameer n swati like i have repeatedly said make a beautiful pair n i couldnt stop grinning while reading their attempts to get arjun priya talk to each other!...!...well the entire credit of arjun-priya's love story should go to them!😊

I loved the light fun moments the team spent with each other...it was so necessary to change the mood after the truth came crashing down n the team was all so worked up!

Shilpa di u have beautifully penned down sameer,arjun n priya's friendship where each of them keep their friends' happiness before their own...i so want that it is arjun who convinces priya to attend the engagement ceremony at his house in delhi...i know its going to be a tough decision for her but i feel its high time she faces arjun's family!

I absolutely loved the balcony scene...really well written...n the USP of it was the dialogues...brilliant dialogues shilpa di!😃

There was this one dialogue that i felt was beautiful n so true... "you can be with someone n still be lonely"...!

When arjun slided her wrist watch n traced the tattoo on her wrist...my heart was racing.😳😳..!...i don't know all of this kind of indicated that he probably knows faintly that there is more to what happened to priya when her cover was blown!😲😲

I'm glad they had this conversation...its high time he keeps his guilt aside n works towards strengthening their friendship because this what his heart dearly wants n she is his only cure!...!😊

I loved the flashback scene of the trio that u put...it's always wonderful to read about their academy days!

Ahh so finally finally ACP arjun rawte accepts he is still in love with priya...i cant tell u how much i loved that part n i was grinning like an idiot!...!...now that he has realized that his dormant feelings have resurfaced there is just no looking back!😃

I'll be looking forward for more...n things getting even more better between the two!😊

Thanks a ton for the PM di!😊


Edited by ehmmbh_luvr - 12 years ago

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