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Posted: 12 years ago
Hehe kya propose kiya he... 😆 But i loved it nevertheless...u rocked it... 😊
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AWW THAT'S A CUTE AND DIFFERENT CONFESSION😊
BRILLIANT UPDATE DEAR
EXTREMELY SRY FOR D LATE COMMENT
UPDATE SOON N PM ME
THANKS ALOT 4 D PM
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Posted: 12 years ago
kya yaar twists n turns bol kar really excitement badha di tumne n sry 4 commenting late i had pm u d reason 4 being late so hope u understand n ya i hope ki taarey ke beech ab no misunderstandings coz itna to face kiya hai un logo ne ab aur n d3 gang ke aane se hope ki rey ko dheere dheere sab yaad aaye n he doesnt take stress😭😭 n wats say abt vihan n tahira a fab love story yaar really u noe this is my first so longest comment till i remeber on IF coz really u noe i just loved it n ya upar comment mein rey ko lekar zyada possessive ho gayi thi main n ya ofcourse i noe its a story par kya karu dil jo bolta hai vhi type karti hu n ye dil sory mein bhi rey ko sad nhi dekh sakta 😉😉cant help n sorry itna lamba pakane ke liye n update soon ok
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Amazing confession. Really unique and suiting. Aw I was just grinning the whole while. Congo for new laptop. And update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago

awsm cnfsn was superb

but rey nd taani wer missing

updt asap nd pm me

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Posted: 12 years ago
awesom awesom awesom yaarrr!!!!👏
just loved it😊
really
"THE MOST STARNGE CONFESSION OF LOVE"
and the KISS ☺️
tahira is really mad
but still loved the whole chapter, each n every line
waiting for the gang's entry n tahira n viaan's secret relationship
plz update soon😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awwiiee.. Such an adorable confession dii!! Muah!! loved it!! Do update soon and do pm me!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
so sorry for being late at your service guys.
😆
a taareylicious chapter awaits ur attention
[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=mVLdbnUf4I8[/YOUTUBE]
GUYS PLAY THIS SONG WHILE READING THE UPDATE
I WANTED TO SHARE THIS VIDEO AND HONESTLY THIS CHAPTER WAS NEVER A PART OF THE STORY BUT THIS SONG JUST TOUCHED MY SOUL AND I WANTED TO PUT IT SO I HOPE U LIKE IT
ITS COMPLETELY A CHAPTER DEDICATED TO THE TAAREY AND THEIR LOVE INTENSITY

Chapter 27

Taani reached home after having a word with the doctor. She was happy that Rey was recovering but at same time she was tensed too as she was assigned the responsibility to bring the three D's back in Rey's life. She entered the hall and decided to wear a big smile on her face so that Rey's heart was relieved at her happiness. She made her way towards the bedroom but was she was amazed to see that Rey was not there.She checked in the other rooms too but all in vain. Her heart beat suddenly increased, the ominious thoughts started haunting her. She checked the garden and even the baloconies but was shocked that Rey was no where to seen.

Taani : hey Krishna ji Rey kahan chale gaye ?

Mujhe bina bataye , kahin unhe sab yaad to nahi aa gaya ?

Matlab kya wo mujhe chod ke……(tears came rolling down her cheek and she clutched her dress so tightly that her nails almost crossed the layer of her clothing and penetrated in her skin.)

Nahi taani !!!!! Don't u dare say that (she said consoling herself; clutching her hair in despair)

Kahan ho aap Rey ?

She was trembling in fear , she crossed checked all the places again but the result was the same.

The empty house made her remember her past where was left alone amidst all the problems.

Taani: Kaka (she shouted at the top of her voice to make it audible to the world)

Kaka !!!!!!

The servant came running and stood in front of her.Her voice made him terrorized, he was in sweat.

Kaka: kya hua Taani madam ?

Taani: kya hua ?????

Rey kahan hai kaka ?????

Kaka: Rey sir to apne room mein rest kar rahe the .

Taani: Rey apne room main nahi hai kaka.

Main thodi dare bahar gayi thi and I told you that you should take care of him but you neglected your duty and she what is the result.

Her anger crossed all boundaries today.Rey's absence made her go mad in hopelessness and despair.

The servant was too ashamed at his carelessness.

Suddenly Taani's mobile phone rang.

Her heart skipped a beat to see Rey's number on the screen . She was numb; the horrendous thought procedure in her mind made it difficult for her to respond. With great might she pushed all the odd things away and responded to the call. She was quiet to hear Rey's voice clearly ; she wanted to make sure that he was fine.

But again she was taken back to hear a kids voice from the other side.

Kid:hello Taani di !!!!!!!!

Taani was totally out of her mind , she excepted Rey's voice but whatever was happening was difficult for her to understand. Gathering all the strength she said.

Taani: beta aap kaun ??

And yeh to Rey bhaiya ka phone hai na ?????

Aapke pass kaise aaya ????

Rey theek hai na beta ???? (she was gasping for breath)

Kid: aap jaldi se beach par aa jao di .

Its urgent ??????

Taani: (this froze her blood)

Rey theek hai na beta . bolo na !!!!!!

But the call got disconnected.

Taani was sobbing by now , her eyes were red but she didn't have time to react . She quickly drove off to the beach as directed.

She drove so recklessly that the other cars on the road concluded that she had no intensions of living.

Her forehead had sweat traces and the tears from her eyes made a way through her neckline.

She reached the parking area of the beach that was totally vacant as it was quiet late.Her imagination had no breaks , she was trying really hard to drive away the negativity and adapt positivity.

She rushed to the beach , her heart beat was increasing with every passing second .Rey being out of his sight was making it difficult for her to even breath properly.

Suddenly while walking in a haste she noticed something was written on the sand beneath at a distance.

It was far beyond the reach of the gusty waves.

She walked closer to read it. On reading it suddenly she was motionless.

It was heart inscribed in the sad with her name.

And then it was written "MERE DIL MEIN SIRF TUM HO TAANI – REY"

This made her smile admist all the pain and worries. She was now at ease that nothing unfortunate has happened but still there was so much running through her mind and she wanted answers to all this thoughts.

Finally she walked forward and her beautiful feet were caressed by freshly plucked red rose petals.

On further moving on she saw a beautiful candlelight set up with the most beautiful decoration.

But what caught her sight was rey who was standing their with his hands wide open and smiling to welcome his lady love.

Taani rushed to him and hugged him tightly.Rey excepted the same but the intensity of her hug was far beyond his imagination.she was continuously caressing his back,even running her fingers though his hair.Rey was taken aback.

Rey:tum theek ho taani ?????

He was worried.

Taani: (breaking the hug) what is this Rey ?????

Do u even know how scared I was , aap kissi ko bina bataye aise kaise jaa sakte ho Rey?

You didn't think about me even once na, that how the hell will I cope up when I will not see you at home.

And you didn't even tell me or called me to ensure that you were alright.

Her heart was weeping,she was saying all this and sobbing badly.

Taani: aapne mere bare mein ekk baar bhi nahi socha Rey ?

Why did u do all this Rey?

Why did u make me die every second…….

This brought tears to Rey's eyes.

He never ever expected this.

With a very low volume he said .

Rey: " I wanted to Thank You" and he drooped his head.

Taani was numb , she stood their motionless. She was not getting any words.

Taani: But !!!!!!!

She could not say anything ,tears filled her eyes too.

The pain was now getting reflected from both pairs of chocolate brown eye lenses.

Rey: Jab se mera accident hua hai tab se tumne apni life ko enjoy karna band kar diya hai Taani.

Mera har kaam tum apna kaam samjh kar karti ho.

When I was discharged from the hospital I was not in a state to even walk, u supported me then.

My hand had a fracture, you fed me then.You were with me from dawn to endless nights.

Taani was listening to all this, she was looking at Rey who was speaking with his head still drooped.

Rey:sponge bath,medecines,dressings you did it all for me.I was born again taani and u did all my chores without even complaining once.Tumhare pyar bilkul selless hai Taani . I was depending on u for all the thongs dear.

Pehle bhi wo tum hi thi jisne mujhe Kria ko bhulne mein help ki aur mujhe pyar mein yakeen karna sikhaya .

Listening Kria's name Taani got a real set back. She was literally took a step back.

Her eyes started overflowing now. But still she stood there strong for Rey and only Rey.

Rey: now that I am fine main bas tumhe thank you kehna chahta .

And he too could not control and he was too sobbing.

Taani was feeling guilty that she shouted at Rey without knowing his intentions.

But before she could say Anything Rey continued.

Rey: Sorry to hurt you Taani but I never tougt that you will be so terrified. Tum chaho to mujhe slap kar sakti ho,mujhe scold kar sakti ho but I promise I wont repeat the same ever.

Now before he could go further , Taani's hand came in contact with his cheek with great force.

And within a second his hand moved to his right cheek to avoid the pain and looked at Taani wearing a " What" look.

Taani was smirking .

Taani: Kya aap ne hi to kaha ki main aapko slap kar sakti hun so I did it.

And she smiled wipping her tears and driving her sadness away.

Rey could not control and he too smiled while his hand was still at his right cheek that was red by now .
Taani hugged him again.

Taani: I m sorry Rey maine bina aapki baat sune hi aapko itna daanta but I was scared.So sorry and after saying this she even placed a peck on his right cheek.

Ab pain kam hua ? (smirking)

Rey: haan but I wish Kash tumne Lips pe maara hota !!!!!!! (he winked naughtily)

Taani smiled.

He took her face in his palms

Rey: I promise I never ever hurt you again.

And he very softly kissed her forehead.

Taani: chalo ab dinner Karen. I m dam hungry .

Rey: but mera man to kuch aur taste karne ka hai dear !!!!!!!!!!!!!

He said it looking at her luscious lips. She very well understood his intentions and stepped back. But he was too forceful for that fragile body.

He held her waist tightly and pulled her towards himself.

Her feeble body came thrashing down the strong and masculine one.

He again ringed her face and very softly kissed her lips.Rey was Taani's soulmate but his touch everytime gave her a different ticklish sensation.He then advanced for a passionate one to which Taani too responded whole heartedly.

The gushing waves and the silent surrounding made their feelings come out in the form of touch and affection. The kiss lasted for a few seconds an then they both were lost in each others eyes. They didn't even blinck their lashes and were too lost in the intensity of each others love.

But Rey's eyes had a greed today that made Taani shy so she turned to the other side and decided to walk away but soon she felt a hold on her wrist.

It was Rey and her pulls her back .

He placed her long black hair falling on her shoulder to the other side and started placing wet kisses on her bare back. He made taani face him and saw her eyes were closed.He held her face in his palms and kissed her forehead and eyes again . Taani again tried to resist and go but he stopped her by putting his hand on her stomach . Her soul was touched , she had goosebumps all over.

With great might Taani barricaded Rey and rushed to the water. She then started playing and enjoying like a kid in the water while Rey was lost in her beauty and innocence. But soon his trance was broken when Taani splashed the water at him with full force. Rey too took revenge with full tashan.

And then both were soaked in salty water and were over each other enjoying the intimacy and their love.

PROBLEMS TO SAB KI LIFE MEIN HAI BUT DON'T FORGET THAT ITS
ONLY UR LOVE WHO WILL BE WITH U THROUGH ALL THE THICK
AND THIN SO DON'T FORGET TO THANK UR LOVED ONE
FOR BEING THERE WITH YOU AND SUPPORTING YOU ALWAYS.

BECAUSE SACHA PYAR BADI MUSHKIL SE MILTA HAI.

AND TRUE LOVE IS ALL ABOUTCOMPASSION,TRUST AND CARE.
AND NOW HONESTLY I M VERY UPSET WITH SOME OF U BC U R BEING TOO LAZY TO COMNT
SO THIS TYM I WANNA UR COMTS AND LIKES WARNA I LL SERIOUSLY CRY YAAR😭😭😭😭
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Posted: 12 years ago
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I must say that this is what I call an update 👏 you seriously made me cry with tears of happiness ... 😊 and these lines touched my heart ...
😊

Rey: Jab se mera accident hua hai tab se tumne apni life ko enjoy karna band kar diya hai Taani.

Mera har kaam tum apna kaam samjh kar karti ho.

When I was discharged from the hospital I was not in a state to even walk, u supported me then.

My hand had a fracture, you fed me then.You were with me from dawn to endless nights.

and ya these line too ...😊

PROBLEMS TO SAB KI LIFE MEIN HAI BUT DON'T FORGET THAT ITS
ONLY UR LOVE WHO WILL BE WITH U THROUGH ALL THE THICK
AND THIN SO DON'T FORGET TO THANK UR LOVED ONE
FOR BEING THERE WITH YOU AND SUPPORTING YOU ALWAYS.

BECAUSE SACHA PYAR BADI MUSHKIL SE MILTA HAI.

AND TRUE LOVE IS ALL ABOUTCOMPASSION,TRUST AND CARE.


These lines are really true and we should follow this to led a happy and lovely life ... I will always remember these lines and will make it as a rule of my life 😃😊

Edited by -Fam_TaaReY- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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don't cry dear. Here is my comment for u
Loved it to the core. every second passing i was feeling taani's pain and fear more and more.
the pic was awesome.
I was listening to the song and I reached where Taarey was hugging and song was at where male singer was singing "bas tera saath ho Chahe joh baat ho" and coincidently it fitted the scene fully 😃
loved their kiss 😳 and then enjoying in the water
Again loved it all
and sorry for replying late as exams and other stuffs are really making me busy and just wanted to read the update with full time so i can enjoy each and every bit of and yes i did enjoyed it the way i expected 😃
Good job dear 👏
update soon waiting for gang's entry and seeing how it looks when all the Ds joined in your way 😊

Edited by TaareynSwaron - 12 years ago

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