A Sweet Revenge (virman SS) Part 5 - pg 15

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A SWEET REVENGE - (Virman SS)

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Chapter 1 - page 1
Chapter 2 - page 3
Chapter 3 - page 6
Chapter 4 - page 11
Chapter 5(i)- page 15
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A SWEET REVENGE...

CHAPTER- 1

SHORES OF THE HEART

Years passed, the day has come...

"Fare well..."

I am trying to control my emotions from the past 20 minutes...

"Hey, what you are doing there, come" my friend dragged me inside...

The party is on full mood, I can see that, many of my friends are hugging and bidding good bye...

It's really hard to say goodbye, but the circumstances are such that we have no other choice left.

I am least interested in all these things, it doesn't mean that I hate my friends, infact I am searching for someone...

There is really no shortcut to forgetting someone.

I still remember our small mischief in the classroom, teasing each other, laughing out loud on a silly joke, fighting on petty issues, competing on stages, crying over each other's shoulders and lot more which is hidden deep in my heart.

Now we stand on the turning point of our life when we have to move on our different paths.

Saying goodbye can be crippling to the soul; it can kill you.

The memories good and bad are running through my mind.

I picked up my phone, scrolling through my contacts until I landed his number. My finger hovered over the call button, but couldn't make up my mind. I was leaving for London tonight.

Even though I have decided to speak a lot to express my feelings and love to him, I just have not found the strength to tell him yet.

I know it's my own fault, I know I deserve this, but I love him, truly, deeply, madly, sincerely, intensely...

I know you guys are confused...

Sorry for the long speech... I was not a person who uses filmy dialogues, but as you heard, love can change a person.

Yes, I am in love...that too with my lover (really weird na).

I still remember our first encounter.

It's a long story... but a short one...

If you are interested I will tell you...because sharing your feelings with someone can make you feel better...

So guys...I am inviting you to St' Louis college. 2 years back...

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FLASH BACK

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Hi, I am Manvi...

The great Manvi Chowdary...

Bubbly, cute, adorable, intelligent (applicable to sometimes only), loving, caring, friendly and what not.

OMG, enough, so much of self praising na.

I am doing B.tech computer science (second year).

My dad is my only relation.

I love him to the core. He is my best friend too, pampers me a lot.

He is a business man.

About my personal life:

I am single. (but really complicated)

I hate chocolate boys. (But I love chocolates)

I hate book worms (but I love books, only story books...ha..ha..ha..., just joking)

Ok , I think this is enough...

"Hey, Look who's coming?..."

M: "hi Viku..."

Vn: "Good mrng my PG..."

M: "viku..., stop calling me that..."

Vn:" Ok, till u stop calling me Viku... "

M: "Impossible"

Vn: "copycat..."

M: "ha ha ha , so funny."

For your kind information Viku aka Viren Kundra is my best friend and my partner in crime.

Moreover we are family friends.

And I love him so much, he is like my brother.

And he used to call me PG ( stands for pagali, suits me well na...)

I pretend to be angry whenever he calls me PG, but personally, I love that.

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U have no idea how much I love this campus.

On our way to class...

M: dude, do u really wanna go to class?(I asked him frustrated)

Vn: Yes, PG. (he replied me with the most innocent smile)

M: arghhh!... I know why u needs to go?

Vn: then what's the need for such a question? You are again and again trying to prove that you are my PG.

M: u are dead viku...( with deadly glare)

Vn: OMG, escape...

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M: huh...wat a boring class yaaarrr...

Vn: (no response)

M: what Micle is saying?(Micle is our ORACLE professor)..

Vn: (no response)

M: Hey, look at Rohan wat he is doing there?

Vn: (no response)

M: viku , r u really listening to the class?

Vn: (no response)

Manvi called him 2-3 times but no response...

Finally she looked at him..

He is looking lost.

Her gaze move to the direction he is looking at.

M (herself) : wow! Wat a scene...

He is continuously staring at his angel or should I say my best friend Jeevika.

I am totally used with this scenario.

The funniest thing is that, both love each other madly, but not confessed yet, always communicating through eyes.

I don't know what kind of romance is this?

Feel like I'm watching some 60's or 70's movie...

M: (slapping viren slightly)

" Viku darlng.

This is our great ORACLE class. Dou you really wanna change the full form of ORACLE to

" Offline Romance And Chatting With Lovely Eyes" "

Vn: (blushing) Plz... stop it yarr... you never understand...

M: seriously dude... just go and tell that you love her. She is waiting for that. I know...

Vn: I know that.. but I just want to propose her in my own style and I really don't know how? Just waiting for the perfect moment...

M: when u started believing in time and all...(trying hard to suppress my laugh).

Vn: since when I met her...you know she is... ... ... ...

M: "not again!!!!...

Plz don't open ur history book . I am fed up with that.

Plz..."

Vn: PG PG PG...

M: vvviiikkkuuu!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!(he always annoy me with that name, but don't tell him the secret that I love that)

Micle: hey, Manvi .. what's going on there?

" excuse me sir"

Micle: Yes!..

" May I"

Micle: oh, you come

"thank you sir"

Just then, Manvi heard the gasp of many girls.

She looked around. Seems like they have seen some ghost and all, trying really hard to control their breath. Oh no, Jeevi too...

Then Manvi looked towards Micle and try to figure out the situation.

Micle: students, meet your new friend.

All India entrance topper

National chess champion

And more over a good singer..

Mr._________

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PRECAP : Virat's entry and their first encounter.



Edited by Ammu_Darling - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice start
continue soon
plz do pm me
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awsum start!!!
Manvi waiting to confess her luv...but whr z our hero 🤔
Luvd the Fb...Viku n Pg 😆 ...cute names...n lovely bonding...
"Hate chocolate boyz but luv chocolates...hate bookworms but luv rreading books" 🤣 ...really luvd these lines...
Dont think this z ur first piece of work...coz u write really well..⭐️
Virmanz first encountr in nxt update...really looking frwrd fr it...
Plzz cont soon...wud luv to recieve pm fr ur future updates!!! 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: jia123sagar

awesome start

plz cont soon


thanku dear
yes i will
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: keertu

nice start continue soon


thanks. . .:-)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: nisha_virman

nice start

continue soon
plz do pm me


thank u :-)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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👏 superb start_ lvd it do continue son
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: alicemath

Awsum start!!!
Manvi waiting to confess her luv...but whr z our hero 🤔
Luvd the Fb...Viku n Pg 😆 ...cute names...n lovely bonding...
"Hate chocolate boyz but luv chocolates...hate bookworms but luv rreading books" 🤣 ...really luvd these lines...
Dont think this z ur first piece of work...coz u write really well..⭐️
Virmanz first encountr in nxt update...really looking frwrd fr it...
Plzz cont soon...wud luv to recieve pm fr ur future updates!!! 😊


Thank you so much.
I'm glad that you like this.
Will surely PM you.
And our hero will appear in the next update.
Take care:-)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow AMAZING love the way u wrote this
its really entertaining n funny
the way manvi itroduced herself is so manvish
like hate choclate boyz but loves chocolate,hate bookworms but like books,single but complicated😆
awww n love pg n vikuu's friendship *partners in crime*😉
n vikuuu n jeevs 70's romance🤣
Ofline Romance And Chatting with Lovely Eyes *ORACLE*🤣🤣
now i get it why vikuuu wants to attnd the class😛
n virats entry n he is also one big acheiver entrance exam topper, national chess champ wow
plzz cont soon love to read further

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