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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: saneha85

Hi... Sweeti.. HI SMITA

Amazing update... THANK YOU
loved the every part ... GLAD YOU DID
specialy the last line where uday said that he wants to have parthana and all...😆
and now tell me rohan ko kaun pasand aai../ LOL... YOU WILL FIND OUT SOON
Kimmy or mayanata..😕
please update soon... UPDATING THIS WEEK
really soon ... 😉
thanks for the pm. U WELCOME
love
smita THANK YOU SMITA FOR THE LOVELY COMMENT

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: PrincessZaneb

amazing update di THANKS ZANEB
loved it i really want to knw who gudiya is YOU WILL SOON
cant wait till the next update

THIS WEEK...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: dumas

AWESOME UPDATE LOVED IT BEAUTIFULLY DONE CAN'T WAIT TO SEE WHAT SHE WILL DO WELCOME BACK THANKS FOR THE PM

THANKS SWEETY FOR THE COMMENT. GLAD YOU ENJOYED
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sanah12

It was a mindblowing, superb and an awesome update. Loved it to the core. Love kimmy and manyata's bonding. Uday is slowly falling in love with ms innocent personified. Do continue soon n thanks 4 the pm.

THANKS FOR THE LOVELY COMMENT SANAH. GLAD YOU ENJOYED...😉
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: anushruthi

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edited 😉

Warning extra long comment for the looong update 😲😆😉


First of I apologise for this extremely delayed editing
I planned on editing my comment on saturday but things dont
usually tend to work according to one's plans ...
NO NEED FOR APOLOGIES ANU... YOU ARE SO RIGHT HINGS CERTAINLY DONT WORK OUT ACCORDING TO ONES PLANS... LOOK AT HOW LATE I AM IN REPLYING😆😉😕

Coming to chapter 5 of this amazing FF
It was beautiful 😳
as always wonderfully written
You truly have a gift for writing
AWW ANU... THANKS FOR THE COMPLIMENT


The beginning was very insightful
Seems Udayveer has a past filled with bitter memories ... YES HE DOES
wonder who the little girl was ... YOU KNOW WHO SHE IS 😉 YOU AND THAT INTUITION OF YOURS😆
Was that Gudiya ? Just an intuition 👏 AHH ANU AS ALWAYS QUITE THE DETECTIVE...




Texting part was well written THANK YOU
fun to full of teasing and humor 😆
Ur thoughts in within the brackets were a great addition 😉
it truly spiced up the Humor LAUGHTER IS AN INTEGRAL PART OF ANY STORY...



I agree with Kimmy and VJ Bhai
Vicky does seem to have a crush on M
Poor guy is smitten ... HAAN LOL



Kimmy seems like a pretty good talent SHE DOES ...😉
they way U describe her talent and work
it seems she is a wonderful designer MOST DEFINITELY
I hope she gets a job worthy of her SHE WILL😉


Unnati and VJ Bhai seem to have a past ... MMM ONCE AGAIN ANU YOUR INTUITIONS😆
coming to think of it almost all the characters seem to
have a past which is dark and secretive YEP...😉
hope all will be revealed as the story progresses
YES IT WILL
All of us have a past VERY TRUE ANU
most people say v shud forget the past and bury it
The future is uncertain and stop dwelling on it too much
we should live in the present
But I disagree
Past is Past
but whn dey say 4gt it shud v 4get the happy memories ?
The sweet ones along with the bitter ones ?
Just as a coin has two sides every has a past that is both
good and bad
We should cherish the sweet memories and learn from bitter experiences
I also believe in the beauty of my dreams
it is necessary to dream and work towards achieving it
The future is important
but the present is equally significant ...
Just something for u to ponder on
WOW ANU VERY INSIGHTFUL AND I SHARE THE SAME SENTIMENTS... THE PAST WHETHER GOOD OR BAD SHAPES UP AND BECOMES A MAJOR PART OF YOUR LIFE. HOW YOU REACT AND WHAT YOU LEARN FROM A GOOD OR BAD SITUATION MAKES YOU STRONGER PERSON

All the scenes were fabulous THANK YOU
poor M doesnt knw how 2 react 2 a compliment UNFORTUNATELY
Rohan Uday convo was perfectly written 😆
It was too good GLAD YOU ENJOYED
UV 's past ... 😭
poor UV he suffered many hardships HAAN BECHARA HAS BEEN THROUGH ALOT
Car scene was brilliant THANK YOU
I suspect Mrs.Malhotra had a hand in kimmy not getting de Job YEP THATS FOR SURE
Wonder IF UV will offer her a job ... MMM PATA NAHI AFTER ALL DOESNT THE FASHION HOUSE LVES RING A BELL??😆

Cant wait for UV to get his special delivery 😉 LOL...


I love the way U give pay attention to each and every character THANK YOU, IN ESSENCE ALL CHARACTERS PLAY A VITAL ROLE IN CREATING THE STORY AS A WHOLE
It seems all of them have a significant role YES THEY DO
Loved the chapter very Much AWW THANK YOU

Cont ASAP... WILL TRY TO

THANK YO ANU... FOR THIS LOVELY INSIGHTFUL COMMENT... MISS YA LOTS.
HUGS

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: iluvmanveer

well, umm... hi shahi! WELL UMMM ... HI SANJU😉

heheheee how r u? ... THEEK HOON AUR TUM?😆
well finally i took it on my mind. i cant see ManVeer and PriyAsh and ofcourse u my dear in pain LOL... 😆 EK NUMBER KA NAUTANKI, THANKS FOR UNRES
i wonder abhi tak tumne mere khilaf koi riot kaise nahi nikali! HAAN IM SURE MANY WERE GOING TO START😆
well i am the culprit! any punishments? NAHI ...YAAR YOUR ARE COMMENTING NOW ITS MORE THAN ENOUGH
u r sucha sweetheart! u always reminded me! HAAN VOH THO MEH HOON... TUM MEH BHOOL NEH KI BIMARI HAI NA SO OBVIOUSLY HAVE TO REMIND YOU... LOL😆😆
well i have promised to all writters, that no more i'll be lazy. i'll improve, n i am doing so! THATS GREAT SANJU... IMPROVING I SEE
well as usual, ur update was awesome! THANK YOU
uday ke saath jo kuch bhi huya, bura huya! no one should be treated like uday was in his childhood ... SAD REALITY OF LIFE, MANY KIDS GO THROUGH VARIOUS TRAUMA'S AT A VERY YOUNG AGE
bechara, i feel sad for him! ME TOO LEKIN IT WAS NEEDED TO SHOW JUST HOW EMOTIONALLY DETACHED HE IS AND WHY...
manyata must be really looking stunning HAAN FOR SURE 😉
as usual kimmy is great! she plays a lovely cupid! LOL... UNKNOWINGLY SHE DOES ALOT AS YOU WILL SEE IN FUTURE UPDATES
i also wana eat the parathas with uday! tell manyata n kimmy to call me over when uday comes! lolz... SURE WILL DO. WILL HAVE MR SINGH CHECK HIS DIARY AND CALL KIMMY AND M OVER TO URPLACE😉😆
well rohan to apne bro ko follow kr raha hain! HAAN NAHI TOH
m damn sure vijay and unnzie hav a connect! MMM
hope kimmy becomes a fashion designer!! YES SHE WILL
u depict every relation perfectly shahi! u rock dear! THANKS SANJU
u know i am the most eager person on earth for ur updates,. (though i dont express my eagerness) LOL... HAAN HAAN MUJHE PATA HAI
i know u have no scope for updating this weekend!...
i doubt wether u can write on weekdays due to office.
so atleast next weekend? THIS WEEKEND.. HOPEFULLY
or rather take ur time! i and my eagerness will try an sit patiently on the couch and wait for u to put up ur update. till then atleast give us two some popcorns(i mean promos).. LOL😉😆
we will fill our appetite with that!
luv u loads
hugz! LUV YA TOOO SANJU
muuahhh TIMES 2.
LOVED THE COMMENT SANJU.. HUGS

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MUAHHH 😆😆😆







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Hi Guys... Hope you are all well😉... Well i am finally feeling much better and made the time to update, lol even think up a new story... LOL I TELL YOU ( I have my moments) Thank goodness for the public holiday here yesterday managed to do alot of catching up .. sigh and then there is work... will certainly next week will be a busy one for me. Time is going by so fast hey, cant believe we already in the fifth month of the year... yes we still have time to set those goals and try to achieve them right... ok and now we cant forget the quotes right. This is what i came across recently... VERY WISE WORDS...
IF YOU FAIL AND FEEL THE PAIN, THAT IS A GOOD SIGN
IT SIMPLY MEANS YOU ARE GIVEN MORE CHANCES TO TRY AGAIN...
AND IT ALSO MEANS... YOU ARE HUMAN!!
IT TAKES COURAGE TO GROW UP AND BECOME WHO YOU REALLY ARE
BE OPEN... AND THEN THE TRUTH FOLLOWS...
THANKS TO ALL WHO LIKE AND COMMENTED ON PREVIOUS CHAPTERS AND TO ALL THOSE WHO WERE EAGERLY WAITING FOR THIS CHAPTER...
CHAPTER 6

W*F IS WRONG WITH ME? WHY AM I STILL THINKING ABOUT MS INNOCENCE PERSONIFIED, ITS BEEN ONE WEEK SINCE I SAW HER LAST AND SERIOUSLY ITS NOT LIKE SHE IS ALL THAT.. SURE SHE WAS EASY ON THE EYES, BUT I HAVE SEEN AND BEEN WITH FAR MORE BEAUTIFUL WOMEN SO WHAT IT IS IT ABOUT HER THAT'S SO ALLURING? IS IT HER TRANQUIL AURA? THE WAY SHE LOOKS STRAIGHT THROUGH ME? OR THE PAIN I SEE SUPPRESSED IN THAT INNOCENCE?''

GET A GRIP SINGH, ITS NOT LIKE YOU TO LOSE SLEEP OVER A WOMEN..NO GIRL.. URRGHHH.WAIT DID I JUST URRRGGHH LIKE A 16 YEAR OLD' F*&K WHAT IS HAPPENING TO ME. WHATEVER I NEED A SHOWER'.AND I NEED TO GET A AWAY FROM HERE FOR A FEW DAYS.. THIS GIRL HAS SERIOUSLY MESSED WITH MY HEAD. IT WOULD BE NICE TO VISIT MUM AND DAD FOR A FEW DAYS SEEING AS HOW THEY ALWAYS FUSSING OVER ME STAYING OVER' AND HOW I HARDLY SPEND TIME WITH THEM AND NOW THAT CHOTI AND ROHAN ARE AROUND' YES THAT'S EXACTLY WHAT I NEED'. REMINDER TO FIND OUT FROM RAMSINGH HOW THAT LITTLE GIRL AND HER DAD ARE DOING'.

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'No ways' am i ever going to use something like that kimmy'

Kimmy looked at jai and both rolled their eyes, getting manyata kapoor to dress was like rocket science'. (If she only knew just how beautiful she really was but try telling that to her'Besides getting her to dress was under false pretences of what kimmy and jai really had in mind)

'Jiji this dress is so classy..and you will look like a total babe in it''

Manyata shot jai one of her deadly glares' ' I DON'T WANT TO LOOK LIKE A TOTAL BABE, I AM PERFECTLY HAPPY JUST THE WAY I AM'

'Kya yaar, we are reaching the end of tertiary. I mean after this we go into our prospective careers, we will never get this opportunity again. We have two more papers and then starts our new journey, you have never dressed up even in high school and now we will be graduating' you owe me this much''

'Owe you? After your stunt last week Kimmy' ' Mr singh ,aunty makes the best paratha's'

Manyata mimicked kimmy's way of talking last night while jai burst out laughing

'Mr Singh, jiji are you talking about the Mr Udayveer Singh..the hottest, youngest ceo of Singh Media House and Singh Enterprises ?'

' Yes..the SAME ONE JAI.. dreamy and gorgeous.. Haiyye'

Manyata rolled her eyes listening to kimmy describe him while jai was on the verge of fainting

'Tum me pata hai kimmy, if there was an Indian version of Vampire Diaries I can soo see Udayveer Singh as gorgeous Damian' ' she stared into space dreamily

' Tum dono sach mein pagal hai'

' There is no need to get so excited jai, you are almost has hyper as kimmy when she see's him aur haan one more thing' he is not hot, RATHER COLD (lol really manyata) young maybe and definitely not eligible''

BOTH JAI AND KIMMY

' KYA? '

' Kya kya' '

'Like SERIOUSLY JIJI I have no words for you' I mean you were so lucky you got the opportunity of a lifetime, you not only met Udayveer Singh, he brought you two home and wants a special delivery of moms paratha's and you don't find him goodlooking at all. I mean you are not at all in awe of him? When are you taking the paratha's, I too want to come with''

'NO I AM CERTAINLY NOT TAKING HIM PARATHA'S AND NEITHER ARE YOU JAI SO WIPE THAT DREAMY EYED LOOK OFF YOUR FACE and for your other question'why should I be in awe of him??he is a human being after all. Not some god and you stop worrying about Udayveer Singh and his looks and Damian Vampy whatever his name is, focus on your studies'

' JIJI he is not Damian Vampy.. He is DAMIAN SALVATORE' please don't insult him like that'

She rolled her eyes folding her arms pretending to be hurt ' ( jai could tolerate many things but not a word against her Damian'.lol you would swear damian is jai's boyfriend)

While manyata looked at jai shaking her head pitifully. Yeh larki' no comment (Jai looked so comical and listening to her nonsense that she makes seem so surreal' lol. Priceless)

'Manyata sach mein you need glasses..how on earth can you not find him hot? I mean not just hot, he is smoking' his eyes' haiyye'

Manyata flinched when she heard kimmy say that ..as she remembered his penetrating gaze. Kimmy noticed manyata's reaction when she mentioned his eyes'.

'You have noticed them' oh yes you have and they have the same effect on you..'

Kimmy looked at manyata smirking like she hit the jackpot

'What nonsense why would I notice his eyes? And what effect? Anyways enough with this Udayveer Singh topic, It was embarrassing enough having him drop us home that night and now to listen to you two'

' hmmm was it really that bad seeing him again now babes? Say what you may he certainly is a true gentleman for not only bringing us home safely but for staying quiet after you so rudely told him off not one but two times and still you say he is self conceited and whatever else you say about him, that was not very nice yaar, Sach mein he is a good person' my instincts are never wrong'( lol)

Manyata gulped she did feel bad for being rude, it was not in her to switch people off but with him she did it repeatedly after apologizing for the interview rudeness. Even though she wouldn't admit it she was quite surprised herself when he said nothing back to her. (No man and I repeat no man has ever gotten to her so badly like a certain Mr Singh(lol bechari Manyata)

'Oh kimmy please' don't you start I know very well about your instincts'(lol well we all know about kimmy's instinct never being wrong Manyata)

' Really jiji you need to apologise to him''

' No jai, she has apologized before, she needs to actually mean it'

'Why exactly should I apologise and why are we having this Udayveer Singh conversation again? ' We have the last two papers left and the last thing I want to focus on is the farewell party, me dressing in some Skank like dressand Udayveer Singh being in Vampire Diaries'( lol manyata manyata)

Kimmy turned on her puppy dog face and pretended to be hurt as jai winked at her deciding to play on manyata's emotions. (these two have a degree in acting'lol)

'LIKE SERIOUSLY JIJI' (lol was waiting for that) STUDY, STUDY, STUDY. You have two papers left of which you have studied and studied. Literature and thesis has always been your forte infact' you aced every paper so far' when are you going to unwind and jee le zaara, (which reminds me of that awesome song from talaash' jee le zaara, jee le zaara, kheta hai dil jee le zaara, aye humsafar, aye humnawa' aa pas aa jee le zaara ..ok sorry got a bit side tracked tracked there jiji'.lol jai) vijay bhai's engagement is coming up and you are not even excited, poor kimmy wants you to rock at graduation and concert and make it memorable for you guys' but NOOO god forbid jiji actually having a good time.'

'You are right jai, manyata doesn't want to do anything else apart from study and I know she wont even be coming for the graduation party neither will she take part in our farewell concert' How can I expect her to help me now? Never mind I wilI find some other way to do the photoshoot, I mean Franco is doing me a huge favour. I just hope it all goes well.. Lves is giving me a second chance thanks to my guardian angel' (whoever that is) I cant mess this up'.But I cant trouble manyata anymore, jai rather I just leave and let her study'.'

Kimmy winked at jai as they tried to hold back their laugh. They knew manyata like the back of their hands, she only put on the tough girl act. Inside she was soft and so very sweet (but don't ever mention that to anyone) she did not like hurting anyone's feelings and making them sad least of all kimmy' gosh i have done some of the most outrageous things only for her'and this is for kimmy's dream' so i could play model for a photoshoot right? oh god kimmy what if they reject your designs because I spoil them'..

'Sorry kimmy, I would definitely help If I could, chale lets go down you could use some of moms paratha's now'

As they both were about to leave..they walked slowly knowing full well and waiting for it'.

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' Kimmy, Jai Rukho'

(and like clockwork ' lol) they wanted to high five but continued to pretend to be hurt and serious and turned around simultaneously

' Kya Hua?'

' Exactly how many photo's does Franco need for your design portfolio? '

And they both highfived and ran and hugged manyata

' yay jiji, I knew it you would never disappoint us'

Manyata's deep brown eyes glistened as the three shared a hug, she was very worried and didn't want to ruin kimmy's second chance, after Mrs Malhotra had spoken to management at Lves and made certain that kimmy's designs should not be accepted, amazingly enough Lves was bought by some wealthy hot shot for his sister and they want to have a look at new talent and new designs and brand into the market with a bang'' so kimmy gets a chance and this time she had to get through while manyata was still lost in thoughts about the photoshoot and how awkwardly weird she will be in them, kimmy nudged her out of it'.

' Babes one more thing, tomorrow I have booked you for a day at the spa, full on facial, massaging, threading'the works. You are going to rock the photoshoot'

Manyata's eyes widened in shock'. '' KYA??''

Jai and kimmy highfived and dragged her arm downstairs before she could even think of protesting

(Lol she really didn't know what she was getting herself into.. well got to love jai and kimmy)

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'Well how long was that going on for? What do you mean more than friends? So where the F*&k is he now?'

'FIND HIM'.'

Uday was livid, placing his cellphone on the table. The more he learnt of Unnathi's friend in particular that suddenly upped and left, the more he was convinced the son of gun played a big part in her super reserved mode'. He had been observing her lately and something was just not right, infact after that chadda's function she seemed even more distant' rest assured choti I will find out what is troubling you or more like who could have made the mistake to trouble UDAYVEER SINGHS SISTER

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Komal was in a daze ever since she had received the phone call earlier, and after going to the hospital left her more traumatised and emotionally drained. She had never thought she would see him again let alone in these circumstances. Her mind was all over the place, she didn't even hear the girls making their way down to the kitchen, nor did she even realize that she had switched on the stove'. Apart of her wanted to pretend that it was not true and some kind of a mistake but she knew the truth, no matter the circumstances and even though he had walked out on her and the kids, she loved him..he was still her husband and the father of her kids. She couldn't forget the moments they shared together and she would never wish him any harm or want any downfall on his part but could she do what he had asked her? Did she have the strength?

'Mom'.'

'Maa , watch your dupatta'

She was jolted and equally shocked as manyata pulled her dupatta and was stomping off the small flames while jai switched off the stove.

' Kya hua ma? What were you thinking'.

Komal walked out still lost in her thoughts leaving manyata's question unanswered as jai looked at kimmy and back at manyata..

Manyata knew that look, she also saw that her mom had been crying, her puffy eyes gave her away. Something was definitely wrong'

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Ok guys that's the end of chapter 6… do let me know what you think of it and hit the like button. Kindly excuse any spelling errors.

I was utterly disgusted and enraged to see in the news once again the brutality and dehumanizing treatment of young innocent girls subjected to rape and torture, I CAN NEVER UNDERSTAND THE EVIL THAT LIVES IN A TORMENTERS MIND, after the rape case that made headlines of the girl in india that was raped in a bus and had succumbed to her injuries late last year…. NOTHING HAS CHANGED, HER LIFE IS GONE IN VAIN, ITS STILL HAPPENING AND EVEN WORSE THAN BEFORE… IT IS SAD AT THE STATE OF THE WORLD THESE DAYS… I KNOW THIS IS DEEP BUT ALSO VERY RELEVANT AS IT HAS BEEN PLAYING IN MY MIND…

Lets end on this note…..

WE ALL SHOULD HAVE ONE ULTIMATE GOAL ON EARTH:

THAT IS TO LEAVE A LASTING LEGACY AS BETTER PEOPLE THAN

WHEN WE CAME AND TRY IN A SMALL SIMPLE WAYTO MAKE THE WORLD A BETTER PLACE FOR

THOSE COMING AFTER US… WHAT WILL BE YOUR MISSION REPORT WHEN YOU MEET YOUR MAKER??

Have a great weekend ahead, stay safe.

Hugs

Shahi….

Edited by Shahista01 - 12 years ago

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NICE👏GOOD👏GREAT👏LOVELY👏

SUPERB👏AMAZING👏BEAUTIFUL👏
WONDERFUL 👏 FANTABULOSE 👏
WELL WRITTEN 👏

update was excellent shahi.👏loved it a loads.😃

so uday cant stop thinking of manyata.he found

manyata as innocence personified with tranquil

aura.manyatha noticed udays chocolatebrown

eyes😉.aag tho dono taraf lagi hai.😆even if dey

dont admit it.kimmy manyatha and jay teasing

and pulling legs each other was very cute.😊

i think now brijraj is in mental asylum.now he got

punishment for his bad deeds.very good.👏

ie y komal is sad 😭who was dat small girl uday

talking about.ithink its gudiya.and something is

cooking between unnathi and vijay bhai.uday is

possessive brother.poor vijay bhai😲🤣


all in chappy was fabulose.loved every bit of it.👏

cant wait.try to update as soon aspossible.

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Edited by anjuroopak - 12 years ago
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superb work
excellent story
keep it up
well done👍🏼

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