ASYA ' wo humsafar tha '

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Posted: 12 years ago

😛hey lovely QHIANS , i am a silent reader of this forum ... but after watching asad ahmad khan n miss. farooqi ,,,, i just could nt control myself for penning down .. some of my random thoughts ...

its a story about asya ,, with a different perspective ... hope you ppl will like it ... and yup i picked up the tittle from one of my favourite pakistani show .

" bicharte waqt un ankhon mein thi hamari gajal ,, gajal bhi wo jo kisi ko sunaii na thi ,,

wo HUMSAFAR tha magar us se humnavayii na thi "

prologue

zoey ... zoey ... " cant you atleast think over twice about your idea ,, still i am not able to understand ,, why all of a sudden you have to go to india " and wo bhi without asking anwar bhai ... exclaimed a agitated asiya ...

oh ho meri jaan .. stop worrying about me ,, this month i am going to step in my tweenty ,,,, so teens are over babes ... and what should be better than celebrating it with my dreamland visit ... and jahan tak raha jiju ka sawal ...

to you ko apne bhaijaan ke bare mein mujhse jyada pata hai... replied a calm zoya ...

i would still say zoey ... its nt a good idea .. you have never been there ,, you don't know a single thing about sustaning or should i say surviving in india ... i think .. just stop thinking about your adventure trip and we can go anywhere ,,, whereever you want ...

ok ,, ashuu .. enough of this arguement ... kal batein karte hai is bare mein ... i am off to sleep ... saba khair ...

zoey ,, hear me out ,,, you sleepyhead ... uuu ...

asiya made a face and switch off the lights cause she very well knows ... ye uski zoya thi ,, jiske kano par bhi zoo nahi rengni thi ....

next morning ..

trinnn ... oh god not again .. zoey can you please stop your stupid landline alarm ... please you idiot let me sleep ...

hey asyiaa there is a voicemail .. hey asyiaa there is a voicemail ...

stoppp it ...

zoey ,,, she throws a pillow at the side bed ,, but no responce ... she woke up with a screech ,,,,

and got the biggest shock of her life " no zoey on bad and a voicemail on her phone ... "

this is going to be a long day ... not again zoya farooqi ...

😊😊😊

hope you guys are in a mood to throw juta chappal ... most welcome ... and i just don't know should i continue or not ...

n yup ,,, my sincere apology for any grammatical mistakes 😛 pardon me

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Posted: 12 years ago

i know ,, i am not good at writing stuff but please bear with me... here is first part .

ch1

so here it is , a long and creepy voicemail of our miss. zoya farooqi ..

good morning jaan ..

i know tum ab bhut hi jyada gusse mein hogi ,, and you must be tearing down your dupatta in the process ,, stop it ashi usne kya bigada hai tumhara .. .

main india kyun ja rahi hoon .. ye tumhe pata hai ,, but i know u 'll again say " zoey its not a good idea"/

kyun you three musketers ko aisa lagta hai ki ,, i couldnt do it alone .. kya main ye sab handle nahi kar paoongi ... but now i had enough ..

ashiyaa ,, wahan meri jindgi hai ,, india is a place where ammi found her love , its place of my birth .. meri jadein hain wahan .. fir bhi na jane kyun tum , aapi n jiju mujhe kabhi wahan jane nahi dete ..

n mujhe to ab aisa lagta hai ki sayad gunaah kar deti hoon main ,, whenever i tried to bring you guys inro this topic ..

so i thought aab ab decision lene ka samay aa gaya hai ...

janti hoon kya kar rahi hoon ,,, kaise karungi ye pata hai .. but itna i know ki INSA-ALLAH sab acha hoga ..

tum hi kahti ho na ...

" khudi ko kar buland itna ki ... " what ever i forgot rest ... ( stop smiling )

so i can see you forgave me ... to to to ...

i am extremely sorry ,,, jaan i have taken your CREDIT CARDS as hostage .. coz agar maine apne cards use kiye ... jiju will come to know about it .. n for god sake .. i don't want to turn my dream into nightmare ...

nnn ..

dnt worry about me .. i'll contact you when i ll reach there .. allah hafij

tumhari zoey ( naam to suna hi hoga ) ..

asyiaa was listening to all of this , she sighed n spoke to herself ... you even don't know zoya ki what you are going to get into ... but i 'll save you like i laways did in past ... bhai will not know ,, atleast for one month to bilkul nahi .. jab tak wo switzerland mein hai ...

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" hamiasto - hamisto- hamiasto ... what ever ... "

to ye hai india ,, kisi king ne kya khub kaha tha ,, jannat yahin hain , yahin hai , yahin hai ..

ab zoey get back to work darling ... thought zoya .. she was trying to adjust her luggage in the cab when she got a call ... flashing JAAN at her cell phone ..

" are kya tum to sachii ,, mayke me chut gay bivi jaise behave kar rahi ho ... chuckled zoya n told to asiya ...

" hello queen victoria .. yhan to bhalai ka jamana nahi hai .. maine teri help karne ko phone kiya & tu mujhe hi suna rahi hai ... koi na.. goodbyee .. tu khud hi kar apni DEKH-BHAL " ... replied furious asiya ..

" hey ashu .. tu to bura maan gayi .. " khair bol kya baat hai ..

" zoya . do u remember about dilshad phoophi , why don't you stay @ her home , i know you went to bhopal .. n india ki condition dekh kar mujhe lagat hai ... you better should stay there for your own good " pleaded asiya .

" idea bura nahi hai ashu .. you are a swthrt ,, okz massage me her phone number and address . "

" that is the problem , i don't know that " asiya sounded like a puppy ..

" WHATTT D ... ashu ,,, now you are suggesting me a way and blocking it by yourself .. what you are upto " angrily replied zoya ..

" see , i can tell you that , dilshad phoophi son owns dilsaad construction, he is a well known bussinessman of bhopal .. find him .. and he will lead you to phoopi ... " no wif you want you can thank me...

whatever //// i 'll try to search him down .. n yup thanks .. i am getting late and the bhaiay of cab will charge me for killing hi stime so .. khuda hafij ...

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so here is first part , hope you ppl will find it bearable ..

i'll update later

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Nawel

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Posted: 12 years ago

Assalam arleykum :-)

Will read it later in sha Allah. I loved Humsafar, and now crazy lol about Qubool Hai.

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Posted: 12 years ago

ch-2

zoya started walking down to see that their was no cab and her whole luggage has been stolen leaving her with only her ipad and cell phone in hand ...

she yelled on top of her lungs , but there is no use now ,, so this is what asshi warned me off , what should i do now .. i don'ty know anyone here , deserted on a lone street , in middl eof nowhere ...

is se achi suruat kya ho sakti hai zoey , she slapped herself in her mind... " whats wrong with you allah miyaan ... " what should i do now ...

you actuaaly got m einto a big trouble and alas i don't have a way out .. what should i do ..

oh god , i have to make a plan to reach city , why this state gov. has to make airport out of city .. can't they make it just like newyork ... blah - blah -blah ...

she was talking to herself so busily , that she might ignored the SUV coming in the way ...

creeeccchhh

the SUV halted with a screech ,, WHAT THE F*** ... ? who the hell wants to die today ... a man in his tweenties barged out right from the black metal piece ,, who hardly has the demeanour of talking politely with strangers thought zoya ...

hello don't you have any sense ho wto walk on roads , you stupid college girls, filmo ne ap sabka dimag khrab kar rakha hai .. mohtarma .. filmo mein accidents me you could meet your mr. perfect , not in real life and by the way apko meri hi gadi mili tha apna experiment karne ke liye ...

quoted the man in black with frustation.

oh hello , mr. black whatever you are a vampire , werewolf or c-grade hero .. mujhe koi shaukh nhai hai marne ka ,, and don't you dare to call me college girl ,, main ebahi apna graduation complete kiya hai computers me MIT se ...

and agar apne gaur na farmaya ho to apko bata doon aap sadak ke wrong side se aa rahein teh ...allah miyan whats wrong with this country , no gentleman ..

excuse , by seeing your attire and accent i can tell you don't know even which side is to walk .. miss . MIT .. glanced and barked that man without minding any courtesy ..

excuse me mr... awahhh .. seriously i am talking with a stranger on this useless topic and he is right .,, she had a sudden realisation about difference between traffic rules of india and newyork ... again slap you zoya but jo haar maan jaye wo main nahi ho sakti ...

oh god ab is ladki ko kya hua ,, jameen to aise ghoor rahi hai jaise abhi wahin jane ka irada hai .. don't spoil your mood beacuse of a nasty girl .. you have to do important work today ... "

excuse me miss. mit agar apko paresani na ho to aap meri gadi k esamne se hatne ki takaluf karengi " i might be getting late for something important ...

oh yes !!!!! like mujhe to apse ghar basane ka shaukh hai ... " i wish mujhe apki shakl na dekhni pade dubara "

what can i say the felling is mutual " alaah hafij "

walking away from each other ,, they dont have nay idea what destiny has stored in for them ..

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i know many ppl don't like it but five did , so this id for them .. i know i suck .. but please read it ..

thanks