2mrws love sceene: gauri & shiv

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Posted: 19 years ago
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hey guys i cant wait till 2mrws episode....& i no der wnt be any love sceenes between dem 2...but i thought id write a little FanFic sceene between dem JUST for 2mrw.....

guys its just my imagination,n i no it wnt happen...but hope u enjoy dis unrealistic sceene...here it goes....

It is gauri's birthday today...everyone is downstaires just chilling, it is around 1pm. gauri comes down with a big smile. she has that hot pink sari on (d one in d preview), it has a low back n hooks on d back!...nakila approaches gauri..n kisses her on d forhead. she says 'khush raho beti'...gauri smiles, nakila den looks at shiv...he gets up...'do u need to be told shiv!'....shiv says 'o..happy birthday gauri'...gauri smiles...'thank you'...

...den everyone gives gauri hugs n kisses...nakila tells everyone she has organised a party for gauri around 2pm. gauri is suprised n happy. nakila tells gauri guest will be arriving in a couple of hours...but gauri dsnt need to worry as nakila n shiv have handled d party...gauri is happy dat shiv has help organise d party....she smiles at shiv..shivs smiles back @ gauri with raised eyebrows....hinting 'its ok,i wanted to do this'.

....d house is getting decorated. shiv is telling d guys how 2 decorate it, like wat goes wer. gauri is pleased with shiv's change in attitude towards her.nakila tells gauri 'see my son has now grown so much care for u...didn't i tell u everything will be fine...gauri says 'yes badi ma, u r very luck 2 have shiv as ur son, he is such a ache insaan, n very unique too'....nakila tells gauri...u go n start getting ready....n ye wear d sari shiv gave u...he will be happy...

...gauri agrees n goes to her room. wen she enters she sees shiv der. he dsnt hav anything on d top part of his body...😳 .... shiv turns 2 see gauri entered d room...he feels awkward as his looking 4 his shirt in d cupbard...gauri gets embarrassed seeing shiv topless😉...

....gauri lowers her eyes n helps shiv look 4 a shirt.while lookin gauri looks at shiv n he looks backat her (eye-lockin)...she find one n he thanks her.he den goes infront of d mirror while putting on his shirt....

gauri reaches high up...n struggles to get her sari down from d top shelf...shiv watches gauri n smirks seein her struggle...he says shall i help? gauri says no dny worry ill get it down...u get changed...so she den brings d chair near d cupbard n steps up 2 reach d top shelf (hey guys i no she's tall n dsnt need a chair, but les just imagine it 4 now).

shiv watches gauri while buttonin his shirt (he is next to her).gauri suddenly slips off d chair while she brings down d sari.shiv quickly catches gauri,'gauri he shouts! gauri is in shivs arms.shiv says 'see u could hav hurt ur self if i wasnt here'. gauri (while still in shivs arms)innocently says 'sorry'! shivs puts gauri down. she den takes d sari n goes to d bathroom to change.

shiv takes his time to get changed! gauri on d other hand finds it difficult to take her blouse off. as d hooks r at d back, she struggles to take it off. shiv wonders why gauri is takin so long to get changed.gauri comes out d bathroom unchanged! shiv looks at gauri n says 'whats wrong? u took so much time in der, n u havnt changed yet?' everyone will be coming soon.

...gauri looks down...n wonders how is she gona tel shiv dat she is unable to take her blouse off!...she says..'i had a small problem'....shiv says wat?....gauri says dnt worry...ill call kaya...she'll sort it out. shiv says 'kaya?..look we dnt hav time...tell me wats wrong....gauri gets all shy...no i cant...u cant help...'shiv sighs'. 'look gauri just tell me...im sure i can help...

gauri: 'wo....wo....' shiv: 'wo kya?'........gauri: i cnt take my blouse hook off, as it is at d back' gauri looks away embarrased...shiv wonders wat to do...he den pretend to be confident although he is all shy himself 2 help gauri...he says 'well dats not a problem...let me help u.....help u.....gauri looks.....help u take it off....shiv gulps. gauri: ap?....shiv acts all cool.....gauri we dnt hav time, den he approaches gauri....

leaving gauri no choice...gauri is helpless. she has 2 take shivs help no matter how awkward it is 4 her. so shiv goes behind gauri....while walkin pass her he looks at her, all shy. he den slowly brings his hands up....he slowly moves her hair from her back.gauri closes her eyes as she feels more n more embarrased.

shiv notices gauris back.. he scans it with his eyes, from her neck down to her lower back.(blouse has a very low back. d blouse has a string tied at d top of the blouse. shiv feels this sensation going through his body. he den opens d strind attached on d top of d blouse. gauri crouches her back inwards as she feels shivs hand touch her upper back a little.shiv notices this..he den lowers his hands to open her hook.....

GUYS DO U WANT ME TO CARRY ON? 😆

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SerialQueen18 thumbnail
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Posted: 19 years ago
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😳
Wow!!!!!!!!!!!!

I dont think we will ever see a scene like this bet shiv and gauri now 😭

but u were too good...i cud imagine shiv and gauri actign this way..and awwwwwww let me tell it was cuteeeee
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hmm yuppiee i think u shud continue 😛
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Posted: 19 years ago
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im gona carry on in a bit...

suspense: wel i did say it will be unrealistic to all of us....BUT dis is a fanfic JUST 4 2day...so itll be unrealistic
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Posted: 19 years ago
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😳 so wonderful i cud imagine it all
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Carry on...i totally love it...especially the ending 😳
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Posted: 19 years ago
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heyyy plzzz carry onnnn plzzz send the rest we are wating plzzzzzz
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Posted: 19 years ago
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omgggggggggggg, u have to carry on, love it 😛
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Posted: 19 years ago
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😳 😳
That was a cuteeeeeeeee prediction rahena... 😛
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Posted: 19 years ago
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😳 😳... You guys are responsible partly for these damn blush-a-thons I get all the time!!

Omg... too good yaar!! Please do cont!!
👏 👏

Cheers,
dc
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Posted: 19 years ago
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omg it's so good 👏👏whole time reading it was blushing 😳
continue soon plz
Edited by Rock_Star - 19 years ago

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