MG FF ~Time traveller's love~ pt11 pg 71 16/12

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kiran_rati

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Posted: 12 years ago

#261

awesome dear

thanx for the pm

cont soon

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Krithiga Sankar

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Posted: 12 years ago

#262

gr8 part nandy ! in part 6 the water spillin part was inspired from tj ,right?😆

trust me it was the 1 st thing to come into my mind.part 7 was gr8 too.👏

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Aneri

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Posted: 12 years ago

#263

Awesome part...Lolzzz maan is a problem magnet...!!!!! Hmm how about maan cleaning the whole house & trying to make food for her of his century...which will actually taste delicious...but in the making process his fingers gets burned (assume maan has seen geet once making food lighting the stove..using all those utensils)...!! Maybe maan's sweet effort can make her happy :)

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khwaishfan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#264

hi thanks 4 da pm..js read part 6 n 7 nw..hilarious updates...well written

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Divz

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Posted: 12 years ago

#265

Part 6 was damn hillarious coundlt stop bt laugh like a maniac there LoL drooling ovr a pic of roti's LoL LoL LoL this man couldnt drool ovr a sexily dressd girl bt defo could drool ovr a pic of roti...serious he a one n a half century old guy :p :p ROFL

awe! She broke her wrist bt I still lvd one thing Maan was J of asif ;) koi na ab wrist tuti to b :p :p maan hai na apni geet ji ka dheyan rakhne ko

LoL I can imagine 100s of thoughs hw he gnna manaofy her :p :p waiting fr next update

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Ash1991

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Posted: 12 years ago

#266

amazing update...

poor geet got hurt...

loved the update...

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Shefali16

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Posted: 12 years ago

#267

Superb update
maan is so adorable and sweet..
hw did i mis dis story...
i luvd both ur stories...

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take_a_hint

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Posted: 12 years ago

#268

Part 8

Geet was staring at the ceiling thinking nothing in particular. The pain killers gave her good sleep and even after staying awake for about half an hour she didn't feel like getting out of the bed.She checked the phone and she had 3 missed calls two from office and one from unknown number. The clock showed 12. If it wasn't for her growling stomach she would have never got out of her bed.

Stretching her hands and legs Geet gently got up removing her spread. When her foot touched the ground she felt something soft and a chill passed through her. Just the feel made her smile. She looked down to find mixed color rose petals. She was surprised. She had read about these only in movies this looked so dreamy. Geet followed the flower path that leads her to the living room and then kitchen. She was surprised to find the dining table filled with different typed of flowers and animals carved from fruits and in the middle was amazingly decorated fruit salad. The smile never left her face.

" aapko acha laga? " she heard Maan's voice from behind
( did you like it?)

She looked at him confused. Seeing his hopeful face she remembered the events of last night. She looked at her wrist that was bandaged.

" humein maaf kardijiye . humse galati hogayi " he said apologetically
( i m sorry. I made a mistake )

" tumne yeh sab kiya ? " she asked astonished
( you did all this?)

This was ridiculous. No one has ever taken pains to do things like this to please her. Yes she was angry on him last night but then it wasn't his mistake completely. At that moment she was irritated because something like that has never happened to her. But she is not gonna blame Maan. He is like a baby and she knows it.in fact he is more innocent than that. She remembered how he was ready to fight the man even though all this is new to him and he could have risked his everything.

" maaf kardijiye humne aapke bagicha se phool aur phal liye " he said as if she is going to blame him for that.
( sorry that i borrowed flowers and fruits from your garden)

" tumhe yeh karne ki zaroorat nahi thi " she said.
( you didn't have to do it)

She wasn't angry. He shouldn't have done all this. He has taken so much risk. Well its not risk technically but for Maan it must have been new. Or has he done all this before. Google said he was engaged does that mean he was using a trick he has already succeed trying on someone.

" maine pehale baar yeh sab kiya hai agar app naraz hai toh muje batadijiye " he said as if he read her mind
( i have tried this for the first time if you don't like this tell me)

" its amazing ... i mean ... bahut acha hai " she said smiling " thanks "
(... very nice )

" aap kaiye na " he said with a huge fgrin
( please eat )

" umm brush karke aati hoon " she said
( i ll brush first )

" ji? " he asked confused

" abhi aati hoon " she said hopping into her room . Now she was in no mood to explain what brushing means.
( i ll be back)

After brushing and refreshing Geet came back to kitchen where Maan was waiting patiently. She sat on the chair and picked an apple piece and tasted it. He eyes widened in shock because it was different.

" yeh kya hai ? " she asked
( what is this? )

" Kyun aapko acha nahi laga" he said looking at her
( didn't you like it?)

Is he kiddding it was amazing . Apple was sprinkled with Masala powder. It tasted new and amazing

" god its amazing " she exclaimed taking another piece.

She picked jackfruit. When the fruit dipped in honey entered her mouth she couldn't help but moan.

" ummm " she moaned licking her lips.

Maan looked at her amused. This was something that was basic breakfast in his place and he was surprised to see her liking that so much. Of course he was happy that she liked it. But her moans and expressions were making him uncomfortable.

" Maan tum bahut ache ho " she said before popping another piece in her mouth.
( Maan your are too good)

" Aap bhi bahut ache ho Geet ji " he said smiling shyly
( you are good as well )

She patted his cheeks before walking to the living room taking a bottle of water with her. He followed her. He knows nothing but to do whatever she does. He sat beside her in the couch of course at an arms distance. He looked at her hand consciously as she was using the bandaged hand to type.

" aap ko dard hoga main kardeta hoon " he offered to help
( it might hurt so i ll help you)

" tum quotations type karoge? " she asked laughing
( will you type quotations ?)

Maan sat beside making a baby face. He had nothing to do and he was never used to be idle. Geet took another hour to complete her her work and mail it to office.

" Ab kya kare ? " she asked turning to him.
( what to do now? )

" aap humein goone le jayenge ? " he asked hopefully.
( can we go out? )

Maan knew after what happened last night she would never let him go anywhere with her. But one, was bored and two, he wanted to know more about this new world.

" teek hai " she said shrugging
( ok)

Geet gave Maan some other shirt she has bought for him and they both went to nearby park by walk. Geet hated walk in silence and she began to talk about anything and everything.

" tumhe roses pasand hai ? " she asked pointing at rose plant
( do you like roses? )

" ji " he said smiling. He liked that she was talking with him casually and not angry on whatever happened last night.

" aap akele rehate ho? " he asked after they settled in the bench of the park seeing children playing.
( do you live alone ?)

" nahi tum ho na mere saat " she said smiling.
( no! You are here with me )

She must have said it jokingly but he didn't take it in the same way. For him she was like a God because she gave him his life back. All this was like a fiction for her but for him it is his life and he has already accepted protecting her as his life time motto. Now her saying things like this made him more responsible.

" aap ke maa aur bauji? " he asked unsure
( your parents)

" woh itne ache te ki bagwan ne bahut jaldi unhe apne paas buladiya " she said controling her tears.
( they were too good that god took them with him)

Maan didn't know what to say. He already expected something like this but now he didn't know how to react. He was formulating wise words when fortunately a small boy ran towards them following a ball that was near Geet. Geet immediately picked it.

" my ball " the boy said

" yes baby its a ball " Geet said innocently

" that is mine " the boy complained

" but now its mine " Geet said

The boy made cute pouting face and looked at Maan for help. Maan undestood that Geet was playing with the boy.

" aap ka naam kya hai? " Maan asked
( what is your name? )

" i wont tell... i want ma ball " the boy said in broken language

" kya keharaha hai? " Maan asked
( what is he saying?)

" woh keharaha hai ki tum bhoot jaise dikte ho" Geet said
( he is saying that you look like a ghost)

" ji??"

Geet began to laugh seeing Maan's confused baby face.

" oh you are so cute " she pulled Maan's cheeks.

That was so casual for Geet but for Maan it send hundred thousand fireworks in his body. It was as if the place where she touched was marked as he felt heat there.

" isn't he cute ? " Geet asked the boy

The boy laughed and ran away after snatching ball from Geet. Geet's phone buzzed and the ID showed Deepta.

" yes ? " Geet said. No hai or hello because she wanted her to know that her call isn't welcome.

" Geet where are you ? " Deepta asked

" I m with Maan " Geet said

"ooh...fine ...ok... we are going for a party tomorrow" deepta said

" i m busy " Geet said before deepta could say anything

" but its Nitin's b'day " deepta said.

Geet didn't want to go but she knew nitin's mother died giving birth to him and so he ll be sad on his birthday so they all will try to cheer him up. However he hates them all she knows how it feels to lose your closed ones and the pain that follows. So she decided ti attend it.

" fine . i ll come " Geet agreed

" ohk Shaleen will pick you up " deepta insisted

" No need. Maan wouldn't like it " Geet said. She knew why Deepta wants shaleen to pick her up.

" Maan is coming with you? " Deepta asked

" of course. He is my boyfriend " Geet replied

" ok then bye" the call was disconnected.

Geet looked at Maan was examining a flower. She said that Maan will come with her but at that time she didn't realize that he is Maanvendra which means he will die of shock in a club. Geet sighed tomorrow is going to be tough day.

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Many suggested Maan should cook for Geet to pacify her but the problem there was that he had no knowledge about oven or even stove so that must be problem. So i twisted it to suit. hope you like it
Any mistake in hindi do let me know i ll correct it

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Edited by NANDY_BRU - 11 years ago