~ Flavours ~ KriYaansh OS - (Challenged)

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Challenged by Shreya aka Krasforever.
Dont know if i stood upto your expectations shreyy... But do try and enjoy even then😉😛
And all my other readers too... hope you all like it!
Though it's a little different from my usual writing... hope you peepz like this one! Have fun reading!
FlaVouRs - A KriYaansh OS
He sat on one of the bar stools parallel to the banquet hall. All the while his eyes focused at a group of young ladies enjoying themselves at one of the hall tables..

But it was one among them who had managed to capture all his attention. She standed out among the rest of her company, clad in a gorgeous gold and cream saree with a halter blouse that clung to her perfect figure, and a matching pair of earrings and bare neck, she looked absolutely stunning, simple yet stunning.

His eyes averted from her to the rest of the ladies she was with, only to witness them wearing the skimpiest of outfits..and trying their best to make heads turn..but none could even come close to her...
Yes, he was indeed stumped by her beauty and simplicity. And it was not easy to impress him, The Reyansh Singhania, that easily.

He took another sip of his cold drink, and let the flavoured drink linger a little while in his mouth so as to savour its essence..

And just while he was doing so, his mind absentmindedly went back to his prior thoughts...

And almost at the same time, his eyes wandered back to the beauty who had him gawking at her for a long time now..

And what he saw then.. Made him gulp hard. There she was twirling the drink in her hand.. And a second later she drank the little content that was left of it. And then unknowingly licked the remains off her lips..totally obvious of his intense gaze on her.

It was this small action of her's that made him made him gulp hard and groan inwardly! What was with him? From when had he become so desperate!

But neverthless he had already long lost his interest in the cold drink he held. It was something much more delicious that had caught his attention now.. Her lips.. And the lipgloss that adorned those lips!

He once again found himself staring at her, hardly able to take his eyes off her now, except being forced to look away in between so as to avoid being caught at stalking her!.. And every now and then his eyes automatically moved towards her lips...

There was nothing that he wanted so much..as how much he wished to taste her right then!

Her gloss that adorned those juicy lips seemed to have a shade of creamy pink..
But what could possibly be its flavour?
As far as he knew, women loved experimenting with different flavours when it comes to such stuff.. Strawberry or cherry probably...

When his gaze fell on her lips yet again, he saw the same action being repeated... And unable to control himself he almost leapt out of his seat...

But looking around him and the unwanted attention he had gathered of other people out there.. He tried to compose himself, and after taking a long whiff of air.. Somehow succeeded in being back to his composed self.

It was just then he saw that a waiter had approached that group of ladies and was collecting their empty glasses..

Finally getting a chance to fulfill a part of his desires... He hurriedly asked the waiter to stop as he approached the bar near him.

It took him just a few seconds to recognize the pink shade of her gloss that one of the glasses held. He could finally know what exactly is her flavor.. And maybe take a lick of it if no one's watching!

He chided himself for acting so desp again..
But just as he was about take a whiff of it's smell.. It was snatched right away from him!

It was the waiter who did so.. 'sorry, duty calls.. Need to place another order'

and before Rey could even protest he was gone.

He sulked and settled back into his seat.. Only to find those ladies, including Her, making their way out of the hall!

Seeing this as his golden chance... Rey quickly decided to follow her.. Not bothering about the consequences.
...
It was about 10.30 at night then. Rey decided to silently follow her for a while.. Being careful so as not to be noticed doing so by the passerbys.

And just when they were in an almost deserted parking lot, rey could control no more and made a quick move at her from the back...

But even before he could come in contact with her skin, he felt a sharp jab on his stomach that made him hit one of the car's bonnet.. And the next moment he was welcomed with a huge wave of a spicy tinged spray... But he was quick to dodge it... and just then realized what she had done... she had just punched him by her elbow and... used Pepper Spray on him!

...
Kria finally turned to look at her stalker and was shocked beyond limits...
'Rey! Aap?? Yaha! I am soo sorry...' and she helped him stand back to his feet.

'Kria... Tum bhi na! Pehle toh shaadi ke doosre din kitty party with your girlfriends.. Aur now when I try to sneak some romantic moments with you.. You did this!' rey pouted at her... a bit irritated for not getting what he wanted yet.

'But rey.. How did you come here? And why? Main toh samjhi koi stranger mujhe follow kar raha hai ! I had informed you i would be back home by 11 na... ' asked a confused kria.

'Yea right! Maine tumhe tumhare friends ke saath jaane ki permission di.. Woh bhi on the second day after our marriage! But i never said i will miss the chance to keep admiring my newly wed wife.. Door se hi sahi... Just could'nt keep myself away from you..!' replied rey in a srious and husky tone, sending shivers down her spine.

Kria felt her cheeks growing crimson.. But soon hiding it decided to play around a little with him..

On the other hand rey was already lost in her and his eyes found its target yet again! Her lips and the flavour it held...
By now they had reached their car that was parked. The one kria came in was sent back with the driver already by rey.

'Kahi aap jhoot toh nahi bol rahe? I think you followed because you doubted if I was here to meet some previous fling of mine...' said kria with a mischevious smile playing on her lips..

She rolled her tongue within her mouth looking everywhere but at him, so as to tease him more..

She was just about to get back into the car, when she felt a strong pull at her waist. And the next moment she felt his lips on hers... Kissing her deeply and to the earnest. Pouring out all his needs and love for her and fulfilling all his piled up desires.. And kria responded with equal fervour.

After a long and breathtaking kiss.. Both finally pulled back from each other.

'Just remember one thing, You are mine, Only Mine, no matter what happens' rey replied in a possessive tone.. that she had never heard him use before! But soon he relaxed a bit...and a content smile played on his lips.

'Aah... Finally.. I got my answers! It held the flavor of candyfloss... Extremely sweet and mouthwatering... And what made it even more exciting was the tinge of spice, must be the pepper spray!' said a completely turned on rey...

'What??' asked a confused kria

'Nothing baby... Let's get going! And yeah.. I want you to apply the new flavored gloss that u purchased yesterday! Just before we get to the bed...' replied rey huskily... His emotions already running high thinking about how he could never have enough of his wife.

With silent desires and expectations of the upcoming night... Both settled into their car and zoomed towards their home.
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shreyy challenge completed...!😉 waiting for your review. Tell me the truth kk... then only can try and improve!😊
And all of you... hope you all liked it...
dont forget to like, comment and pass your review!
it really helps in improving.. and yes you are always free to criticize and help me do better!😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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res
unres


awesome awesome awesome Fidziii...
i knew u would write a good one but this was way beyond my expectations...
hayyeee apni Kria saree mein kinni sexy lag rahi hogi, bechara Rey😆
Rey toh total fida hai Kria pe...i could seriously feel his anxiety to kiss her😆, u have written it that well😳
tere lip gloss ke description ne toh dil khush kar ditta...
Rey waiter ke peeche bhaga Kria ke lip gloss ka flavor check karne n ho sake toh usha taste bhi lene😆
bt bechare ki phooti kismat waiter ne taang ada di...*haath toh aaya par muh na laga*🤣
uff he is being such a stalker n phal swaroop he got a punch n pepper spray, wo toh acha tha he realised it pretty soon warna bedroom ki jagah hospital room jana padta😆
Kriyaansh r married😲, n Kria shaadi ke dusre din kitty party mein :(... Kria darling aisa ni karte, don't u know Rey wanted u to be with him in his bedroom😆
so Kria is in a mood to tease him bt Rey ki possessiveness jaag gyi n result Kriyaansh ki kiss☺️
kiss was sooo goood
i love ur possessive Rey😉 'u r mine only mine'
finally Rey got to know d flavor of her lip gloss-candyfloss n also got the flavor of pepper spray...
then Rey asking Kria to put on d new flavored lip gloss on d next night so dat he can have a taste of dat too😳
i hope dey enjoy their nite with each other as per Rey's plan🤣
loved it sooo damn much Fidu❤️
i have read it two times already n running to read it one more time😛
Edited by krasforever - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Res!
:)

Unres :)

That was a fabtastic update 😉
Rey is Kriyas husband never expected that but a amazing concept
Awed Rey bechara kitna hurt hua because of the pepper spary
😆
But at the end he did get to taste the flavour of the lip gloss
It was a super update 👏

😊
Edited by Luvkriyansh-anu - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#4
besharam...
rok diya tune.. :P

galat baat hai..

no issues..

mereko laga nhi tha ki they wud be hubby-wife. and at the same time i didn't want ki spray use ho rey pe..

par koi nhi..

it was sweet...

lip gloss.. mast tha.. i loved how u incorporated it...
amazingly written..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome work..
The twist was just superb...rey kriyas husband...never expected it..
The start the end everything was just perfect...
Loved the naughty rey n innocent kriya...
Thanx for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: krasforever

res

unres


awesome awesome awesome Fidziii...
i knew u would write a good one but this was way beyond my expectations...
hayyeee apni Kria saree mein kinni sexy lag rahi hogi, bechara Rey😆
Rey toh total fida hai Kria pe...i could seriously feel his anxiety to kiss her😆, u have written it that well😳
tere lip gloss ke description ne toh dil khush kar ditta...
Rey waiter ke peeche bhaga Kria ke lip gloss ka flavor check karne n ho sake toh usha taste bhi lene😆
bt bechare ki phooti kismat waiter ne taang ada di...*haath toh aaya par muh na laga*🤣
uff he is being such a stalker n phal swaroop he got a punch n pepper spray, wo toh acha tha he realised it pretty soon warna bedroom ki jagah hospital room jana padta😆
Kriyaansh r married😲, n Kria shaadi ke dusre din kitty party mein :(... Kria darling aisa ni karte, don't u know Rey wanted u to be with him in his bedroom😆
so Kria is in a mood to tease him bt Rey ki possessiveness jaag gyi n result Kriyaansh ki kiss☺️
kiss was sooo goood
i love ur possessive Rey😉 'u r mine only mine'
finally Rey got to know d flavor of her lip gloss-candyfloss n also got the flavor of pepper spray...
then Rey asking Kria to put on d new flavored lip gloss on d next night so dat he can have a taste of dat too😳
i hope dey enjoy their nite with each other as per Rey's plan🤣
loved it sooo damn much Fidu❤️
i have read it two times already n running to read it one more time😛

lamba comment toh expect kiya tha tumse... but inna lamba nhi😃
tune challenge diya tha...and ur concepts r actually mindblowing!!
glad u liked it...🤗 ❤️ u moree shreyy...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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amazing ... mindblowing... 😃

simply loved it... 😛

firstly .. thanx shreya... yummy concept 😉

& fida... superyummy writeup 🤗

I was wondering ... kisi ki wedding me hai kya dono 😆

but ye to newly weded couple nikle 😲

hehehe... overpossesive hubby 😳

pad gya na punch n spicy spray 😆

that glass scene was fun... psycho desperate stalker 🤣

jitni lipgloss khani h kha... she's urs only...☺️

dil se achha laga... sachhi... itne dinon se pak rhi thi 😛

PS- fida... plzzz update 'rab mera tu'... i'm dying to read.. wats next ... 😊

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Amazing !!!!!
Love your writing style 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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it ws aswm...luved it nd specially d lip gloose sequence...nd thnx 4 sending it 2 me...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome...loved the twist...expect nahin kiya tha rey-kriya husband wife honge...

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