Mg OneShot- ~Chori-Chori..Chupke-Chupke~ (season#2 link-pg36) - Page 6

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Posted: 12 years ago
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part 3
lovely dear...
though this is so realistic i dunno why am nervous...
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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what an cute update ...
really really loved it ...❤️
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Posted: 12 years ago
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SO HE ALSO KNOWS THAT SHE IS ATTRACTED TO HIM
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Posted: 12 years ago
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hi thanks 4 da pm n beautiful update! Maan n Geet meet! well written
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Last part
She was shocked to see him standing in front of her. She stood there..not knowing what to do! He started taking steps towards her. She wanted to move from there but something was there in his eyes which didnt let her! Suddenly she got extreamly nervous..seeing him so close to her. She quickly truned around to leave..but next her breath caught in her throat..feeling his touch on her wrist!
Her breathing become fast with this new feel. He was also affected as much as her.. His heart was beating so fast that he was sure..that she could hear it too. She started to wrringle as she was afraid of someone seeing them like that! And he left her hand immediatly thinking that she didnt liked it. He didnt wanted to leave any wrong impression on her.
As soon as he left her wrist.. She started moving inside. "geet.." she stoped in her track hearing her name from his mouth for the first time! And she loved it! Her name sounds more beautiful in his voice.
She waited for him to say something. While he was feeling so nervous.. "wo..hmm..kal sham..park me..aaogi..??..4 baje??" he asked hesitatingly. She was surprised hearing that..she turned to look at him questioningly... It increased his nervousness more.. "tum chaho toh..apni friend ko bhi sath le aana..!"...he added quickly. "please..!"..he pleaded. She bited her lips in nervousness & confusion...should she say yes OR no?? While he waited for her answer..inwardly praying to hear a yes!

There were still standing there. She was busy thinking what to do..and he was waiting for her answer.. When someone called her from behind. "gudiya..dii"...it was her 5yearsold little brother..who came looking for her. She quickly went to him..before he could reach near them.. not wanting him to see maan there..otherwise it would have created a big trouble for them.
Maan smile hearing the cute name "gudiya dii".
"kya hua aayu?"..she asked approching her brother. "aap kahan the..?? I was waiting for u.." he pouted cutely. Aayu didnt noticed maan who was still standing near the gate. Geets thoughts went to maan and she trund to look at him..when aayu tugged her hand.. "dii...chalo na jaldi.." "han..chal"..she moved with aayu holding her hand..to go inside. Maan wanted to stop her..but what he was supposed to do?? He was feeling disappointed.
When they reached at the entrance of the main hall..aayu ran inside before her. she stopd still unsure that if she should agree..? & turned around...only to see him still standing there..waiting for her answer. He got some hope.. His eyes were pleading her to say Yes! She bite her lips to hide her smile..seeing his cute pleading face.. And she nodded her head..for a YES! That she will come to meet! She chuckled seeing him smiling so brightly...jumping in joy hearing his desired answer. He ran a nervouss hand through his hair..embarrased..seeing her laughing at his reaction! He waved his hand at her..mouthing a bye n see u! She too waved back at him. Both kept looking at eachother...lost in these new feelings & emotions.
They were forced to look away..when aayu called her again. Giving a last look at him she went inside. After few seconds he too left towards his home.. Both were excited to meet eachother again & were waiting egarly for the next day.

That was just the beigning of their LOVE STORY...
~Chori-Chori.. Chupke-Chupke~

THE END..!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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lovely dear
superb
thanx for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
#57
wow that was a beautiful ending...loved it to d core...fab.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow super cute sweet story .loved it😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Really very Cute love story 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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very sweet start of their love story...

teenage love...

thanx for pm...

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