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Posted: 12 years ago
Loved it!:)))
Thnkz for the pm:)
Lemme know when u update the next part!:)
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awesome update loved it so much plz update soon😊😊😊
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YIPEEE A NEW LATOP !!!!!!!!!!!!😆😆😆😆
AND SEE I M KEEPING MY PROMISE
SO ENJOY "THE MOST STARNGE CONFESSION OF LOVE"
CHAPTER 26

Viaan reached the beach….

The breeze was flowing and the tides were giving the place an altogether a different feel…..

The sun was at distance and it felt as if it was emerging from the waves for a new life….

Moreover the place was quiet and it was personifying the nature's beauty

Viaan was a bit nervous…..

He did know what he will say when he sees tahira…….

He didn't know how will their meeting proceed ….

He was too clueless about destiny and his own feelings

With each second pass , there was altogether a different flow of emotions that he was experiencing…

Viaan: maine use yahan bula toh liya hai….par kya wo aayegi ????

Matlab kahin main jo hua use lekar kuch zyada to nahi soch raha…..i mean main tahira ko apni life mein zyada importance to nahi de raha ????

May be wo mere bare mein sochti hi nahi ho and kal job hi hua wo use sirf ekk situation samajh le…..

Nahi lekin wo aise chali gayi thi …….

Agar maine use bataya ki main uske bare mein kitna sochta hun hun to how will she react…..

Agar use bura laga to (irritated ) and usne mujhe thapad mara to…..(putting his hand on his left cheek)

Par ussne msg bhi to kiya tha….

I m sure she ll come…..(showing confidence)

How the hell can u be sure viaan ?????(dam confused and irrated)

His expression was changing with every second , his nervous did the job of the blush on his cheeks.

His heart was jumping from one to another conclusion….

He was confused, nervous , worried ,tensed……all at the same time

Just then a girl in a beautiful light blue anarkali was visible to viaan…..

She was looking divine……

Yes she was tahira but today she was not the same……

The breeze playing with her open hair made viaan fall for her….

Her face was so illuminated that it looked as if her face was providing brightness to the shinning star itself that is the sun…..

She was not wearing any ornament or make-up but still crossed all boundaries of piety ……..

Her beauty and her angelic attire overpowered her loud attitude today….

But what was not going with her overall look was her walk…..in particular she looked a bit unbalanced….

She was swaying from left to right while walking

Each step that she was taking towards viaan made his heart beat fluctuate…..

He was getting more and more nervous about how will he make the situation fall in his favour ….

Finally she reached him….

Viaan was lost in her but suddenly his trance was broken….

Viaan could smell a notso pleasant odour …..

He was confused because it wasn't her essence but ALCOHOL…..

Viaan: Are u drank ? ( losing his senses)

His facial expression changed all of a sudden….

He could not understand how to react and he was all blank.

Tahira: (smiled)

Wo kya hai na viaan jab bhi main nervous hoti hun (showing quantity from her fingers)…..to zyada nahi par main 4 takilla shots par leti hun….(tilting her head on one side and smiling)

Viaan : 4 shots……Are u mad ?

Matlab ……oh god I don't have words……..(he put his hand on his head)

Tahira was smiling and holding the end of her anarkali and swaying from one side to another….

Tahira: arrey yaar chill…4 shots ke baad bhi main sirf 25% drunk hoti hun…..because I can go upto 15…..

And she laughed…..

Viaan : tum mahan ho yaar(holding his hands in namastey)

Tahira: actually Viaan main puri raat nahi so payi because I was nervous…….

Tahira Rai Prakash was nervous…..the ultimate diva was nervous…….life mein pehli baar….

Subah main jaldi ready hui bilkul simple way mein because u like it this way….. (listening this viaan could not resist and he smiled)

Par viaan I was too scared ki pata nahi tum kya bolo gaye…..so I drank (she made a puppy face)

Viaan was shocked at her antics……

Tahira : (don't u stare that way ) and say why did u call me here……

Viaan:Actually tahira I m too nervous…infact main to shayad yeh bhi nahi janta ki hum yahan kyun hai lekin jabse main tum se mila hun sirf tumhare bare mein sochta rehta hun……

Tumhari craziness, liveliness sab kuch mujhe mere har pain se nikal deti hai……

Lekin jo bhi ride par hua wo maine intentionally nahi kiya……I mean I had to hold on too u for support……par haan main nahi janta kyun par main uske liye guilty nahi hun…..

Ho sakta after listening to my last sentence u wi ll be shocked but trust me tahira so am I ……

Mera man jaise meri sunta hi nahi hai…..i mean I try not to think of u but all in vain
(he was looking straight in her eyes)

Tumhare saath rehkar mujhe aisa feel hota hai that all my pains are vanished……..

By this time tahira was in tears……

Tahira: I know ki ab jo main tumhe batane jahungi wo tumhe shocking lagega but that's true I mean when I came here di told me all about u and ur love for taani ( viaan was shocked and in tears , his face had become red )……

I was amazed that how can one love somebody so much……phir main tumse mili , tumhe jana aur uss din jis tarah tum meri liye worried the….na jaane kyun but I felt happy……

Balki main secure feel kar rahi thi……

That hug made me lose on to myself……and my heart was all yours by then……

Your touch made me feel secure (viaan smiled)

Tumhare saath hoti hun to khush hoti, tumse dure hokar sirf tumhare bare mein sochti hun ………

She was about to loose balance when viaan held her…..

She was in his arms and they both were totally lost in each other……

Their lips were sealed but their eyes spoke volumes……

Soon Tahira's hair were caressing viaan's face because of the breeze….

They came out of their trance and both of them stood still……

There was an awkward silence between the two ……..

But tahira was different and she could not take it any more….

She broke the silence …….

TAHIRA: ABBEY YAAR AB BOL BHI DE THAT U LOVE ME…..

Kitna rulayaga …..(she smirked)

Viaan was shocked at her words and he gazed at her with his mouth wide open…..

Tahira was too annoyed this time….

Tahira: oh god har cheez mujhe hi karni padegi (she said with full expressions and hand moments)

Then she went on her knees….

And said….

Tahira: Mr. Viaan I really really love u……infact more than that I respect u for being such a great human being no…no….rather for being an angel of love to everyone……

So, will u be my boyfriend ?

And she chuckled…….

Viaan was again lost in her and shocked too…..

He smiled …..

Viaan: yes Miss Tahira Rai Prakash I will be ur boyfriend (he said this making tahira stand up)

kuch kaam to mere liye chod do tahira……. (he too chuckled)

Tahira: choda hai na…..now I have decided ki pehle tum mujhe kiss karo gaye…..main nahi…..

(winked)

Viaan: Kiss !!!!!!!!!!!!!!

What matlab …….tahira u r mad……

Tahira: haan kiss kyun koi problem hai……

(teasing Viaan)

Viaan: nahi mujhe to problem nahi hai tahira ji par yeh public place hai yahan kaun kiss karta hai……

I mean main nahi kar sata……

Tahira: (stepping forward towards viaan) main to kar sakti hun and she again smiled…

Viaan: (stepping backward) no…..no….tahira .

U r drunk …….so stop…..

But before he could complete tahira cluthched his collar and kissed him passionately…..

Their tongues were twisted and they were engulfing each other's Saliva…..

Viaan's arms were stretched on both sides in air …..he wasn't holding her rather it was tahira who was holding him so close….it was her who was doing it all…..

Soon they felt out of breath and to separate…..

Viaan: (gasping for breath ) u r mad !!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Tahira: wo to main hun…..

And they both chuckled…..

Viaan gazed at tahira as if he found a motive to live…..

But he came out of his trance and stammered…

Viaan:lekin hum dono…..sab kaise react …..matlab….

This even made tahira tensed…..but still she is a rockstar and had answer to all his questions…..

Tahira: kyun na abhi hum iss baat ko sab se chupayein and jab sab pehle jaisa ho jayega….matlab rey and taani jab saath honge humesha ke liye …..tab hum sab ko batange….

Viaan agreed but his head droops listening taani's name…tahira noticed it and walked close to him…

Tahira:mujhe tumahre past se koi problem nahi hai viaan (making him look into her eyes by holding his chin)

I love you not because of your looks or anything but because u have a golden heart…..jab tum kissi ko dosti ke badle mein itna de sakte ho….to mere pyar ke liye to tum kuch bhi kar do gaye….

I trust you…

Viaan had tears in his eyes….after so long somebody had read his heart…

He hugged her …..

Tahira: not so tightly viaan !!!!!!!

Viaan lossened his grip….as he never wanted to hurt her…

Tahira: arre stupid I meant aur zyada tight se !!!!!

and she smirked

viaan smiled and hugged her with full might…

their bodies represented the phrase "2 bodies and 1 soul" perfectly….

Breaking the hug tahira stretched her arms……and

shouted at the top of her voice "I m in a secret relationship"

and they both chuckled…..

so guys I hope this was worth the wait…..and now both the love stories are on track.

And the upcoming chapters will have spice of viaara secret relationship and taarey's journey towards a life full of twist and turns.

The gang's entry but will it be easy for the gang to make Rey remember it all and will the gang be the same ; ya phir honge kuch aur twists …….( I know I m wicked)

For all this fun and masti keep reading. AND NOW START WITH UR JOB OF COMMENTING AND LIKING ...

AND THIS BADA WALA COMMENTS OKKK 😆 WARNA😡 (😆😆😆😆) LOVE U GUYS SO MUCH
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awsm awsm shivi
it ws da bst prt of ds
u totaly rock it
Edited by chand91 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome awesome awesome Shivi
Wow a very unique type of purposal ... Just wow yaar I mean this Tahira is really very advance ... The way she purposes Viaan was just cute ... Lekin bechari ko uske liye 4taqila shot lagane pade and aww Viaan the Shy baby ... But I love his dialogue

Viaan: yes Miss Tahira Rai Prakash I will be ur boyfriend (he said this making tahira stand up)
kuch kaam to mere liye chod do tahira……. (he too chuckled)

Tahira: choda hai na…..now I have decided ki pehle tum mujhe kiss karo gaye…..main nahi…..
(winked)
Viaan: Kiss !!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Totally loved it...

Taani and Rey ki kami mehsoos hui iss update mein ... But I m so happy for Vihira(Viaan+Tahira)

Thank you so much ... Update soon next part :)
Edited by NSohi13 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hummm..congo songo for your new possession😊

now come to update..it's brilliant👏👏

like it so much..pls cont soon
Edited by crazy2012 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome upadte like always i am so happy for viaan finally he found😊😊😊his love

and tahira's talli sequence was so hillarious 🤣for me i didn't expect something like this or
lst line was so funny😆

thanks for the pm
Edited by taareylove - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
beautiful
wow 4 tackila shots and that too only 25% of her capacity!🤣
yeh ladki uff..sachme pagal hai
wow tahira ne viaan ko kiss kiya ab to dekhna mai usse kitna tease karti hu!
wow beach pe secret love ka confession!
i guess you are really inspired by hhl's arjun-aaliya jaha last mei wo propose karti hai rather than arjun!😉😆
i loved this whole viahira love story ka full update today!
please update soon!
thanks 4 d pm!😊
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Diii ... What have you done! Meri halat toh unexplainable hai but for this lovely,beautiful update you have given us ... I really wanna hug you
Pehle toh I loved Vivaan, acting like a girl Like seriously Itne saare question on what he should do and what he should was out of this world
Then humari Tahira ki entry pehle toh I thought she would be shy and blushing but Yeh toh sabki baap nikli ... Nervousness ke kaaran DRUNK aa gayi ... Meri expression was like OMG What the ... ! But I have to say drunk Tahira kaafi cute hai and her famous line I will never forget "Abbe bol do that you love me" ... Meri mouth toh full O-Shaped thi and aakhe lappy ki screen ko ghuur rahi thi (in summary I was looking like a cartoon)
But itna accha confession padne ke baad, Who would not say awww ... But uske baad Tahira Rai Prakash KI JAI ! I mean voh toh public place mein kiss maang rahi thi and their first kiss YIKES!
Meri 32 teeth toh kuch zyada hi clearly dikhayi de rahi thi
Thank you soo much dii for the awesomly,beautiful and romantic and hilarious update but wait a minute ABH KAUNSA TWIST! And D3 Gang ki entry but Rey ki memory ... OMG ! Okay finally ending this commentry Thanks for the pm and update
Edited by TaaReyD3_Neha - 12 years ago
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Wow Tahira is my kind of girl lol, she love Viaan she get drunk and confess lol. Shivi mind blowing confession I love it. Hmm secret relationship is so much fun. I can't wait to read more, and more suspense about our Taarey nice 😊

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