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Madhuri

@Madhuri53

Stunner

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Posted: 12 years ago

#451

Originally posted by: .Maggie.
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Waiting 😊

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ChandlerBing

@ChandlerBing

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#452

Originally posted by: memyselfndI
How long should we wait????

Had to go away for an emergency. Update will be up within an hour. Apologies for the inconvenience

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Padfoot_Prongs

@Padfoot_Prongs

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#453

Res..
edit..

don't know about scars but i wud say the worse thing is when u got friendlier with lonliness.. it didn't let u to be same as u were.

geet though introvert but still had friends with whom she shared her school life which is most amazing part of life. friends gone and she was left with that feeling of lonliness and started writing to her mother.. it somehow reminded of that part or harry potter when ron left them in 7th part and harmoine started taking out professor nigallus pic just to fill that vacant seat...(kill me if u wanna, i'm lately missing my HP very much so comment me bhi aa gaya)...

i'm desparately waiitng for Anvi's entry... may be she will bring a new freshness for Maan...

whom i'm not liking for hating or avoiding Lasya.. (may be because i'm misisng my mom.. i so wanna go back home.. my sweet home.. damn these exams..)

Edited by mannubhardwaj - 12 years ago

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palindrome

@palindrome

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#454

I can see a friendship blooming between Vicky and Geet in near future.. Vicky is the character with many layers,however he is only one who can bring out anyone from gloominess with his mere presence..His perception of right and wrong makes him mature at one minute,then his childish and simple example of "eating meat" enlighten his naughty side and makes you think whether he is the same person who was talking so profound just a minute ago..I really love him alot...

He,saying about Tweesha being always right but he,being not wrong,somewhere gave the slight hint about the complications between them..He is able to see her "right" but may be she is not able to recognize his "right"..

Challenge at the last,has left me with ample excitement..Tweety has chosen perfect dare for Geet...😊

A tight hug for you my brat,for making this chapter so beautiful with your poignant words and vivid description...🤗

Reva said,I am good player of words but I want to say,I have learned it from you...😊

Edited by palindrome - 12 years ago

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AKSashadow

@AKSashadow

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#455

I am not much good with words like you to play with words and write something magical. Telling the truth I am unable to decide what I am going to write in my comment.

Starting from the most lovely portion from your story. The letters, which took my heart away. I wish to see more and more letters in coming updates, just approx 50 will do for now. See I am being content and not demanding much.

I am a very patient person so will not bug you with lots of question of which you will definitely give answer in coming updates.

Talking about characters-

For me geet is the sweetest and lovely character beside naina and tweety are good character too.
Tweety-Right name tweeting all the time but soft girl by heart.

Laasya-A sweet, caring and loving person who can make any child's life feel heaven with her care and love. And I feel there would be strong reason for her to tell vicky truth and Maan had misunderstood her mother.

Maan what to say about him, he is yet to show his true self. I am speaking of person who is in real not a person immeresed in regret or pain.

Now, vicky's turn- I will Expect the unexpected from him as nobody can understand such person who have deep character and change themself according to situation, need or mood.

Coming to last update-

Scars sometime become too painful to acknowledge ourself let alone showing to others. Another letter coming deep down the heart.

Waiting for tanvi to come into scene who is right now only in vicky's description and whose mention from vicky was enough to stretch smile across lips.

And at last a lovely dare given by tweety .

Loved your story😃

Edited by AKSashadow - 12 years ago

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dqno1

@dqno1

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#456

Song : Na kisi ki aankh ka noor hoon..
.Movie : Laal Quila (196o)
Singer : Mohammad Rafi,
Lyricist : Bahadur Shah Zafar

Lyrics

na kisi ki aankh kaa noor hoon
na kisi ki aankh kaa noor hoon
na kisi ke dil kaa qaraar hoon
jo kisi ke kaam na aa sake
main wo ek musht-e-gubaar hoon
na kisi ki aankh kaa noor hoon

na to main kisi kaa habeeb hoon
na to main kisi kaa raqeeb hoon
jo bigad gayaa wo naseeb hoon
jo ujad gayaa wo dayaar hoon,
na kisi ki aankh kaa noor hoon

meraa rang-roop bigad gayaa
meraa yaar mujhse bichhad gayaa
jo chaman fizaa se ujad gayaa
main usi ki fasl-e-bahaar hoon,
na kisi ki aankh kaa noor hoon

ae fatiha koyi aaye kyun
koy chaar phool chadhaaye kyun
koyi aake shaama jalaaye kyun
main wo bekasi ka mazaar hoon

na kisi ki aankh kaa noor hoon
na kisi ke dil kaa qaraar hoon
jo kisi ke kaam na aa sake
main wo ek musht-e-gubaar hoon
na kisi ki aankh kaa noor hoon

musht-e-gubaar = handful of dust

One awesome heart touching poetry this is...❤️

Update comment will be separate.. Just wanted to share this, I am sure you read it but for others who are reading...😊

Edited by dqno1 - 12 years ago

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KittuPratzz

@KittuPratzz

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#457

Some scars are too painful and too personal to be shown.

i guess this one line is enough...what you are conveying..and what we can expect. scars wont fade with time...nor we want to fade them.

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Maaneet099

@Maaneet099

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#458

Originally posted by: KittuPratzz
Some scars are too painful and too personal to be shown.

i guess this one line is enough...what you are conveying..and what we can expect. scars wont fade with time...nor we want to fade them.

😲 ekkado touch chesavu Kittu 😳

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KittuPratzz

@KittuPratzz

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#459

Originally posted by: Maaneet099

😲 ekkado touch chesavu Kittu 😳

hahaha madhu..ryt?

hmm emo abhaa...kani shikzz posts lo feel chalaaa untundi. vetakaram undi kaani...not very good at comedy..emo adi naa feeling!!!

but thats true...ppl say..good moments reach one peak..and then they fade...how can good moments fade?? there is something which lacks...bcoz of which we wont be able to connect to it.

scars are of two types...one swells with joy...and one deepens one's lonliness. both are dangerous!!

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ddgcmgfan

@ddgcmgfan

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#460

Hey Shikha:

I am so happy you decided to stick with the story. So Geet thinks she is a bad person...wonder why coz it seems to me that she has not a single bad bone in her, I feel like she has low self esteem. Loved the conversation between Vicky and Geet. The way he tried to uplift her mood. She is opening up...a little. Hope she sticks with this positive change. So Tweesha has put in for a story writing competition...will she put in the letters to her mom? Truth and dare...hmm you have a lot in store to bring out the past😆...excellent again...thanx.