MG OS:PRELUDES-A NEW BEGINING

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hi guys...i wanted to write an os on MAANEET from long but didn't get time...i know my ff is pending but my finger were aching to write this one.
It's a small n lovey-dovey story of 2-3 part. The title i have taken from a poem but this story is totally different from that n does not have any relation with the poem. Here is the prologue and part 1 don't know wen will update next but will surely continue soon. Please ignore gramatical mistakes.

PRELUDES
Prelude means begining of something...
FOR THEM
It was the begining of their journey,
It was the begining of new dreams,
It was the begining of friendship,
It was the begining of new relations,
It was the begining of a thing called LOVE,
And finally it was the begining of a new life together...FOREVER.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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PART 1:

A tall young man was sitting in his cabin lost in his thoughts. He was the most handsome guy anyone could see with a great physic, chocolate brown eyes and M shaped lips. He was just like epitome of Greek god who himself has come down to earth. Well he was THE MAAN SINGH KHURANA, the biggest business tycoon, the most eligible bachelor of the town. Girls used to throw themselves on him so that they can enjoy attraction of this Greek god and as well enjoy his money but, but he was Maan Singh Khurana and3 nobody can fool him. He makes his own rules n follows them. The business world was scared of him. And his staff, a person can only pity them coz one mistake and you're out of khurana construction and he will take care that you don't get any job ahead. Sorry was the word which didn't existed in his dictionary. But inspite of all these facts he was a kind hearted person who can do anything for his loved once. He immensely loved his family and specially his dadi who was a great support for him after his parents died in an accident and left him alone with the responsibility of his siblings. But today he was deeply lost in someone's thoughts with a smile lingering on his face. He was thinking about his meeting with a girl today morning.

FLASHBACK:

Maan was sitting in his black lavishing BMW working on his laptop and was in a very foul mood. It was not a new thing but today he was just angry on his dadimaa as she wanted him to get married which Maan didn't agree. But dadimaa was also his dadimaa if he was stubborn than she was his double and blackmailed him that if he don't agree for marriage than she will never talk to him. Poor Maan this situation for him was like 'ek taraf kuan to ek taraf khai and beech mein Maan Singh Khurana ki shamat aayi' (by me ). And finally he has to agree for the sake of his dadi but on one condition that he will marry the girl of his own choice, the girl who would love Maan not Maan Singh Khurana. Maan came back to reality when his car came to halt at traffic signal and maan turned his gaze outside. It was the month of july and it was raining in delhi, the weather was awesome.

Suddenly maan saw a faint figure of a girl dancing in the rain with small kids. He could not see her face as she was facing her back towards him but don't know why he felt an attraction towards a mere girl. Unknowingly he came out of the car and started walking towards her direction. He didn't care of the rain but just wanted to see her face. The girl oblivious to her surrounding wa enjoying the rain and dancing with the kids and didn't notice maan who was standing just behind her. Suddenly she turned and banged onto maan who was standing behind her. She lost her balance and was just about to hit the ground when two strong arm grasped her waist and saved her. She closed her eyes in fear and expected to hit the ground but that never came. Maan badly wanted to see her face but her hair locks were coming on his way and preventing him to see her face. Unknown to himself his hands reached towards her face and removed her locks. When he saw her face he was bowled away by her beauty. He had never seen anyone so beautiful. Lots of girls threw themselves on him and were beautiful but none could be compared to her. Her eyes were closed with fear, her silky smooth skin felt heaven under his touch, her pink luscious lips shivering due to cold winds blowing. Maan was just drinking her beauty with his eyes. She slowly opened her eyes and saw two dark brown eyes looking at her intensely unknown to her, her cheeks turned to the shade of red and shied but just got lost in their own world. They came back to their senses when child interrupted, both straightened themselves and avoid looking at each other when the child again said, 'Geet di aap thik to ho na ?'

"GEET" wow what a name just like mishty n so musical, maan wondered. Geet was not able to meet his gaze. She said thank u in a very low tone and ran away from there as she was very embarrassed. Maan was still lost in her thoughts and was still standing in the rain. His thoughts were broken when his driver told him that traffic has been cleared and they should move. Maan half-heartedly left for office and asked dadimaa to send his clothes as he was totally wet. He reached office but during the meeting also he was still lost in her thoughts. It was strange for the staff as their boss didn't scold anyone from the morning and was smiling. It was indeed strange fact that The great MSK was smiling and that too without any reason.

PRESENT:

Maan came back to reality when someone knocked his cabin. He asked the person to come in and saw Adi coming. He was the most trust worthy employee of KC and was also a very good friend of maan. Adi entered the cabin and maan spoke.

Maan: Yes Adi any problem?

Adi sir gave his famous laughter but stopped when he saw Maan's angry glare.

Adi: Actually sir jo interior designing ke interview hue the ye unn saare candidates ki file hai jo shortlisted hue hai please have a look and sign kar dijiye.

Maan nodded and adi left the cabin. Maan was checking the file when suddenly he saw geet's photo. He checked the details and came to know that geet has applied for the post of interior designer and has been selected. He didn't know why but he was feeling very happy for geet. He checked all the qualifications and was very impressed. Later he left for a meeting, when he came back he saw dadimaa sitting in his cabin. Maan smiled seeing her.

Dadi: Are maan bte aap aa gye, jaiye jaa kr fresh ho jaiye hum lunch serve karte hai. Maan nodded n left to freshenup. When he came back saw he dadi serving food. He settled down and both had there lunch. After having lunch Maan sat on ground kept his head in her lap and closed his eyes. Dadi smiled seeing this, she new Maan always did this whenever he was sad or was thinking about something. She ruffles his hairs and asked: Kya hua Maan bte aaj aap itne khoye hoye lag rahe hai? Kya koi baat apko pareshan kar rhi hai? Maan nodded his head and said : Pata nahi dadimaa mujhe kya ho raha hai? Main use apne mann se nikal hi nahi paa raha hu jitni koshish kar raha hu use bhulane ki utna hi main apne aap me ulajhta jaa rha hu aisa kyun ho raha hai dadimaa? Please bataiye mujhe?

Dadi had no idea what maan was talking about but she was sure that it was not related to anything about his office but something close to his heart. Dadi asked 'Aap kiski baat kar rhe hai Maan? '

Maan: Dadi wo Geet aaj main use pehli baar dekha par phir bhi pata nahi aisa kyun lag raha hai jaise main use hamesha se janta hu, aisa lagta hai jaise uspe sirf mera haq ho, wo sirf mere liye hai, uski ankhen na jaane kyun mujhe uski taraf khinchti hai main apne aap ko uske bare mein sochne se kyun ahi rok paa rha hu? Ye kya ho raha hai dadimaa?

Dadi smiled and said: Apko pyar ho gaya hai bte. Maan immediately got up and looked at her with shocked expression n said: Aap ye kya keh rahi hai dadimaa mujhe pyar kaise ho sakta hai? Dadi: kyun bte apko pya r kyun nhi ho sakta? Apke paas koi wajah hai pyar na karne ki? Maan: Par dadi aise pyar kaise ho sakta hai main to use thik se jaanta bhi nahi or sirf ek baar hi mila hu? Dadi: Bete pyar humse puch kar thode hi hota hai wo to bas ho jaata hai bina jaane bina samjhe. Aur rahi baat milne milane ki to sirf ek nazar baki hai uss ehsaas ko jagane ke liye aur kabhi kabhi puri zindagi lag jaati hai use pehchane mein. Hum jante hain ki aap aise koi galti nahi karenge aur maan lijiye bte ki apko pya r ho gaya hai.Maan hugged her and said: Thank you dadi. I love soo much. You are the best. Dadimaa smiled and left from there. Maan smiled to himself and said: 'So MAAN SINGH KHURANA is in love. Welcome to Khurana constructions MS. GEET HANDA'

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey, beautifully written, must say.

hw do you guys prepare all the stuff, man!

by the way, me new to this forum.

me need buddies so pls add me in buddy list.

me begun a new ff on maaneet, me will send you link in this.

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Pls read and press like button, do not forget to comment.

i will await your answers.

regards,

treasuretrowel



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Posted: 12 years ago
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start love at first sight



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Posted: 12 years ago
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hei sweety
nice start
Loved the concepts and Maan he is such a cutie pie in this
I just love Maan so very much here
aowwweee
would wait for other parts as well
conti soon
and all the best
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Posted: 12 years ago
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love at first sight...

and Maan confessed his feelings to Daadima...

and now he is sure that he is in love...

Geet is going to join his company...

waiting how Geet will feel for him...

please pm me when u update...


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