Taani SS- Blindfold

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hi guys, its been ages I wrote something. I am totally bored by D3 and not at all in a right frame of mind. Still, just to calm myself, I am trying to write. Warning- I have turned into a bad writer. And I have no idea what I wrote. So I guess I have given enough warning. (Please don't ask me why I posted it if I am not confident. My hands are not obeying me)

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Chapter 1- Below
Chapter 2-


Swayam shouted, "Bolne se pehle do bar socha karo Taani. Phir tumhe bad me regret na karna pade"

They were in VP sir's office. Taani had just blurted out about D3 team's going out for the event in college hours.

Swayam could not take it anymore. What happened to her? Taani was behaving extremely foolish. Since when did his wonderful, lovely, caring sister, turned into a rude girl? He was just not able to understand this. He was filled with anger. Every word she spoke felt like an insult to him. He was not able to think rational. His anger took control of him. He just could not accept this change in Taani. Was it the same Taani, who cared so much about him, tried to support him always?

He could not understand her behavior. Out of nowhere, she had started shouting and lecturing everybody. For little mistakes. Why was she so hyper? He didn't realize his sister was so weak to lose her self control just because of a responsibility. She had been efficient til now. Successful as a GS. Always tried to do the best for the college and its students. Then why this sudden change? She had become a complete mystery to him.

He looked at her coldly. She had crossed her limit this time. He could not tolerate her behavior now. He looked at her angrily, she didn't even flinch under his cold gaze. Like a shameless person. Could power go to her head too much that she wouldn't care about his life now? Her shameless, not guilty gaze was like torture to him. He was hurt, but still stood on his position determined not to show any of his emotions. Until now, he was treating her like a kid. He thought she was just hyper. But now, the matter seemed more serious to him. Something was really not right with Taani.


How was the start? If you don't like it, please tell me. I would understand. No worries, no problem
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Posted: 12 years ago
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mee too really bored with this track
gud start dear
swayam wanted to know the reason behind taani's behaviour
plz plz update soon
and plz plz plz pm me
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nysh strt .. 👏
plz continue it .. 😃

me 2 bord wid dis stuff .. now .. 😡

update soon ..
thank u 4 d pm .. 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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aashu suerbb start yaar i loved it and even i am hell pissed of with the current track yaar thanks for writing yaar it was needed re nd haan plzz continue soon i'll be witing yaar😊😊😊
Edited by rakhiankita - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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me too bored with curent track...
nice start dear
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Posted: 12 years ago
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I love the start! It left me wanting to read more. Please do continue :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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the start was suprb...waiting for the next update..update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice start...
update soon =)
Edited by Mohit_monaya - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice star i like it
thanks for PM n do
it again
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Posted: 12 years ago
#10
me 2 bored & also frstretd wid ds d3 track nw
nice strt

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