VIRIKA OS : BLISS OF LOVE

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**UNRES*

VIrika live in US along with their kids.They love each other a lot...the whole family shares a great bond!
They are blessed with two sweethearts.They named d boy CHIRAG,who is 5 year old who loves her sister a lot like anything!N the girl named HASMIK,1 n a half year old..chirag mumma's boy n hasmik her father's princess...
Now,the story! They r going to WAKIKI BEACH,HAWAII,US.Chirag is really very excited as he is going to spend time with his parents and his cutiepie,Hasmik.They hv left d home n reached d beach.
CHARACTERS
viren vadhera
jeevika viren vadhera
chirag viren vadhera (deir son)- perfect mixture of virika..his hairs like viren.His eyes like jeevika.His nose like viren.
hasmik viren vadhera (deir daughter)-xerox copy of jeevika.hairs detto as viren.
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Viren-are jeevika! what r u doing ???
Jeevika-what am i doing ??? just playing with you my love! (splashes water on his face)
v-Umm...So someone wants to play wid me...(cming close to her)
J-Viren jii...What are u doing ?
V-Nothing jeevika jii...just playing with u..
J-viren jii...bache dekh lenge..
V-to dekhne do..
J-Viren jii chodiye mujhe (She splashes water on his face and tries to move but viren holds her by waist!)
J-viren jii...
V-ji jeevika jii...
J-please leave me..
V-not so soon,meri jaan!!
J-please...making a puppy face
V-Okkk!!!!!m leaving u but u wil have to compensate for it..!!!!
J-Ok! DONE!
(jUST then chirag enters the convo)
Chirag- Mommy !!!!! y dada was asking u to compensate n dat too for what ??
(Jeevika gives a death glare to viren and viren winks at her...)
J-nothing my baby! (she holds him in her arms)Your father was just asking me to compensate for..
(Just then viren interrupts before she could ans his ques)
V-My boy! Where is my sweetheart ? you were with her right ???
C-yes dadaa..! She is sitting there playing with sand.
V-Whatt ??? You left hasmik alone ??? How could you this ??
(Jeevika n Viren got tensed and rushed towards their princess...They were in awwweee after seeing the sight in front f their eyes.She was playing there with sand and was looking sooo cute!She had sand in her hands and virika were looking at her with the sparkle in their eyes after seeing the angel f their life!They looked at each other and smiled to each other..)
V- She is jus like you!I love you both immensely! You gave me the two bestest gift f my life...my two little sweethearts,Chirag and hasmik! Thank you jeevika..
(jeevika cuts him n keeps a finger in his lips)
J-Viren ji!Thank you to you too as it was not possible without you..
V-really now! (coming closer to her,turning on his naughty mood)
J-Viren jii...
V-Hmm...
(Just then they heard crying voice f their angel)
J-(holding her in her arms)What happened my princess ???
(She points towards the man who was walking with balls balloons and ol oder stuff)
CHIRAG-Dadaa...i think she wants that royal blue balloon with green polka dots on it,,that is lovely!
(Hasmik smiles at her caring brother giving an expression that he is right.His brother loves her a lot and can get everything whatever her sister wants at any cost)
C-Dadaa...me too want that purple one with pink polka dots!
Viren carried him in his arms and engulfed his son in a cute hug and gave a kiss on his cheek chirag too kisses his dad on his cheek.and said..love you dadaa...you r d best! viren replied-love you too champ!..J n hasmik smiled at their bond n smiled at them..)
J--Hmm...sosomeone is forgetting someone..
V-Oh! Chirag opened his left arm n viren his right and made jeevika n hasmik part f their hug..the family shared the picture perfect moment n den viren breaks the hug..)
V-Balloon wala chala jaega...
C-Ohh !!!!!! and family shared cute laugh!
(Viren left Chirag on d ground,walked towards the balloon seller,bought the balloons n paid the money! He gave the balloons to d respective kids n kids had their quality time! Later they had their lunch n got busy..chirag on his psp while hasmik slept on her seat.Viren's head was on jeevika's lap and he was cntinuosly staring at her)
J-Viren jii...aap mujhe aise kyu dekh rahe h ?
V-Kyu ??? dekh nahi sakta kya..Tum meri eklauti biwi ho...hAq banta hai mera..{jeevika blushes}
V-Ye aankhein !!! bas kya batau jeevika bas inhe dekh ke main inhi main kho jaata hu...duniya ki koi khabar hi nahi rehti...{jeevika blushes} Ye chehra na jaane kab isne mere dil ko loot lia tha..ye zulfein kya batau..!!! maar hi daalaaa...
J-Viren ji!!! Ye app kya bol rahe h ? {jeevika blusHES}
V-ye honth (moving finger on her lips)
J-bas kariye viren jii ab aap...
V-hmm..chod deta hu par don't frget raatko...you hav to cmpensate!(winks at her)
(Jeevika blushes really very hard this time)
J-Viren jii...
V-Hmm...
J-Ye dhalta hua suraj kitna acha lagta hai
V-Nhai!bilkul nahii.. merr suraj se zaada nahi..(getting up from her lap while cupping her face)
J-(J blushes)Viren jii i love you a lot! i want to thank god fr giving u to me..
V-Me love you infinte jeevika jii...please ek kiss...plzz...
J-viren jii!!! aap aise kyu h ??
V-jaisa bhi hu tumhara hi to hu..
(J gaves a peck to him on his cheek)
V- aaye haaye meri jaan...(pointed towards lips)maine yaha kaha tha...
J-viren jii...please...
V-Chalo thk h! (looks at the shedding sun)
ho chandni jab tak raat deta hai har koi sath...
tum magar andheron main na chodna mera saath...
(he holds her hand tightly and kisses it)
J-Jb koi baat bigad jaaye jab koi mushkil pad jaaye..
tum dena sath mer o hum nawaaa...
(she places her hand on his and held it really very tight...they had a solid eye lock! but got interrupted by hasmik's crying)
V-Are yaar..!!!!!! {j smiles at viren}koi ni..koi nii...has lo..raatko kaha jaogi mujhse bachke..
J-Picking her up from her seat.Kya hua meri doll ko ??? Virenji raat hone ko aa gai h time ka pata hi nahi chala..
V-Hmm...u r ryt !! Chalte h...chirag get up..
C-Dadaa...
V-what now ??
C-me want to get into ur arms...(jeevika n viren laugh at dis statement f his)
V-C'mon champ..u r a 5 year old big boy now..
C-Dada...please...m not dat much big!
V-okk...!! (he picks him up n d family went towards the parking area...dey asked d wallet to bring their black mercedes n soon d vallet bought the car..jeevika put hasmik in her car seat viren placed chirag in d back seat n den dey both got into their seats n finally d car started.)
C-Ddaa...mUma...
Virika-Hmm..
C-We all had a lot f fun today! thnku fr bringing us here...
J-baby! when u r happy we are happy..
(Hasmik was wide awaken after d slong sleep,she felt uncmfrtable in her car seat so jeevika made her sit in her lap..viren and chirag cntinued deir cute talks while jeevika n hasmik were talking.)
J- say daaa...say maa...
(hasmik laughed at jeevika's statement)
J-don't laugh! say maa..say daa...
V-rehne do..tumse nahi hga..she wont speak until n unless i ask her to do so..
J-okk!! if it is like dat den try..
V-say da...my princess...say daa...
J-say maa...
V-say daa...
J-say maa..
V-say daa..
J-maa..
V-daaa...
(soon dis matter turned into fight.both the kids were enjoying after seeing their parents fighting like small little kids)
V-dekh lena...she will say daa...
J-nahi maa..
v-dekhenge...
j-hmm...dekhenge...*hasmik giggled*
(hasmik started playing with her father's ring which he was wearing in his finger and his hand was on d gear.Jeevika tried a lot to get viren rid off her small little fingers so that he cud drive safely..)
V-what r u doing?
J-you are geting disturbed
V-no..i am not..(looks at j)
J-saamne dekho...
V-nahi tumhe dekhna h
J-Viren ji please...(making his face turn towards d road)
V-okk!! my FM jii...
(soon they reached their home till then hasmik was asleep on jeevika's shoulder with her hand on her locket and chirag was also asleep by then wid a wide smile on his face . they both looked at their kids n were in aww state as both were loking soo cute..dey both were very similar to each other!)
Viren opened d car door to jeevika and helped her come out as she was holding hasmik in her hands.Viren picked chirag in his arms and entered d home.Both f them placed their kids in their room.Placed a blanket over them.Viren changed chirag's clothes while jeevika had already changed hasmik's in d car.they switched off the lights f their room planted a kiss on their forehead's n left the room.They made their way to their room.

VIRIKA ROOM...
v-Jeevika i think i left the car door opened.I am going to have a check on it.(viren leaves)
J-Viren jii..viren jii...(she yells his name loud)
(viren rushes to his room)What happened ???? Are you alright ??
J-Yeah! m olright..called u bczz i forgot to tell u that their balloons,our laptops are all in the back seat .Bring them too...
V-hadd karti ho yaar! bas inni si baat...dara hi dia tha tumne mujhe..waise le aunga..my love!
(j smiles,v leaves.)
After a couple f minutes he returned back with his hands full.He kept the balloons n kids room and laptops in study room.He entered his room while jeevika was taking out clother from almirah.She was unaware dat viren had arrived.Viren gave her a back huggie.
J-Mr viren Vadhera first go,take shower and change d clothes.
V-Mrs. Jeevika Viren Vdhera,i see,you have also not changed d clothes yet so lets go together n change n take d shower it will save time and more u waste time more the compensation will get delayed.
J-So,lawyer sahab,it wont be like dat u go n cme fast U r delaying it arguing wid me.
V-u r such a stubborn.Ok! i am going.
While viren was going jeevika thought that she will change as fast as she can in the room itself,viren enters the washroom n locks it.jeevika starts removing her clothes and when she was done removing and was about to wear her hot,black sexy nighty she heard d sound f d door being opened!
J-viren jii.!!!!!!!!!!!!!
V-kya hua ???
J-m changing clothes..
V-Oh! so its like that.I forgot my trousers outside can u give it to me.
J-hmm wait..don't cum out m giving.(viren asusual,he n his naughty mind he came out f d washroom.as she turned she bumped into his chest)
J-ouch !!!! bachaooo...!!!!! Viren ji ye kya kiya apne ??
V-Kya kiya maine ?
J-maine apko mana kiya tha na bahar ane ke lie...
V-so what a big deal my love ? M ur husband u r my wife n noone can deny dis fact! and humare do do bache h..u know what i mean *winks at her*
J was about to say something till then viren sealed her lips.Jeevika was hell shocked at this sudden action f his but later she responded with same passion.They had a solid french kiss.After d long session f d kiss they broke it up when they felt breathless..
J-Viren jii..
V-Jeevika...shhh...(putting his fingr on her lips)
J-butt...
V-no buts..tonight u r mine!...
HE lifted her in his muscular arms and they shared a solid eyelock.Viren ended up landing on d bed.Viren on top f her...Jeevika felt a little uncmfrtable but later she enjoyed his touch nd responded wid equal passion.
Viren gave a kiss on her forehead and said "Thankyou for coming in my life!"
On eyes "For giving me the two best gifts f my life!"
On cheeks "For d love you gave me"
On jawline"For being wid me in ol my sadness n happiness..
On lips "Thnku for cmpleting me...i love you !!!!!!!!!!"
You are foreven n ever mine..MY SHONA!!!
He nuzzled her neck.He gave her love bites to which jeevika moaned in pleasure.Now it was jeevika's turn n she was on top f viren.Straightway looking into his eyes.
Thank you for completing viren jii...thankyou for coming in my life...thank you for supporting me always...thank you for everything...your love...I LOVE U A LOT viren jii...i am forever yours n will be till the last breath f my life..
My breath! my soul! my heartbeat! everything is u n our sweethearts virenjii..!!!! they had a solid passionate kiss...
They spent whole night in each other's arms making love all night!!!!!!
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Thank you for reading it! please give the feedback i love to read when someone appreciates my work!
This idea popped in my mind during maths period n i really wanted to pen it down! it takes a lot f time to write a story but seriouslu when u dont get a good response it feels like u r d worst! f no use...well,enough f my bak bak now...give me ur feedback...
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MehakGera thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Res
Unres
Briliant as i told u
Superb , fantastic have shortage of words...
Lved it so mich
But names yaar ...ok ok the
Vaise hot update yaar
Ossm keep on writing dear
Edited by mehakLUVSvirika - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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unres
BRILLIANT!!!
the kids are sooo cute! and chirag is such a sweetie!
viren is so naughty and jeevs as usual is too shy!
Loved how you described everything!
AWESOME
Edited by kryanvirika05 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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guess i'm the only one to Unres lol
Wow what a brilliant innovative idea!
Marvellous indeed...
I loved Chirag alot... wish we get to see something like this on the show...
Lovely OS... nd Viren's still naughty here😛
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Posted: 12 years ago
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loved d names
a boy hs to b a mumma boy n a grl hs to b hs dad angel :P
it ws awesome part
i too luv mercedes
it ws so romantic
viren is so romantic
jeevika is stil shy aftr hvin to kids 😆
loved it
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow awesome dear i loved ur update sooo much thanks for the pm dear and please do continue soon😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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my god !!!!!!! the temperature in my house just rose by a million degrees😳😳😳
such a hot update !!!!!
and they are soo cute with the kids!!!!
thanks fro the update and for the pm😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome!
I loved it..
The kids were just too cute
Hehehe..Naughtu Viren :p
It was a treat to read your os
Thanks for the PM
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Posted: 12 years ago
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That was Sweetly, Cutely, Adorably, and Romantically written. Loved the way the sequence detailed explanation and presentation.
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That was Sweetly, Cutely, Adorably, and Romantically written. Loved the sequence detailed explanation and presentation.

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