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hello everyone i am here with new os...i know as tarey fan we all are demanding sum changes and additions in tarey story so i had written a story on current track...hope u all guyz like it

after having todays argument with rey she reaches home...freshens up and checks out college website for any new info...and sees that college students have commented on her relationship with rey very badly...

Many have written rey was best with kriya only pata nahi usne kya dekh kar tani ko choose kiya...guyz just all that comments that tarey and tani hatrs write..

so tani seeing this take all the things on the floor and hurts herself also and runs out to washroom crying like anything...suddenly swayam enters seeing all the things on floor gets shocked and also saw blooddrops on floor make him more concerne for tani...he start picking up things and also screams for tani...when he takes laptop in his hands he sees all the rubbish and tears fell down from his eyes and also see previous comments that students hve written doubting her skills...
Then he forcefully opens up the door of washroom and see our little princess crying like anything he goes to her
sw:tani tum ne bataya kyun nahi yar sab kuch apne ap he jhel liya...ek bar to bata diya hota.main tumhara bhai hun koi paraya nahi...itna bhi apna nahi samjha...
Ta:bhai...apne bhi to nahi ake mujhse ek bar bhi bat ki...apne bhi to mujhe misunderstand kiya...apko bhi yahi laga ki mai hyper ho rahin hun par yeh janane ki koshish ki mere is behaviour ka reason kya hai...???
Sw:i am sorry tani...par ab aur nahi..mai tumhe ek desi tani se ek leader tani banaunga...fir dekhte hain ki kaun tumhara mazak banata hai..aur han tani regarding rey mujhe lagta hai tumhe rey ke bare mein papa ko sab bata dena chahiye...agar tumahri destiny mein uska sath likha hai to koi bhi tumhe us se dur nahi le jayega...to plz is dar mein mat raho ki rey ke dancer hone ki baat jankar papa tum dono ko sath mein nahi rhene denge...
Ta:aur...agar destiny mein hamara sath nahi likha to...
Sw:to tum sochna woh tumhara kabhi tha hi nahi...par dont get upset...be positive hum papa ko samjhayenge ki dance bhi ek career option ho sakta hai...okkk


precap:tayam goes for shopping and hve a makeover of tani...damn she is luking beautiful in skintight salwar kameez...
Hope u guyz like it... plz do comment and ya if u all like it plzz do comment...
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priyal_TaaRey thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Great os dear...
Really nice..
Precap is wow..
Update soon .n do pm me
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Posted: 12 years ago
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great start...precap is interesting...
continue soon =)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Damn! I lvd it,taayam r d best.Update sn...
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wow awsm do continue n do PM plzz
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Its awesome outstanding mindblowing fabulous great update precap its awesome plz plz plz do update soon
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A very dfrnt concept...
Continue soon! 😉
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Great part, glad to see swayam supporting taani
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Awesome update and I love that Swayam is there for Taani. Plz continue
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Posted: 12 years ago
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okkk thanku guyzzz really i am overwhelmed with response...thankuuu

swayam boosts tani to and makes her confiddnt of her skills...and stays in her room whole night so that she doesnt feel lonely and whole night they chit chat and tani share her feelings with swayam...regarding group members...
sw:tani tumne gang members ko misunderstand kiya..woh log tumhe apna dost mante hain...tum faltu mein un par itna gussa ho rahi ho...i can bet on that ki un mein se kisi ne bhi yeh sab rubbish comments nahi likhen honge...
ta:sorry bhai...par ap batao us time par main kya karti...main wrong frame of mind mein thi...us time par halat hi kuch aise the ki mere pas koi option nahi bacha...but i promise ab aisa nahi hoga...main fir se unke sath ache se behave karungi...
sw:tumhe ek aur promise karna hoga ki tum ab se mere sath har ek bat share karogi...ek bhi bat nahi chupapgi chahe woh...rey ki hi kyun na ho...i mean ya main uncomfortable hun par even then tum mujhe bataogi...
ta:okk mere typical indian bhai...and thanku bhai..mera sth dene ke liye...
sw:han ur welcum and ab so jao hamein kal shopping par jana hai...
ta:shopping par ...lekin kyun.???
sw:kyunki ab tumhare makeover ka time aa gaya hai...tani yeh jodhpur nahi hai ki yahan par tumhare talent ki kadar
hogi yeh mumbai hai yahan par logon ki phenchan unke kapadon se hoti hai...so time for change...
ta:ok bhai ...gud nght...

Morning
tayam came back frm shopping and having coffee
ta:bhai manana padega apko kya kamal ki choice hai...
Sw:thanku...ab bas kal main dekhta hun kaun hamari gs ka mazak banate hain...

Precap...next day in college...rey becums dumbstruck as soon as he sees tani...and drool over her...
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