SS: Mission Honeymoon

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SS: Mission Honeymoon

Hey frnz… Just thought of a short story track with respect to the current track "avoiding honeymoon"

Amita enters kitchen…

Falguni was cooking food for dinner…

when amita enters…

Amita: mummyji shall I help you… waise bhi I was getting bored in room…

Falguni: smiles happily and says.. haan amita aa jao… lekin ek sharat pe… kitchen me.. koi bhi toofan nahi chahiye…

Amita; nods her head and says… ok...

Amita: aap kya bana rahi hai mummyiji…?

Falguni: beta aaj na.. paneer aur dal makhni banana hai…

Amita: wow mummyji.. ye toh mera favorite hai…

Falguni: hmm.. aur amit ka bhi..

amita miles to know that Amit's and Amita's fav. food is same…

Falguni: Amita ye dal me se kankar (stones) nikaal do beta…

Amita: ji mummyji…

Falguni: aur kanakr.. zameen par nahi.. dust bin me.. dalna… main.. bahaar jaakar.. dekhti hoon.. ke gopal kaka ne.. table saaf kiya hai ya nahi…?

Amita: ji.. mummyji…

when.. Amit comes back early from office… and asks gopal kaka… .. kaka amita kidhar hai?

Gopal kaka: abhi kuch der pehle madam ji kitchen me thi…

Amit: ji kaka…

Amit rushes to kitchen and finds.. Amita cleaning the dal.. and singing.. song… while cleaning the dal.. (remember she can concentrate only when she listens to music..)

surkh waala, sauz waala, faiz waala love…

hota hai jo…love se zyada, waise waala love… ishq waala love…

Amit stops.. and listens to Amita singing … and recalls that Amita can concentrate only when she listens to music and thinks.. waah amita.. you are so cute… Hm cancel karne ke liye aap khud hi gaana gaa rahi hai… kaam karte karte… adjusts his glasses and stands back near platform and hinks. pata nahi parso ka HM kaise cancel hoga…

Amita completes her work.. and finds.. Amit staring at amita with a smile…

amita: Amit! aap aap yaha kya kar rahe hai.. aur aap itni jaldi office se kaise aa gaye…?

Amit: know what Amita I couldn't concentrate in office today… all because of you… Amita…

Amita: arre.. agar office me aap concentrate nahi kar sake toh usme meri kya galati hai amit?

Amit: kya glati hai? sab kuch tumhari hi galati hai… tumhari wajah se meri raaton ki neend, din ka chain such sab kuch… gadbad ho gaya hai aur tum yaha… aaramse.. gaana gaa rahi ho… aur wo bhi kaunsa Ishq waala love!!! aapne mummy se ek baar bhi baat nahi ki.. honeymoon ke bare me… nahi…

Amita: amit.. chup please…

Amit: ab kyun chup chup kar rahi ho.. maine kal kaha than a tumse.. honeymoon…

when Amita… says.. naaniji..

Amit: nani.. ab ye naani kaha se aa gayi amita… har baar bahanemat banao.. main tumse.. honeymoon ki baat kar raha hoon…

Amita: holds amit's hands and tells nani aapke peeche and indicates through eyes…

Amit turns around.. and finds… naani, baa, Tina and Falguni behind…

Amit: mummy, naani…

Tina: coughing… Amit.. beta.. tum bechari amita pe kyun gussa nikal rahe ho…ab amita bahu hai beta…. Falu didi se baat karne me thoda hich kichayegi na..? humse aakar keh diya hota…

Falguni: Tina.. ek minute… ab iss baat par hum… Amit ke papa ke aane ke baad hi baat karenge… main abhi unhe phone karke bulati hoon…

Amit/ Amita: tensed..

Amit: mummy

naani: amit beta jao aur fresh ho jao… amita beta… amit ke liye coffee banaar leke jao…

Amita: ji naaniji…

In room: amit walking from one place to another in tension…

Amita: coffee

Amit; nahi chahiye..

Amita: amit.. maine aapke liye coffee banayi hai..

Amit: amita.. mujhe nahi chahiye.. ek toh honeymoon ka tension.. upar se… ab papa.. ko kya batau .. kyun cancel kar rahe hai batau… mummy naaraz ho gayi hai.. upar se… ab papa ka gussa… aap papa ka gussa jaanti nahi hai amita.. mujhe toh sich ke darr lag raha hai…

Amita: chalo acha hai.. kisi se toh darte hai aap.. varna jab dekho tab… mujhpe hi gussa nikal te rehte hai…

Amit: kuch kaha tumne..?

Amita: haan nahi.. matlab.. coffee… mujhe banana se pehle keh diya hota ke nahi chahiye toh… meri itnai mehnat bekaar gayi…

Amit: arre baba.. ye coffee.. do main pee leta hoon… and takes cup from Amita… and gups coffee in a rush…

Amit: ooo maa.. its hot… god damn it..

Amita: jal raha hai kya?

Amit: nahi… thanda kag raha hai.. aap aise sawaal kyun puchti ho amita?

Amita: sorry.. paani…

Amit; drinks water…. and finishes his coffee..

Amita is about to take the cup and leave room.. when Riya comes in and says…

Riya: amita amit kaka tum dono ko neeche bula rahe hai…

Amit: tensed.. adjusts his specs and says.. haan.. aate hai…

In living room:

kirit bhai, rohan, kaka, falguni, tina riya, naani, baa are sitting… with a grin on their face when amita and amit come together.. look at each other…

Kirit bhai: amit ye.. mummy kya keh rahi hai… ke.. honeymoon ke wajah se tumahr raaton ki neend din ka chain such sab gadbad ho gaya hai..

Amit: haan.. woh papa… kaajal aur atul ki shaadi ke liye thoda time… milega

Kirit: amita beta… tum uski chinta mat karo.. hum sab hai na… ab woh hamara bhi parivar hai… rohan aur riya hai na.. woh dekh lenge…

Riya: / Rohan: haan…haan… kaka…

Amit: nahi papa.. woh..

Falguni: amit beta… maana ke amita ghar ki bahu hai.. woh thoda hichkichayegi… lekin.. tum toh bte ho gar ke.. mujhse aake keh diya hota … ke tumhe honeymoon prepone karna hai.. toh… hum tumhari tickets prepone kar dete…

Amit; haan.. maa… main… kehne hi waala tha ke.. honeymoon prepone!!!!

Amita: prepone???

Falguni, naani, tina, Riya.. all laugh…

Amit: nahi.. papa.. aap log galat samajh rahe hai…

Amita: haan mummyiji…

Falguni: amita beta… darr ne waali koi baat nahi hai… main maa hoon tumhari… kuch bhi ho.. toh bejijhak keh do mujhe..

Riya: haan.. raaton ki neend, din ka such chain gadbad karne se acha hai... sach bata dena… and gives a naughty smile.. kyun kaaki…

Amit: woh mummy.. mera I mean hamara kehne ka matlab woh nahi tha…

Riya: acha toh batao amit.. tum aaj itne jaldi kaise aagaye? batao workaholic Amit apna "the kaam" chodke.. kaise aa gaye? aur tumhari raaton ki neend.. kisne udaayi hai.. hum sab jaante hai…

and sings…ishq waala love.. kyun amita sahi hai na…

amita: woh..didi.. actually…

Falguni: amita beta.. rishte me tum riya se badi ho.. di nahi bulate .. riya bulao…

Amita: ji mummyji…

Falguni: amit beta.. ab tum aur amita…parso ki jagah kal nikloge… tumahre papa ne .. HM ke liye kal ke tickets nikaaliye hai

Amit / Amita together: kal!!!!

All surpised…

Falguni: haan.. aaj ka tickets book karne ke liye kahu?

Amita: nahi mummyiji…

Naani:.. waise bhi amita beta … kaafi der ho gayi hai.. tum dono ki packing baaki hai na… abhi.. isliye kal… hi jaana padega… varna aaj hi bhej dete tumhe

Amit: coughs.. and says… mummy lekin…

Falguni: smiles and says… tumhari galti hai Amit pehle bataya hota toh.. aaj hi… nikal gaye hote…

All leave…

Amit; in shock.. sits on sofa…

Amita.. picks up water bottle and says.. paani pee lijiye… waise bhi.. aapne.. aaj ke liye kaafi saara raayta faila diya hai… and smiles in her heart… ishq wala love…

Amit adjusts his specs and drinks..water.. kal.. ab kya karu??

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emeraldeye thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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🤣 🤣 Too good ! 👏 Kafi acha track tha!

I could visualize the whole scene in front of me. Luckyji good work,keep it up.👍🏼

Edited by emeraldeye - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: emeraldeye

🤣 🤣 Too good ! 👏 Kafi acha track tha!

I could the visualize the whole scene in front of me. Luckyji good work,keep it up.👍🏼


Thanks emeraldye
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Posted: 12 years ago
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superb story
just awesomeee 👏

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