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hey people,
its sunday and its late i know, but i have the NEXT installment to this story ready.
a shout out THANK YOU to every one who liked and commented..



part 3:


Zoya was a live wire, jo chalte phirte kisi ko bhi 400 volts ka jhataka laga deti hai, Asad sighed in relief that he was rid of her. He had dropped her at the taxi stand and waited at some distance till she got into one and went her way, something wanted him to stop her, kch ajeeb tha - he couldn't see her go. She wasn't that bad, but she talked too much, one thing he liked about her was her spirit, and an unfaltering take on everything in life. He turned his eyes away from her disappearing form and shook his head clear and started towards his destination. Anyways Zoya was history now. He had better things to think about, he decided.

Asad stopped his car in the driveway of the prospective girl's home. Ok so what was he going to say and do?? he was clueless, damn Zoya she stole all my thinking time. He sighed and walked towards the door and rang the bell.

He had to ring twice until the door sprang open and found Zoya farooqi standing with her mouth reaching the ground. "Allah Miyah !! app yahan, app mujhe follow kar rahe the", Zoya screeched at him.

"Omg, Not her again", Asad Face palmed himself. "did he come to a wrong adresss or was zoya the girl ??"

"zoya listen to me I wasn't '.. he was stopped mid sentence by her.

"har stalker yehi kehta hai, I me mey wooh' myujhe sb pata hai" zoya was screaming and accusing him.

Her raised voice brought an middle age woman out, "kya hua zoya beta?"

"ye dekhein jis akdu ka mey zikar kar rahi thi, ye wohi male chauvinist hain, mera piicha karte karte yahan bhi agaye," zoya complained to the lady.

Lady looked at Asad and was taken aback, all she could manage was "zoya app abhi andar jayein"

"but aaa'." Zoya for the first time was cut in, the lady sternly said her to "I said now zoya".

Zoya passed an annoyed look towards Asad and went inside.

Asad watched the family drama amused, ZOya was a handful for everyone, he wondered ye apni ammi par gai ya abu par.. anyways why was he thinking about zoya, he came here to reject her or he could reconsider his decision of direct rejection, this girl made him so confused and irritated, he shrugged her off and said "asalaam u alikum aunty, mey Asad Ahmed Khan hoon"

"wasalaam beta, I know who you are, I am Anika. please come inside" she replied.

She had a confused expression on her face, Asad noticed, maybe it's because I came without notice, he thought.

"dilshad appi ne bataya hi nahi app ane wale hain", she asked, she was nervous.

"jee mujhe kch kaam tha Indore mey, and ane ka plan final nahi tha iss liye itellah nahi di, I am sorry", he said.

"haan haan bahut acha kia beta" she was fumbling with words. " mey Dilshad ko fone karne hi wali thi, ab app agaye hain tou ye bhi theek hai".

"is everything alright"? Asad inquired.

" haan nahi haan sb theek hai", was her answer.

Asad was glad he came uninvited or maybe he wouldn't have got to know the real side of them, he wouldn't have got to meet zoya "aunty mujhe kch baat karni thi" he said.

"mujhe bhi app se zaruri baat karni hai" she said.

" jee kahiye aunty", Asad was getting confused k yahan ho kia raha hai.

"beta dekho baat aisi hai k, YE Rishta NAHI HO SAKTI, hum maafi mangte hain", she was embarrassed.

Asad stood up instantly the words ye rishta nahi ho sakti.. This is what he had initially planned to do, and here it was served to him on platter, but why wasn't he happy? He should feel ecstatic but no such feeling came. Did he really wanted time to consider his relation with Zoya, could they have an equation. But now it was all finished.

Anika explained her stance, "dekhein beta humey bht khushi hoti dilshad appi k ghar rishta kar k, but humari beti' humari beti Aneesha ne apni pasand se shadi kar li hai"

Aneesha!! Wait rewind back, Aneesha the girl whom zoya helped in a runaway marriage. Jis ghar mey zoya ho wahan aisa toofan na ho, aisa ho sakta hai kya. He facepalmed himself. But zoya was here too, Asad thought.

Zoya and another girl came into the hall. And Asad was struck by an Instant plan.

"beta m feeling so bad refusing your proposal, but mere liye meri beti ki khushi important hai, I hope you understand", said Anika.

He sat down near anika and said "app ye kya keh rahi hain aunty?" Asad acted innocent dumb. "App ki dono betian app k pass hai"

She turned at zoya, and said "ye zoya hai, aneesha ki best friend, meri beti jaisi hai".

"I hate to say this aunty, ammi ki bahut chahat thi k app k ghar se rishta jurre, but aneesha tou married hain, and zoyaaa''.. never mind".

"zoyaa, yes zoya".. anika aunty's mind took a full 360 degree turn to match making. " Asad beta ek min, app humare ghar se aise nah jaa sakte' zoya ki bhi shadi ki umar ho gai hai, mey inki appi se baat karun gi, aur mujhe pata hai who inkaar nahi karein gi. App ko koi aitrazz tou nahi".

Zoya stood there rooted, but she kept her mouth shut for once in her life. She would figure something out later, right now wasn't the time, because Anika aunty was like her mother, she wouldn't embarrass her more today.

Asad smirked and hi fi'd himself mentally, as he had hit right an exact bulls eye, he turned an apologetic embarrassed woman into a match making hag, and he got the Asad weds Zoya thought process started, with time they could come to an understanding or least kill each other. " mey ammi se baat karon ga Zoya k bare mey, ab mey chalta hoon, Allah Hafiz".

He was on the drive way, when he heard her expected outburst, "Allah miyah!! App apne app ko smjhte kya hain, aise hi thodi kisi larki k rishte ki baat karte hain, aaj hello hi hui and aaj hi app ne rishta ki baat chala di".

"mey ne kab ki rishtey ki baat, anika aunty ne khud kaha app k samne", Asad replied enjoying her outburst.

"meri assumption tou akdu n chauvinist par hi thi'' mujh nahi pata tha app itne kamine hain", zoya was irritated by his cool attitude towards all this, how did they have role reversals.

"I was a shareef seedha sada banda UNTIL You happened in my life" he winked at her and left her staring at him.


...


so guys how was it????

i know there is not much Asya in it, but yaar ab mey ne rishta karwa dia hai, sari zindagi sath hi rahein gey 😉😉



Everything from a rock to Criticism is welcome.😳



@sohu - my lawyer this is your hiring fees i knw thora hai, bt abhi k liye yehi rakho.😆😆


Is something wrong with the LIKE button,please click n check😆😆





Edited by blueflames - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
run run
asa fast as you can
you can catch me m a ginger bread woh-man 😆

res

unres

You wrote it apppuu? I didnt expect. Mujhe 400V ka jhatka laga.
Rest for the rest.

I will read it again. 😆
Edited by MisHumptyDumpty - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow amazing updt...yaha toh pehle asad ne 360' ka turn liya aur phir anika aunty ko 360' ka turn lene me majbur kar diya ...haha i so love this update...cont soon...tumhare pm karese pehle hi maine padhliya...see i m a great stalker...lol
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Posted: 12 years ago
hayeee these words by him made me die!


"I was a shareef seedha sada banda UNTIL You happened in my life" he winked at her and left her staring at him.




im sooo loving it babes! jaldi hi upload kijiyega next part


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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: shanakyasharan

hayeee these words by him made me die!


"I was a shareef seedha sada banda UNTIL You happened in my life" he winked at her and left her staring at him.




im sooo loving it babes! jaldi hi upload kijiyega next part


thank you so much 😃
will try to update soon
Edited by blueflames - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Asyalover

wow amazing updt...yaha toh pehle asad ne 360' ka turn liya aur phir anika aunty ko 360' ka turn lene me majbur kar diya ...haha i so love this update...cont soon...tumhare pm karese pehle hi maine padhliya...see i m a great stalker...lol


yes Asad did take a turn, all because of sohbat ka asar, wasie bhi shadi final nahi hui, he just got the thought process started.. 😳
and love you for being such a great stalker.

thank you for the wonderful comment. 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
Appi 🤗

If this is what you give as my fees I am your official lawyer for the rest of your life..😆
koi doubt mat rakhna 😳

But this lawyer of yours is very greedy and not seedhi saadhi at all...and I dont intend to change also
(KaBhi bhi nahiin 😉),
so I want more such posts from you 😉 😃

And this one was just A.M.A.Z.I.N.G 👏 👍🏼
Edited by sophiya_92 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sophiya_92

Appi 🤗

If this is what you give as my fees I am your official lawyer for the rest of your life..😆
koi doubt mat rakhna 😳

But this lawyer of yours is very greedy and not seedhi saadhi at all...and I dont intend to change also
(KaBhi bhi nahiin 😉),
so I want more such posts from you 😉 😃

And this one was just A.M.A.Z.I.N.G 👏 👍🏼


i was just asking ankiewa that did somebody tell you abt this post... 😳
Allah Miyah !! i know none of us is seedha sada, all of us are full on Maantals 😆😆, aur ye KaBhi change nahi hone wala 😆

thank you soo much for reading and writing such a wonderful comment 🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: blueflames


i was just asking ankiewa that did somebody tell you abt this post... 😳
Allah Miyah !! i know none of us is seedha sada, all of us are full on Maantals 😆😆, aur ye KaBhi change nahi hone wala 😆

thank you soo much for reading and writing such a wonderful comment 🤗



Hayye meri Appi you are sach mein adorable 🤗
And yeah ankie inboxed me the link, thats exactly how I came to know of it!!! 😲
We are the maantally challenged species of QH..jo KaBhi bhi change nahiin ho sakta 😆😆
And dont worry about the comments...I'll bombard your posts with them 🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sophiya_92



Hayye meri Appi you are sach mein adorable 🤗
And yeah ankie inboxed me the link, thats exactly how I came to know of it!!! 😲
We are the maantally challenged species of QH..jo KaBhi bhi change nahiin ho sakta 😆😆
And dont worry about the comments...I'll bombard your posts with them 🤗


thank you 😳🤗

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