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Posted: 12 years ago
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Guyz i know this might b new bt i have written dis ff of 1d the r a british band few people might know abt it bt hope u like it!!!!!!!


Character sketch:-

Grace is the daughter of a businessman. She is very beautiful, quiet, likes shopping n doesn't mix up a lot. She is a brilliant singer.

Janice is grace's bff n chantelsgrase's n Janice's parents r business partners.she is quiet and luv writing songs.

Brianna's father owns a caf shop. She is a hard working girl mix's up wid people a lot she luvs playing d casio.she works part time 2 collect money 4 her collage as she wants 2 b a professional drummer and make a band of her own.

Sashya mother and fater have divorced her mother is a successful architect she is notin contact with her father bt she knows he is a manager of a band. She use 2 b very kind after her mother n dad divorced she b came very quiet n likes playing d casio.

Natline is a normal girl her mother owns a 5* hotel her father owns a dance academy she is a fab dancer she is a professional n she likes playing d guitar she wants 2 take dance seriously and bcum a professional n own an own academy of dance n also she wants 2 b a singer.

HOPE U LIKE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!

tell if i shud continue or no???

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Posted: 12 years ago
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a big yes from my side...
all beautiful creativie stories are welcomed 😆😆😆😆😆
Edited by shivi77 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: shivi77

a big yes from my side...

all beautiful creativie stories are welcomed 😆

awww!!!!!!!!! ty sooo much i will post chapter 1 soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Episode 1

They all go 2 d top university in London

Grace is d pop of d university. Brianna is very funny always making every1 laugh. Janice is d peace keeper. Sashya is quiet n is d topper of d university n luvs reading. Natline is d captain of dramatics n d dance sector of d university. He all r Friends.

They had a party 2 attend none of them were excited as it was at d 'Plastids' that is what they use 2 call themselves they were very cruel. They didn't like Janice , Brianna , natline , Sashya , and Grace . as the were very cool n pop in d university . they were d coolest people in d university n all the guys were just flat on dem. As no 1 was interested 2 cum 2 d plastids party in order 2 make dem cum she had called her bf band 2 perform at her party hence every1 was interested .
(1hr b4 d party at Graces house)
G:do v need 2 go y cant v stay at home?
B: 1 direction is gonna per4m at d part!!
J:ya v need 2 go v will never get such an opportunity eva again in our life
N: wht is so gr8 abt dem?
G: u don't know 1d( all r staring at her)
T: u don't know THE 1D???
N: neva heard of dem
B: u gotta b kinding me!
J: r u insane they r d most famous band in Englan u stay in England n u don't know abtdem shamron u!
N: wow wow wow I jst shifted 2 englan a few days ago……….
B: ya v 4got . so 4 ur kind information 1d is d most famous band not only in England bt in 37 other countries
J: ya dey have made 2 albums n 1 single 4 comic relief
N: oh………………….
G: there is 5 boys in d band(Brianna removes a photo 4m her phone n shows it 2 her)
B: this wid curly hair is harry. N dis guy wid less hair is liam. Dis guy wid blond hair is nial . n dis guy wid spikes is my Zayn
N: wht ? ur zany?
B: ya MY ZAYN
G: fact is dat Brianna likes Zayn a lot so don't ever
S: ya don't EVER
J:EVER
B: EVER
N: EVER wht?
G: ever make zany ur fav 1der k?
N: yaya wht eva .(Brianna was gonna tell abt d 5th guy bt b4 dat Grace cut her)
G: guyz if 1d is cuming den I m ready 2 cum so lets go 4 shopping it is a dress n suit party sov need 2 buy gud n cool dresses as 1d is cuming n v need 2 get make up donr so girls lets go……………
(Every1 except 4 natline )SHOPPING
N: uhhh………………………do v seriously need 2 go shopping?????????
B: duh 1d is cuming so my zany will b der so I need 2 look d best
G: ya so lets go(dey all dragged natline in2 d car n dey went 2 d mall.
(dey went 2 d shop n were selecting 4 dresses natline was not interested so she was helpin dem select d clothes )
B: how does dis look on me??
N: perfect d colour suites u so now if v r done so can v go?
B: nope I need 2 select accessories 2 wear wid dis dress
N: uh ……………………………don't u eva eva eva get tired of shopping?
B: nope dis is 4 my zany so I don't mind
N; stop calling him my zany it is wired
B: I don't care(gets angry n goes 4m der)
N: wht d hell? (N she is roaming here and there when she suddenly saw a crowd of girls following a guy he is ttrying 2 hide bt cant find a place.)
Guy : wht d hell? Where shud I go(suddenly he felt a hand on his sholder b 4 he cud react he was pushed in2 a changing room. It was natline who put himin2 d room. D crowd of girls cum n dey ask natline )
Girl: hey did u c a guy out here?(in d room d guy is praying n hoping she doesn't tell)
N: no sry……………………..oh ya I did he went out of d shop n is probably gone near d elevator
Girl: oh ty
N: it is k( d girl goes 4m der) hey u can cum out d coast is clear.( D GUY CUMS OUT)
Guy: oh thank u
n: it is k.( Grace called her 4m d side changing room)
G: hey Natline pass d nxt dress lease?
N: yep sure(n she passes d dress)
Guy: I shud b moving now b4 those girls cum again by d way again thnx
N: Welcum go b4 dey cum
Guy: ya bye!
N: bye.(n he goes)
(every1 buys a dress n r gonna leave when dey realize dat dey didn't buy a dress 4 Natline)
B: hey u not buying a dress 4 urself?
N: nah I will wear sum jeans n top n cum
G: do u know it is a dress n suit party
N: ya bt I don't wear dresses so I m gonna wear dat
J: girls les do sum shopping 4 natline 2 day
N: no it is k Janice u guyz go v will get late 4 d pary
S: no Nat v r not gonna listen 2 u
G: ya now v will give u dresses u jst wear dem n v will select
N: but…………………………………………
G: I don't wanna hear any thing
J: ya u wait here v will jst cum
(natline was waiting when she again saw dat same guy run )
N: y is he again running?(den she saw a crowd of girls behind him)OH!!!!! Pity him(by dat time grce came wid a dress)
G: go n try dis!
N: no it is 2 girly
J: I didn't ask u jst go( n after trying few dresses dey tries dey at last found a perfect dress 4 her. Dey did nalines makeup n dey went 4 d party. at d party allcame n were busy dancing waiting 4 1d 2 perform
. natline was late so as she entered suddenly d spoylight felon her n she entered n every1 was staring at her she came down 4m d staires n went 2 her frnds. )
J: u look nice
N: nice I look like joker
G: no u look nice
N: Grace u think I look nice I look like a nut
B: shut u nat u look gud hey c der is 1D
J: where?( Briannas turns her head)
B: der
S: wow dey look so cute( Janice Sashya Brianna n Grace ran 2 c 1d. natline was left alone she was waiting for jake her friend . She was waiting near d bar counter when she realized dat every1 wass staring at her. 1 guy asked her 4 dance bt she declined. Eleanor was a part of d plastid she was d organizer of d party it was her birthday she was jealous of natline dat every1 was staring at her n all d guys were asking her 4 dance n not even a single guy asked her. She took a plate of cacke n walked 2wards Natline( I know guys u r smart n guessed ya she is gonna drop it oh her u r so intelligent >.<). She is walking 2wards natline n dashed in2 her n d cake was abt 2 fall on her when Natline put her leg by mistakenly in d middle n d cake fell on aguy standing behind Natline.)



do comment n like!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!



info on 1d here is d link
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/One_Direction
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Posted: 12 years ago
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oh my gosh! This is so good yar! great work..
Who ws tht guy wo Nat ran into in the mall,probably one of the boys :P
I don't really want to see fights between Eleanor and one of the girls, El is a sweetheart (even though I ave a soft spot for LOu especially :P)
But it's up to you :)
hahah tell Bri that Zayn is MINE!:P
update soon...n if u can plz pm me :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Jinal3patel

oh my gosh! This is so good yar! great work..

Who ws tht guy wo Nat ran into in the mall,probably one of the boys :P
I don't really want to see fights between Eleanor and one of the girls, El is a sweetheart (even though I ave a soft spot for LOu especially :P)
But it's up to you :)
hahah tell Bri that Zayn is MINE!:P
update soon...n if u can plz pm me :)

U both can share zayn 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: ray1998

U both can share zayn 😃

haha thnk u 😳

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