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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: nuckts

part 22:

omg tahira kya awesome dikhai hai tune i wonder if i watch hhl videos whether i would be able to dislike saloni?😆
viaan-tahira ki jodi rocking hai sharon wants tahira to be his friend oh wow great na
taarey-suhagrat he he romance queen kahinki!😆
nice part!

OMG i m so happy that i made it difficult for u to characterise heli as saloni...
thank u so much, romance queen again loved the title...😆😆😆😆
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: nuckts

part 23:

awwe taarey cute as usual soup ke aur bhi uses hote hai yeh aaj jana!😉😆
about viahira(new name for viaan n tahira) they were superb,it was though an emotional part i thoroughly enjoyed it cho cute
awwe viahira hug so cute,tahira feeling different for him great yaar!👍🏼

sorry later edited thanks for the award of ROMANCE QUEEN...😆😆
that hug even made go mad...😳
i had goosebumps while writing it
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: nuckts

part 24:

taarey passionate as always 😳 wet romance😉
viahira-awwe so cute belly romance😉 good one!
i really like this couple yaar!
plz inki love story jaldi shuru karo can't wiat
plz continue soon!😊

awww...wet romanceEmbarrassed
belly romance...😆
inki love story full power se start hogi...soon
love u for all these comnts
u made reach cloud nine trust me
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Posted: 12 years ago
Her it was awesome chap...😊
mainly taarey romance awesome...
I too blushed😳
wat to do taarey are so cute cople...
update soon dear and plzzz pm me😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: PRASSI

Her it was awesome chap...😊

mainly taarey romance awesome...
I too blushed😳
wat to do taarey are so cute cople...
update soon dear and plzzz pm me😊

thank u so much dear
luv u
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wht a lovely video...

Eternal lovestory is depicted beautifully in th vm

taani in red sareee awww so gorgeous...


Shivi thnx 4 pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
1st of all a big congoratulations...i jst really luv ur. FF...d part was really cute n luvd it...plzzz pm me when u update
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Posted: 12 years ago
hey guys thank u so much for all those lovely and heart touching messages...to render ur support
love u alll so much
here comes the next chapter...enjoy😊
CHAPTER 25
VIAARA CONFUSED ABOUT THEIR FEELINGS; REY IS HAUNTED BY THE PAST FLASHES

Tahira reached home'.

It was late so swaron had already gone to sleep'..

Tahira walked inside''

She was climbing the stairs but still she seemed motionless'.

The original Tahira and her bubliness was missing'

She was moving as if she was under the affect of some potion or bound'.

She reached her room and stood in front of the mirror''.and the very next minute brought tears to her eyes'.

She touched her belly and her back again and again'.

Her whitish skin had become tomato red and her crimson cheeks were out bursting with shyness ''..

Tahira: aaj jo bhi kuch hua'..woh mujhe bura kyun nahi laga'..

And I have never let anyone be close to me because I don't believe in commitments'..lekin aaj why the hell was my heart beating so hard when Viaan was too close to me'..

And maine use dure karna ka effort bhi nahi kiya'..

Why was I loosing on to myself''

Aur main Viaan ki attention aur care enjoy kyun kar rahi thi'.

She was really perplexed and somehow her heart was not getting a clear picture of whatever was happening'.

At Viaan's place'.

Viaan was at the terrace staring at the moon'

He was trying to join the stars to gain a clear face but all in vain.

His eyes were drizzy''but still his face was illuminated'..

Viaan:aaj mujhe kya ho gaya tha ''main pehle to Tahira ke liye kitna dar gaya tha ''and that hug '..

I mean I was so out of my senses that I just hugged her as if she was ''she was (again stammering)'..just mine'''.

Aur uske baad bike ride par jo hua that was so wrong ''but why didn't I feel guilty and apologized ''

Aur main Tahira ko rokna kyun chahta tha''in fact jab se use mila hun sirf uski liveness aur uske pranks ke bare main socha ta rehta hun'..

Lekin kyun'..

He hit his hand on the wall'..he was confused and it was difficult for him to understand what all was going in his heart and mind'.

But suudenly he was found staring at his hand which he had put around Tahira's belly'.

He smiled admist all the tears'..

Viaan:aaj pehli baar zindagi mein koi aapna laga !!!!!!!!!

And he wept'' 😊😊😊😊

At Tahira's place

Tahira:pata nahi Viaan mere liye kya feel karta hai'..kyunki usne aaj mujhe roka tak nahi'..

Aur job hi hua that was not intentional to main Viaan ki true feelings ko judge nahi kar sakti'..

May be jo bhi aaj hua wo uske liye awkward ho''

Her smile vanished and she was numb'.

Tahira:pata nahi wo mere bare mein kya sochta hai ?????

At Viaan's place

Viaan:lekin Tahira wahan se aise chali kyun gayi'..

Kahin use bura to nahi laga hoga'..

And main sorry tak nahi kaha to may be she misunderstands me '..

Oh god wo mere bare mein kya soch rahi hogi ???????

After a few seconds they both decide to call each other'..

But none of them succeeded in their efforts'..their heart and mind had lost the connection needed

They picked up their mobiles searched for each other's number but could not dial'..

It seemed as if they could feel each other's emotions'..

Viaan:lekin main yeh sab kuch itna complicated nahi chod sakta'..

I need to talk to Tahira''kyunki main jab tak us se baat nahi karunga tab tak I wont understand that what my heart wants to speak'.

He took his cellphone and messaged to Tahira

VIAAN:TAHIRA ,I WANNA MEET U TOM'..

EARLY MORNING AT THE BEACH'.

Tahira saw the message and didn't know how to react'

She was excited that Viaan finally messgd but his purpose was not clear''

She replied to the message with just an ok''.

At Rey's place (same night)

Rey was sleeping and Taani was lying next to him'..

Rey was in profound sleep but Taani had just closed her eyes after making sure that all was okk with Rey

Suddenly Rey started shivering''

His body became cold'..

And he was moving his head in restlessness

He spoke just "NO, nahi ''."

His forehead had sweat traces and he suddenly got up with a jerk''

This even made Taani shiver in fear and she too woke up'..

Taani:kya hua Rey ''.aap theek hain na ?????

Rey:nahi Taani'.

Maine ekk ajeeb sapna dekha''I mean I had my flashes with someone else'..

And the place was just too odd'.tall buildings, too cold and yes you were not there Taani '..tum mere saath nahi thi '..

He turned to Taani and held her hands '.

Rey:no Taani'..thats just not possible ''

He was in tears'..

He looked terrified'.

Taani was too in tears and she exactly knew that the medicines and the process was working but she could not disclose anything to Rey'.

Taani:Rey it was merely a dream'.

Dekho main aapke saath hun and hum aapne ghar mein hai'.

Rey:nahi Taani'..mujhe seriously bahut dar lag raha hai'.

I mean main tumhare bina'..

Main kissi ke saath tha Taani, mera dil khush nahi tha, meri aankhon mein majburi aur dard tha'.

Main kissi ke saath kaise ho sakta hun Taani, aur wo ladki mere itna pass'.noways'

He clutched his hair in despair''his head was paining and his eyes were too drowned in anger and fear. His body was totally cold. His blood had frozen , the pain was taking his life away.

Rey: Main tumhare bina nahi jee sakta Taani, I will die agar mujhe tumse dure hona pada to main khud se dure ho jaounga ( by now they both were sobbing badly)

Iss dream se mera dil bahut dar raha hai Taani , Main khud ko tumhare bina imagine nahi kar sakta ''.phir ye dream.

He drooped his head , his heart was weeping and eyes gave way to blood''

He was in so much twinge that every minute was making him think about those flashes.

Rey: taani maine kabhi tumhe dhokha to nahi diya na ?

Taani was shocked , she was stirred to see Rey's condition .

Her sobbing intensity increased and her pain overpowered her.

Several things pooped up in her mind

"DHOKHA AAPNE NAHI MAINE DIYA HAI REY , AAPSE SACH CHIPAYA HAI, AAP PAR TRUST NAHI KIYA

REY '''MERA PYAR AAPKE PYAR SE HAAR GAYA REY"

Taani : Rey aap kabhi mujhe dhokha nahi de sakte''.

HER WAS CRITICISING HER''.WHILE HER SOUL WAS HOWLING IN PAIN''.

Rey : par Taani''

Taani did not let Rey complete and she put her finger on his lips'..

Taani: Sapna kuch bhi ho Rey ''but the fact and reality is that hum humesha saath the , saath hai and future mein bhi rahenge'..

She took her head in her lap'..

And caressed his hair'..

Taani:Rey accident ki wajah se aapke sir pe chot lagi hai'..and all this is its after effect'..

Aap plss aisa mat socho, aapko pain mein dekhar main jee nahi sakungi Rey'..so plsss don't think about all this and take this medicine and try to forget it all and sleep

I ll be with u'.

Rey kept staring at Taani for a while as if he wanted answers about his love from destiny and then he was off to sleep due to the heavy medicine dosage'..

Taani was crying '..

She was helpless at Rey's condition'..

She was feeling really bad for the love of her life'.

She was too moved and shaken'..

Taani : (to herself)

Mujhe maaf kardo Rey , main aapko sach nahi bata sakti because I cant afford to lose u once again but Rey I promise wo dil jaldi aayega jabaap ko sab sach pata hoga aur aap theek honge par uske baad aap mujhe aapnayen gaye ya nahi ''(he was badly sobbing)

she soo puzzled and the very next morning she decided to visit the doctor'..

At the doctor's cabin

Taani: doctor yesterday Rey got the first flash from his past'..

He was deeply terrified'..

And his eyes were too much dipped in pain'..

Wo theek hai na doctor''''.

Doc: Mrs. Taani , Rey is absolutely fine

Rather it's a gud news that the medicine are doing a wonder to him and so is your prayer and ur love'.

But yes u should make sure that these flashes are not retained by him for long'.

I mean he should not think about them too often'.

So do something to grab his attention'..

Taani:sorry doctor but I didn't get u'..

Doc: Mrs. Taani I mean get him involved in activities that have always grabbed his attention'

Ok tell me what is Rey's principle in life'.

Taani smiles at this question'.

Taani: doc for Rey his life is just about the THREE D's that means DIL DOSTI AND DANCE'..

Doc: so gud'..bring back all three to him'..

And make him live his life and forget the painful five years''

Taani stands up and was about to leave the cabin''when the doctor called her'.

Doc:all the best Mrs.Taani'.

I hope aap apne DIL wale D ki responsibility theek se carry kar paye'.

Taani blushes and leaves the cabin'..

On walking out of the hospital'..

Taani : (to herself) agar Rey ko thek kar ne ke liye unke life mein THE THREE D's ka ana itna zaruri hai to I ll get it all fixed'..

Dil to main mila lungi''

Dosti ke liye gang ko bulane ka time aa gaya hai'..(her faces enlightened)

Aur jab hum saath honge to dance to khud hi humari life mein vapas aa jayega'.

She chuckled'..

Taani: (looking to the open sky)

Thank u so much Krishna ji''

promo:

AMAZINGLY WEIRD BUT HOT VIAARA CONFESSION

😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳

She was about to loose balance when viaan held her'..

She was in his arms and they both were totally lost in each other''

Their lips were sealed but their eyes spoke volumes''

Soon Tahira's hair were caressing viaan's face because of the breeze'
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Edited by shivi77 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Amazing update loved it as usual waiting for d3 gang to come and viara confession cany wait plz pl plz plz jaldi se update karo 😊
Edited by ajaved - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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viaan n tahira part was so beautiful... they way u wrote their feelings... i was smiling reading two people realizing their love .. aww it was so beautiful...😳..
n then our very own taarey part ... it was painful but yet gave a happy feeling that rey is recovering .. loved the way u wrote taani's concern for him..
n precap .. mmm😳😳.. awww😳😳 our very on viaara 😳😳.. i just love them a lot😳
loved this chapter shivi ... now update soon .. **dreamy ** viaara confession
Edited by disismeenu4u - 12 years ago

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