WITHOUT PAIN NO LOVE~~MANVEER SS~Prt24 newpg 78 - Page 45

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: humairaa1

Hey Mahi, how u?
Awesome ss, read all in one go
Please pm me

me good... u say...sorry fr late reply and will surely pm u...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Archi02

Very nice update mahi. Superb. Loved it. But why should I delete pm?

thnks and delete abhise so that i dnt get any inbox full probs in future
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: roopali15

Nice update mahi
and romantic tooo
but what happend in 6months that they seperated
Manyata and aryan is in relationship o god tooo much
pls seperation hta do jaldi

yup jald hata ne ki koshish karungi...i know its a bit confusing but will get revealed soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: cherry.parul0

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.i lvd it... ;)

or ye beech m kya gadbad hui h????manyata in relationship with aryan???nd uday ne manyata ko hurt kiya????kab???kaise???m nt gettin nything...

i know its a bit confusing but will get revealed soon...thanks alot glad u liked it...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: serat

really really nice update😃❤️

thanks
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: jasminerahul

Yes'.Uday eats only if manyata feeds him.good that manyata decided 2 stop d fight n feed him.but uday pretended 2 b angry.her hand got hurt.uday felt sad.that was a lovely scene.Manyata n Aryan?Oh nooo...Rape attempt?i'm confused.plz reveal it

rape attempt is in chapter 3 and 4 during that freshers party...i know its a bit confusing but will get revealed soon... thanks
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: pia.raha

aww,anya and udayy soo sweeet!!!!! par kya hua hogaa,manyata ne kya kiya jo uday ne uske stah aisa kiyaa!!!!! supsense and mre suspenesee!!!!!! gr88 goingg!!!!!!!

i know its a bit confusing but will get revealed soon...thanks alot...suspense mein hi toh maja hai...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: bushra..manveer

yaar very nyc awsome aisa kya hua haan jo ya itna jaldi anya se manayata ban gayi or uday ne manyata ko chor diya kisne rape kiya n or batao plz very nyc awsome fantestic i love it lovely vey nyc awsome mindblowing zabardast cha gaya n sis my all agrines are melt okkk itss okk n ab sorry maat kahna ok very nyc awsome keep it up i love ur writiing very much buhot maza aya but sespence khatam karo n jaldi update karo ok plzz i m eagerly waiting for ur update u r the awsome amazing writter mahi

awww...thnks alot bushra love u sis...i know its a bit confusing but will get revealed soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: iluvmanveer

awesome mahi!
n hya saglyanmadhe
manyata kuthun ali? malate kahich kalala nahi!

aga suspense ahe...i know its a bit confusing but will get revealed soon...and dhanyavad fr such a lovely cumment😳
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Posted: 12 years ago

WITHOUT PAIN NO LOVE

PART 22: MANVEER:::::: <3:::::::

" Aaap sahi keh rahe ho vijay bhai' mein apne aap ko aur Uday ko aur taklif nahi de sakti, chahe kitna mushkil kyun na ho main use mana kar hi rahungi"said manyata wiping her tears'with a new sparkle in her eyes'.

Vijay: that's like my manyata bhai' acha ab hume chalna chahiye' hume ds se bhi milna hai'

Manyata slept with the determination of making Uday forgive her'

In the morning unnati came dancing in the house'

"dada agaye, vijay ds j komal aunty uncle brij,man'" she stops abruptly'

Suddenly her chirping smiling face turned grave'

she remembered the last time uday went away

~~~~~~~~~~~~~******~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

After a business trip for a week Uday had returned home'

Unnati overjoyed: anya,,,anya'dada aa gaye'

Hearing this anya comes running from the room and stands in front of uday'.

Uday extremely happy'

Uday:hi princ'

But before he could complete seeing the I-Will-Kill-U look on anya's face he definitely knew what was coming next'

Anya extrememly angry'

Starts beating him'

Blabbering like a child'

Anya: halkat wede yede khasmanukhane' tarakh ke papeete..sade hue jhoote sabse badhe gadhe'

Bata ke nahi ja sakte the??

Uday uske mar se bachne keliye Unnati ke piche chupne ki koshish karta hai'

But ofcourse no use our jungli billi was in full swing'

Uday panting: princess' sorry na aur kitna marogi'urgently jana pada aur hum ek week hi toh gaye the'

This annoys anya even more'

And woh uday ke piche bhagne lagti hai'now they were running around the sofa'

Anya: kamine ek'ek hafte keliye gaya'woh bhi bina bataye aur ek phonecall bhi nahi kar sakta???

Uday still running: sorry na yar range nahi thi'upar se hum bahot busy the'

Anya: hawww busy the ruk abhi batati hu tujhe busy ke bacche'

Anya almost catches Uday but both of them fall on sofa'

Uday on anya'

Both share a beautiful eyelock'

Forgetting their position and also unnati'

Uday: really sorry princess' pata hai ek hafta tumhare bina was like one month'

I missed u..

He says caressing her cheek..

Anya smiles: missed Uday too'

He kissed her forehead lovingly

Unnati thought it was necessary to stop their miss Uday kiss U film as they wer in hall with all servants watching them'

Unnati coughs: sorry guyz tum apni ye film continue karo lekin room mein you know na yaha sirf mein akeli nahi hu' servants bhi hai moreover we are in hall'

Uday anya get up quickly' both blushing and embarresed'

While Unnati jus laughs and goes from there'

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A small smile appears on unnati's face recalling those moments'.

Her trance is broken when Uday shakes her'

Uday:kya hua choti kaha khoi hui ho??

Unnati: kuch nahi dada who hum bas

Uday:purane dino ko yad kar rahi thi hai na??

Unnati: dada agar aap ek baar man..

Uday cuts off: please choti agar is bare mein hum nahi baat kare toh acha hoga'andar chale??

Unnati nods in yes and they go inside'

All were already present there hearing unnati's voice except manyata'

Every1 greeted him warmly..

But his eyes searched only for his princess'

And finally he found her on stairs'

She was staring at him blankly'

Actually she didn't know his feelings his wmotions and so she didn't know hw to react'.

They both stared blankly at each other'

Both knew they were empty rather nothing without each other'

Their every breath,every heartbeat had carving of each other's name'.

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Uday goes in anya's room'

Uday:princess'

Anya: uday tum yaha??

Uday encircles her in his arms'

Uday: kyun nahi aa sakte??anyways hum tumhare liye kuch laye hai'

Anya:kya??

Uday: close ur eyes..

Anya:par..

Uday:ofo ye har baat mein par dalna jaruri hai??

I said na close ur eyes'

Any closes her eyes and uday makes her sit on the bed'

He removes payal from his pocket

And puts it around her feet kissing each her foot'


Anya opens her eyes and sees it'

Uday: pasand aya??

Anya teary: omg uday these are awesum'

She gives him tight hug'

Anya: but halkat vede ye per ko kiss karne ki kya jaroorat thi??

Uday: hum bas ye dikhana chahte the' ki hum apse bahot pyaar karte hai' hum apkeliye kuch bhi karsakte hai princess'I love u'

Anya: I love U too Uday'.

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A lone tear escapes her eyes'.

Which hurts him'.

He wanted to wipe that tear off'

But alas! The distance between them had increased too much..

Not able to control anymore manyata runs off to her room crying'.

~mahi~

hope u all like it guyz...

do cumment and like...

Edited by MAHI1198 - 12 years ago

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