Tum Hi Ho- KriYaansh Version :D

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Here's the KriYaansh Version of my very first os.. Hope you enjoy it!😳
Really hope you like it! Agar acha nahi lage toh joote chappal maar dena..!😆
Constructive Criticism is most welcome!😃 Please shower me with your longgg comments..!!


Tum Hi Ho- A KriYaansh OS

It was pitch black. The rain pattered and the wind rapped against the desolate highway. The clouds shrouded the sky with an eerie, ominous blanket. But this gloomy atmosphere seemed like the perfect getaway for the newly engaged couple.


Reyaansh and Kriya strolled along the pathway against the unnerving storm.


Rey dressed in a formal black suit looked as dashing as ever. He continuously gazed at his fianc without a blink of his eye. The sultry Kriya was dressed to kill, at least that's what any sane man what have thought!


Clad in a ravishing aqua blue sari embedded with precious jewels, Kriya could feel nothing but vulnerable under Rey's constant stare. He bore his eyes into her. Her petit figure drenched in the rain beckoned him to claim her soul. The still silence was soon ruined by Kriya's sudden eruption of laughter that startled Rey.

Rey- Baatcutter, kya hua? Achaanak, itni hassi?


Kriya- Re..Re..Rey..*laughing* Apna chehra toh dekho.. ekdum bandar lag rahe ho!


Rey- *pouting like a baby* Kyun? Mere face pe kuch hai, kya?


Kriya- Nahi! Tumhaari "zulfein" is baarish ki vajah se bhikar gaye hai.. idhar aao.. I'll sort it out.


Rey- Ok.. careful Baatcutter! Meri zulfien meri prized possession hai!


Kriya's face paled.


Kriya- Really? *muttering under her breath* Par mujhe laga main tumhaari prized possession hoon..


Rey noticed the change in her expression and heard her silent conversation, but decided to take undue advantage of the situation and tease her.


Rey- Huh? Kuch kahaa tumne?


Kriya felt genuinely hurt and anger raged within her. She shrieked against the piercing breeze as the rain mercilessly soaked her.


Kriya- Nahin, main kaun hoti hoon aapko kuch bolne waali Mr. Reyaansh Singhania? Aapko jo karna hai aap ki jiye. Main thodi naa maaine rakhti hoon tumhaare liye, hai naa Rey? Sirf apni puri zindagi tumhaare naam kar di maine, sirf apna vajood tumhaare naam kar diya, sirf paagalon ke jaise tumhaare saath jeene marne ki khwaahish..


Rey pulled Kriya by the waist with force and sealed her trembling lips with his. As they broke the enchanting kiss of pure bliss due to the lack of oxygen, they shared an eyelock. Silence prevailed them yet again.


Rey- *whispered hoarsely* Tum hi ho, ab tum hi ho, zindagi ab tum hi ho. Chain bhi, mera dard bhi, meri aashiqui ab tum hi ho. Tere liye hi jiya main, khud ko jo yun de diya hai. Teri wafa ne mujhko sambhaala, saare ghamon ko dil se nikaala. Main jo mit bhi gaya toh wajood mera, sadaa tujh mein rahe zinda.


Kriya quickly placed her hand on his mouth to stop him from saying anything else. Rey kissed her fingers one by one with all the love in the world, while Kriya blushed crimson just like a newly wedded wife. One wink, with a glow of mischief from her Linecutter made her heart skip a beat and just as she was about to bolt, her six inch heel decided to betray her. She lost her balance and squeezed her eyes shut as knew she would hit the rock hard surface of the road. As luck would have it, Kriya was pleasantly surprised as she fell into the arms of the man of her dreams.


Rey- Jab jab aasmaan se ek Kriya pari ban ke gire gi, tab tab uss pari ko bachaane ke liye ek Reyaansh zarur hoga.


Kriya was so touched by his words, that it had left her speechless. A lone tear slid down her cheek. Rey scooped her off her feet before she could digest what is happening to her. He held her close to his heart and they drifted off to a world of their own.


Rey- I love you Baatcutter!


Kriya- *Hitting his chest playfully with her delicate hands as her bangles jingled merrily* I hate you Rey, I hate you, hate you, hate you! Because I love you'!


Sweet nothings could be heard, as Kriya hid herself in the crook of his neck and Rey refused to stop teasing her. Their smiles could be seen from miles by an elderly couple that witnessed this epitome of love as the rain was dripping down both of them.


Hope it was atleast readable!


Love,

Vedika❤️

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Posted: 12 years ago
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OMG !! 😲

Aashiqui Version hai toh main definitely padhungi ... 😛

Loved it yaar. ❤️

What a concept. Mash Allah! 😃

Do write more of it often Vedli. 🤗

With much Love ❤️
Ur's Sugar. 😛
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Me 1st one to comment!

Yipppeee 😛
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Posted: 12 years ago
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loved it..
awesome piece of writing..
:)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awsm di..phle baar kisi ne kriyansh as engaged couple pe os lga i think so..bt i loved it..awiee kr kiss,kahin mei ye soch soch kar pagal na ho jau..vaah vaah kya line rey ne 😆 ekdum filmy line cuter n bahon ke darmiya kriya rey se mil rhi hai..vo old couple kitna lucky hai jisne kr ko ye sb krte dkha kash uski jagah mei hoti..awww..realy nyc.. U should write more..well written..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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aww this is as beautiful as the ss version

lovd it
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow vedika dii
it was fantasic
luved it
the song was just perfect for it
wow
luved it the way kriya began to mumble when rey said ok careful; baatcutter meri zulfein meri prized possesion hai
aww the moment was so cute
and
then there kiss
ufff
i will toh go crazy
hye the way started singing the lyrics of the song
ufff
and then kriya kept her hand on reys mouth
and
then he kissed her fingers
ufff hyeee
and
the line that stole the show for me was
jab jab aasmaaan se ek kriya pari bankar utregi tab tab usko bachane k liye ek rey hoga
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di
i am toh dead
it was such a wondeful os
luved it dii
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it was one of the best os
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di keep writting

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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesum..👏
loved it..👍🏼
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Woww. . .woww. . .
Wow. . . . .veds. .tune kr version mai os likha. . .aww. . .dats realy realy very sweet of u. . .
U r the best. . . . . . .
Lovd the os. . . . .
Totaly beautiful. . . .
Rey teasing our diva and their aww wala kiss. . .woww. . .just lovd it. . .
Love u Veds. .:-D:-D
keep writing such awsome os on kriyaansh. . .
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Posted: 12 years ago
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it was just awesome. 👏...
i was just lost in the os ...
loved it to the core.. ❤️..

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