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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: GurtiArti

@9n9i9s9h9u9, Amazing Poem Dear and It is so apt for current situation...


thaxxx dear😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: 9n9i9s9h9u9

after reading last update
i was just too much emotional that wannnt to write this lines,but avoid it
but as you again give that teaser
make me think about maan's state of mind
ad see
finally i write this

meri ruh pyaasi thi
bas ek tere pyaar ke ahsaas ke liye
mai yeh zindagi ji raha tha
bas tujh khaas ke liye

mera dil akela tha
chahe aas paas
logo ka mela tha
is dil ne ,bas tujhe chaha tha
aur na koi dusra kabhi
chu sake tujhe
chu to kya,aare na koi
dekh sake tujhe
dekhna to dur
na koi kabhi soch sake tujhe
bas yahi to is dil ne chaha tha
aur is liye
khud ko maine aisa banaya tha

mai har pal tujhe yaad karta tha
tere hooth ki har ek chuan ki raha tak ta tha
soch ta tha
ke ab to tere hootho par mera naam hoga
mujhe pyaar karna hi bas unka kaam hoga
tu haase gi mere liye
tu saaje gi mere liye
kyoki inke siya
kuch aur ho tere hootho par
shikya
gilla
darr
wo har ek ahsaas to mujhe maarne ka kaam karta tha
ye unkahe pagaam
kaafi nahi the kya tere liye
jo ,tune
khud ko khatam karne ki raah par chalne ki soch kar
muju par is duniya mai akela marne ki sajaa thop kar
ja rahi thi

yeh mai kaise hone deta
aapne saamne
aapne aapko khud se kaise khone deta
par ab jab ye teri chahat hai
ki mai ji na saku
to sun
mai chala jaauga
is duniya ko chod kar
har rishte,naate ko thod kar
par tu khud ko kuch na karna
mai mar bhi nahi paauga,yeh soch kar



wat sId i say dear

u just made me speechless with this w0rdsss
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Posted: 12 years ago
thaxxx dear

its like my first offical long comment for you

gud to know you like it


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Posted: 12 years ago
U r write awesome poem thanks to give me link dear
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Posted: 12 years ago
superb work dear..

i loved ur poem write more 👍🏼
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: 9n9i9s9h9u9

after reading last update
i was just too much emotional that wannnt to write this lines,but avoid it
but as you again give that teaser
make me think about maan's state of mind
ad see
finally i write this

meri ruh pyaasi thi
bas ek tere pyaar ke ahsaas ke liye
mai yeh zindagi ji raha tha
bas tujh khaas ke liye

mera dil akela tha
chahe aas paas
logo ka mela tha
is dil ne ,bas tujhe chaha tha
aur na koi dusra kabhi
chu sake tujhe
chu to kya,aare na koi
dekh sake tujhe
dekhna to dur
na koi kabhi soch sake tujhe
bas yahi to is dil ne chaha tha
aur is liye
khud ko maine aisa banaya tha

mai har pal tujhe yaad karta tha
tere hooth ki har ek chuan ki raha tak ta tha
soch ta tha
ke ab to tere hootho par mera naam hoga
mujhe pyaar karna hi bas unka kaam hoga
tu haase gi mere liye
tu saaje gi mere liye
kyoki inke siya
kuch aur ho tere hootho par
ye soch bhi
mera dil na gawaara karta tha


par jo sunna maine
tere hootho se kahi unkahi baato se
shikya
gilla
darr
wo har ek ahsaas to mujhe maarne ka kaam karta tha
ye unkahe pagaam
kaafi nahi the kya tere liye
jo ,tune
khud ko khatam karne ki raah par chalne ki soch kar
muju par is duniya mai akela marne ki sajaa thop kar
ja rahi thi

yeh mai kaise hone deta
aapne saamne
aapne aapko khud se kaise khone deta
par ab jab ye teri chahat hai
ki mai ji na saku
to sun
mai chala jaauga
is duniya ko chod kar
har rishte,naate ko thod kar
par tu khud ko kuch na karna
mai mar bhi nahi paauga,yeh soch kar

awesome poem dear..
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Posted: 12 years ago
Thank god hamare khatir ek happy wala teaser diya tumne...
Waiting for update!!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
omg...even if maan wants he cannot stay away from geet and no one can separate them...not prem or annie...
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Posted: 12 years ago
heartwrenching n painful update. brilliantly written
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Posted: 12 years ago
What a painful update yaar...
I could hardly read cause I was crying all the time...😭

It's sad that prem understands Maan so well whereas geet failed to 😭
My heart cries seeing Maan in pain...

I feel bad for geet too...but what she did by trying to kill herself was not right.! Her fear killed her love

I just hope that b****** Dev doesn't take advantage if the situation...

Please make Maan alright soon.! Can't take this pain anymore 😭

Running to read more.!

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