Ariya's SS: Humari adhori kahani lst pt pg 30 26-4 - Page 7

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Posted: 12 years ago
#61
inshallah i update my next part tonight
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Posted: 12 years ago
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FIFTH PART:
" HUMARI ADHORI KAHANI:"

Next morning:

In Shimla.

Anu: priya zayan ki principle nay tumhain bulaya hai, kuch zarori baat karni thi.

Priya: Anu zayan k school k koi dues nahi hai, aur zayan bhi kafi intelligent hai, phir kis liay bulaya hai

Anu: pata nahi par please tu un say zaror mil layna.

Priya: ok

In Zayan School.

Priya: can I come in?

Principle: ya sure come in Mrs. Priya. Please sit down.

Priya: is everything allright mam?

Principle: ya Mrs. Priya bus aap nay zayan k examination form par us k father ka naam mension nahi kiya tha, so please aap us k father ka naam bata dyan.

Priyaa: Zayan k father.

Principle: ya mrs. Priya.

Priya Close her eyes and after taking a deep breath : Zayan k father ka naam Mr. Arjun Suryakant Rawate hai.

Principle: Thanks Mrs. Rawate.

Priya: can I leave?

Principle: Ya Mrs. Rawate you can leave?

She is just to exit from principle room, Principle calls her back.

Principle: wait a minute Mrs. Rawate.

Priya: yes Mam.

Principle: Mrs. Rawate aap nay guardian ki jagha apna naam aur signature mention nahi kiay.

Priya: can I write?

Principle: ya sure .

She writes her real name in the form and handed to principle.

Principle: thanks Mrs. Rawate

Priya just smile and leave from there , many of emotion's runs in her,she has tears in her eyes.

Anu try to stop her but she doesn't respond her call as she doesn't listening any voice an echo of her own voice echoing "Zayan k father ka naam Mr. Arjun Suryakant Rawate hai.

Anu: priya wait kiya huwa , kuch toh bolo, kiya baat hai.

She hold her , Priya Wipes her tears and signal an auto too stop , when auto stop near her she sits and leaves, Zayan runs after her by calling her name, but she already left from there , he runs after her on the road, but unware about the the truck which comes near him and hots him.

In Dehli:

Location: ETF Office.

"Zayan" Arjun shouted

Arjun voice break the silence in the conference room of ETF, Sameer Rathode shocked after hearing this name after a long time from his mouth.

Sameer: what happened Arjun?

Arjun Screamed: My Zayan..

Sameer: just relax Arjun it was a bad dream.

Arjun: no sameer it was not a bad thought, I know my zayan is in trouble.

Sameer: please calm down Arjun, shree Arjun k liay pani lay k aao.

Shree: ok sir.

Shree handed rathode a glass full of water .

Sameer: relax lo paani piyo.

Arjun drinks water and feel relax.

Sameer: are you pk Arjun.

Arjun: nahi sameer mera zayan kisi musibat mei hai mujhe is k pass jana hai, please Sameer mujhe us k pass lay chalo, mei usay dekhna chahta hun us say milna chahta hun.

Sameer: wo theek hoga Arjun , tum pareshan nahi ho, wo hai na Zayan k sath wo uska khayal rakhay gi, wo buhat pyar karti hai zayan say , us par zara sib hi kharoch nahi aanay day gi.

Arjun: Mei usay kabhi maaf nahi karun ga Sameer, kabhi bhi nahi, us nay mujh say mere betay ko alag kiya hai, mere betay ko nujh say cheena hai us nay, I hate her I hate her a lot but I love her. No I hate her mei dunya mei agar sab say zayda nafrat jis say karta hun wo hai, tum nay mujhe jo dhoka diya hai us k liya mei tumhain kabhii maaf nahi karun ga, sameer mei us say badla lunga.

Sameer: us ka gham tujh say alag nahi hai Arjun tu nay agar khoya hai toh us nay bhi buhat kuch khoya hai.

Arjun: par wo hai kahan.

Shree is very surprise because after a long period Arjun express his feeling, he says the pain of his heart in words.

Sameer: wo jahan bhi hogi hum usay dhoond lyn gay.

In Shimla:

Location: Priya home.

Priya enters in her home , the main door of her house is still open, she runs to her room and stands infront of mirror and tears continuously flows from her eyes, she touches the reflection of her own in the mirror.

" kahan gai meri pehchan, kaun hun mei , kiya hai mera Astitva, Priya meri pehchan ye toh nahi hai, kyun mei nay khud apni pechan khud say hi cheen ki kyun? Kyun zayan k pyar mei itni majboor ho gai k mujhay us k liay khud ko mittana para? Kahan gai wo hasti , khilte larki? Mei wo toh nahi? Kahan gay mere dost jo kabhi mere huwa kartay thay? Un k nazaron k thalkhiyan mei kaisay bardast karun gi. Kahan gay mera ghar mera parivar? Mei kaisay unhen samjhaun gi. Kahan gaya mera pyar? Kiya us k ankhon mei nafrat mei bardast kar paun gi? Mei nay sab kuch mitta diya sirf apnay betay k liay mei nay kho diya apnay doston ko, apnay pyar ko. Apni pehchan ko, apnay parivar ko, kyun kiya hai meri wajoob ab , kahan hai Priya ka ateet, priya ka koi ateet hi nahi nahi, meri pechan sirf zayan hai mera beta mera zayan? Kiya meri pehchan sirf yahi hai zayan ki maa aur kuch nahi?

She bent down her knee , put her plam on her head and weeps
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Posted: 12 years ago
#63
nice dear😊
thnx for pm dear😊
hope zyaan is alright
Edited by amanarjunkaran - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#64
who is priya?
I need your's sugesstion,

which you liked the most Roshni, Riya Or Sakshi, please tell me
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Posted: 12 years ago
#65
great update :) loved it
so priya is arjun's wife
omg zayn got injured
so that means arjun knows about zayn
felt so bad for arjun :(
he hates priya so much
thanks for the pm
continue soon
P.S. i want riya to be priya :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#66
Hi!
Very nice.
Priya should be riya.
Riya is the perfect one.
Cont soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#67
wat's this yar??? i knw Priya s not her real identity but who s she??? Roshini?? Riya?? Aisha?? Saakshi?? or someone completely new??? Nice update... Why hv Priya left Arjun nd stayn here??? Arjun knw abt Zayan... continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#68
Hey thanks fr pm..
Its a very emotional update..
Priya is arjun's wife..
And zayan is hurt...hope he wll be fine..
Rathod really supports him n he too know abt her..

And who's priya??

@ fatima-
me too want priya turned to riya..

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Posted: 12 years ago
#69
it should be riya
she is perfect
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Posted: 12 years ago
#70
Ya nice update. Feeling bad for arjun.

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