SS :When you fall in Love EPILOGUE #B Pg 19 25/2

Posted: 12 years ago
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~When you fall in Love~

Part One

There'll be a rainbow around the moon
You'll fall apart when you hear that tune
Every day will end too soon
When you fall in love
You'll get weak in the knees when you see her smile
You try your best to hid it ''cause it's not your style
You let it get you cryin' like a little child
When you fall in love

25th August 2012

Geet's P.O.V

I had believed him'.more than my life. More than anyone else in this world. But I was cheated. I Geet Jennifer Handa Trusted him more than myself to be left on the brute roads of destiny'was it really my mistake'or was it just fate as people say it..

Flashback

I was an teacher for the physically disabled'I love kids .i am an orphan with a huge fortune left by my parents. I decided to help the cursed than the blessed. Mother Sarah'my guide my teacher my inspiration'she was the only relative I had in this world. my maternal aunt. my mom was a Christian and Dad a pure Punjabi. they fought against all odds for their love'leaving the yearn for love in my genes. that is when I met him, Maan Singh Khurana. He is a business tycoon, perhaps one of the richest in India. we became friends as he contributed towards a charity fund raiser'slowly the distances between us was next to nil.we fell in love'or rather I fell in love.

He proposed me in a fairy tale style'made me feel like a princess awaiting her prince charming. he had gifted me a solitaire of one of the rarest diamonds in the world.i felt blessed. we became one that day'that rainy night.he promised me a lifetime of love and happiness'but are happiness's really meant to last forever?

When you fall in love

It's out of your hands

It gets into your heart

It changes your plans

But you'll only understand

When you fall in love


Maan was away on a business tour for almost a month.the distance was killing me.he called almost 4 times a day.but slowly slowly the calls reduced to almost nil.

Next day I received a call from Pinky ,my friend who worked for maan.she informed me of his return .but why did he not call'thought I. probably he was planning a surprise.so I decided to surprise him instead.i brought him orchids his favorite flowers and blueberry cake'with I LOVE YOU MAAN written on it.i blushed recalling our last encounter.i could not wait to see him..i left to his office.but the sight that awaited me was horrendous. A girl in mid twenties on his lap in a compromising state.i was numb to react.they got up and then the girl kissed him on his cheek and came forward and introduced herself as Maya,his fiance.my world came trumbling down to my feet.i then saw an animalistic grin on his face.then I realized'I was cheated.

End Of Flashback

A week from that incident.the shock was too much for me to handle..but I now realize I should live. I now leave to Scotland with Mother Sara with a precious piece of gift in me'my baby.my inspiration to live for.


The summer breeze will chill you to the bone

You'll walk the floor ''til the break of dawn

Sometimes you'll feel so alone

When you fall in love

And you won't notice, but the day that it shows

That light'll follow you wherever you go

And that's how you'll know

When you fall in love






Part2:Page 7

PArt 3:Page 10

Interlude:page 10

PArt 4/5:page 12-13

Epilogue A:page 16

Epilogue B:Page 19





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Posted: 12 years ago
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Amazing OS. Painful though :(
Poor geet. Maan cheated her :s or is he hiding something.
Cant wait for more :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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plz geve a happy ending if u can...

lovely starting...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely os...

waiting eagerly fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

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Posted: 12 years ago
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how could he do this to her
hope she never sees him again though
so she is pregnant with his baby
wow that she never saw coming right
so he was engaged huh pathetic that
see ya again soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Mean cruel. How can he do this to her, happy that geet is pregnant n has a reason to live. Hope she never sees him again n he repents all his life.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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lovely start
maan cheated her or is there something else to this behaviour of maan
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Posted: 12 years ago
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very painful but i really loved it .plz continue soon and pm me
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update next part soon dear eagarly waiting...
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amazing
poor geet maan cheated her or there is something else also!!!!!!!
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Amazing
Pls continue soon n happy endings plzzz

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