RES!!
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Me? First?? ME??? First?!? Dear Lord!!! *hyperventilating*
Wait...wait...is that...I just saw my name in there-
Wait again- dedicated? To me? Me?!
Sweet Sister Mother of Mercy, I think I just died.
And I CANNOT believe you were nervous about this. RAE!! Are you trying to kill me?? It's like Santa finally realised he owes me two decades of presents and dropped them down my chimney all at once!! I think I need a sedative before I explode out of happiness!!! ***fangirl screeeam***
Where do I start?? This is so brilliant my hands are shaking trying to control my laughter (not to mention the devastation caused to my poor unprepared nerves by a certain Arnav Singh Raizada)!!
Aww Khushi!! I can so picture her in those clothes, and giving her camera a name!? She's so cute!! Omg!! And her internal monologues - gosh I'm laughing so hard my face is pink and my brother is pestering me asking me what's wrong and I can't even breathe enough to answer. And I can't even pinpoint my favourite part because every other line is a pun or filled with sarcastic humour (the best kind!!) It's charged with wit and the candy-floss analogy was just tooo good!!
And may I say, I feel for Khushi, because as I read this, I was reacting pretty much along the same lines as her. Poor poor thing to have all of Arnav Singh Raizada's charm unleashed on her head-on!!! Gah, even my nose is refusing to inhale and my mouth was just hanging uselessly open :P I LOVE her internal monologues and the whole narrative - and I actually tried to quote parts of it, but then I realised that practically every line has something I like so that's just impossible.
And Arnav. OH-MY-GOSH. I think I almost went up in flames when he said 'Kinky'. And the images you created in my head, I will forever blame you if I can never go to sleep now :P And when he was flirting with her, I was caught between Aw-ing, and blushing til my face caught fire and swooning.
And you are terribly cruel for stopping there! How could you??! And after he gave her the 'look' too!! Why did you stop!?!
oh and did I forget to mention? I LOVE YOU MAN!!! Welcome back!! You definitely returned with a bang and am I glad!
Also you should get an award if you understand anything I just typed up there.
PS: Merlin?? Harry Potter fan?!
Edited by -doe-eyes- - 12 years ago