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Posted: 12 years ago
#51
Part 5
Kriya stands up on the rock & was about to fall when a strong muscular arm pulls her back.
ReYam was about to save her when a guy comes & pulls her back.
Guy : What the hell do you think you were doing?
Kriya : Why do you care? Its none of your business.

Lousians hides behind another rock.So, they could know why Kriya was behaving like this.

Kriya : Please leave me alone.
Kriya sits on the sand, guy comes & sits next to her.
Guy : They say sharing helps pain to heal quicker.
Kriya looks at him & finally tells him everything from KriYaansh first meet till now.
Lousians gets shocked.They starts crying.They couldn't believe Kriya did so much for them.

Kriya : I don't know what to do anymore.Something inside me is dying every sec.I don't want to live.
Guy : There's always a way.
Kriya : Really then tell me what should I do.
There was silent.
Suddenly he puts his hand in front of her.
Kriya looks at him with confusion
Guy : Dance
Kriya looks into his eyes & puts her hand upon his.Both stand up & starts dancing.

Tu Jahaan Main Wahaan
Sang Sang Yu Chalu Tere
Jaise Tera Aasmaan - 2

Jo Dhup Nikli Chaya Ban Jaaunga
Jo Ho Tu Akeli Saaya Ban Jaaunga
Jo Uljhan Mein Ho Mann Main Behlaaunga
Tum Aa Gaye Ho Toh Jeena Aaya Hain
Khushiya Ka Tumne Yeh Jaal Bichaya Hain
Khoya Hain Khudko Yah Sab Kutch Paaya Hain
Tu Jahaan Main Wahaan
Sang Sang Yu Chalu Tere
Jaise Tera Aasmaan

Ho Gam Ke Badal Mujhpe Tham Jaane De
Bechainiyo Ko Mujhse Takrane De
Dukhti Ho Koi Baat Mujhpe Aane De
Dil Sochta Tha Ke Koi Apna Ho
Koi Raaz Na Ho Jo Uss Se Rakhna Ho
Aankhein Na Kholu Main Shayad Sapna Ho
Tu Jahaan Main Wahaan
Sang Sang Yu Chalu Tere
Jaise Tera Aasmaan

Before Kriya could realise what was happening he put his lips on her & starts kissing her.Kriya felt as if she was alive again & start kissing him back.After a long time they broke the kiss.Guy look into Kriya's eyes & she felt as if he was looking into her soul.
Guy : There is always a way, all you have to do is find it.
Then he leaves from there.Kriya looks at the direction he went, then at beer & throws it in the sea.Then she sits on the sand, looks at the sea & smiles.
Finally she moved on...
----------THE END----------

Guy


Note:
Thank you everyone for likes & comments.I'm really sorry for ending this SS like this but right now I really don't know how to continue it.I might make a sequel of this SS after some time.😊

Edited by AbhiyaMaaneet - 11 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#52
main baad mey res ko unres kroogi i hope so shiock mey hoo
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Posted: 12 years ago
#53
nice and os is good and loved it...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#54
wat u ended it????😲😲
no dear i want 2 read more...😭
plz plz sequel jaldi banao...😃

bdw last three parts wer Awesum...👏👏
loved dem..👍🏼

do cont soon...
n thnks 4 d pm...❤️🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
#55
awesome chapter...
really loved it
kaha socha ki rey ya swyam main se koi bachayega...

yaha pain toh new guy ki entry ho gyi... 🤣
it was a relliy nice update


bt tumne itni jaldi khatam kr diya... 😭
i loved this one..
no problem it was a nice ss... 😊😊😊
Edited by spongy - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#56
Haha.. I knew d guy wud not b Reyaansh o swayam 😛
Loved it.. But d end.. Umm.. I know.. Kriya must move on.. Its jus.. We dont get to c KR in d3 togethr so always want an end in which KR r togethr.. 😊

Wud b watin fr d sequel ! Start writin it soon :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#57
Just readed last three parts...
Awesome... Nicely written...
But why ended so soon... The story was going good.. 😕
i know kriya should move on... But we dont got to see Kriyaansh in serial. So want happy ending...
Anyways .. Waiting for the sequel...
Thnx for pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
#58
Just read all parts in a go...

Awesome updates..

Plz do me me weneva..u do nxt..
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Posted: 12 years ago
#59
nice one ... but no kriyansh ... 😭
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Posted: 12 years ago
#60
Heyy. . . .
Sorry. . .i hate sad endings. . . .
And KR ki aisi wali end i just hate it. . . . .
Sorry dear but i dint liked it at all. . .
Wil surly love it,if u make a sequel of it. .

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