Andankaaka Colony - Chap23/24 pg. 23!! Final - Page 10

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Posted: 12 years ago
#91
Lovely parts👏, athuvum Tamil new year a part 5 la add panni irukuringe, super!
Shemmo pavam, ellam girls a irukuranga, ana boys ku girls a pathale oru kick u varume, ean ivar salichukurar?😆 I'm helping Esther amma so sweet.

Waiting for the next part!😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
#92
Lol I'm imagining everything happening, really nice job Shamz!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#93
Sight adikirathu elam seri Shemmo...ana athu ein thangatchi a irunthu approm karathe thaan😛!

Sri kum enakum apdi ena problem?😲

As Jeya aunty (MIL😉) said...why this selective diplomacy?
I would have gone and flirted with everyone there😆
Edited by Gisel - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#94

Chapter 6

Ratna sees Shobi with large Starbucks. Shobi says "Nee enna house kulla call panna maata aana naane varuven" and goes in and sit in the sofa. Ratna is shocked seeying Shobi behavior. She goes near Shobi and mulichufies. She looks at her Starbucks frap and stares. Shobi asks "Enna paartha pei maathiri aa irukku, answer pannu or i wont leave this place. Oru mudivoda thaan i came". Ratna looks around scared. Shobi says "Enna whole oor aa call panna trying aa, athu ellam nadakkathu. Unaku enna pathi sariya therila, naan bike ellam ottuven". Ratna want to escape somehow and tells "Sorry, u and me Friends?". Shobi is happy and says "Friends". Ratna again looks at Starbucks. Shobi says "Intha drink ennoda urupadaatha son Shemmo ku. Naan starbucks ku pay pannina money la oru house vaangiiruppen". Ratna asks if her son will drink whole large drink. Shobi says "If there's left over drink naan avan thalai la kottuven". Ratna is sad, as she was thinking the drink is for her. Shobi is happy that Ratna talks with her normally.

Gisel and Shubba are coming back from hospital. Gisel notices Shemmo from far away and feels "Naanum ipdi thaan looked out when we first moved. Enna ivan enna maathiri case aa". Gisel want to be friend with Shemmo. Shemmo too sees Gisel and smiles. Tanu comes out from her house and Gisel sees her. He keep on staring at her and crashes into Maha's house front garden. Shubba sees this and scolds Gisel. She says "Gisel enna da ithu? Unaku Maha annan ku ottu varatha? Eppa paaru avara illathi avaroda things a break pannikittu iruka. Antha manushan unaku enna paavam senjaro". Shemmo hears Shubba voice and looks out from his window. Suha, Mahas sister, comes out and opens the door. She asks Shubba "Shubba aunty what happend?". Shubba and Gisel apologize and updates that they are coming back from hospital after giving sweets to Maha and Gisel theriyama crashed into their garden. Suha says no problem. Shubba asks wheres Caryn, Suha replies that her elder sister Caryn is getting ready to see Maha. Suha tells Shubba that they came after knowing about Maha incident.

Shemmo comes out of his house, to walk a bit hearing loud music with headphone. Caryn comes out and gets ready for hospital. She sees Shemmo and calls him. She is shocked seeing a new boy in colony. She questions Shemmo. Shemmo is confused and lost, he don't know what to tell. Suddenly Gisel comes and tells Caryn that Shemmo is their new neighbors. Caryn apologizes to Shemmo. She leaves to hospital with Suha.

Shemmo thanks Gisel for helping at the correct time. Gisel says no problem. Shemmo says "Unga peru enna?". Gisel says "Gisel and yours?". Shemmo replies "Shemmo. Naan romba sad ah irunthen that inga ore girls nu, but thank god I saw you". Both starts talking about themselves. Gisel says "Inga innoru paiyan irukan, aana avan yaarodaiyum pesamathan, dunno why. Btw you can call me as vaa nee po, naanum unna apdi thaan kuputhuven". Shemmo laughs and tells "Adada enna mariye oruthan. Aama unaku vaanga ponga varathu thats why u asked me to call vaa nee po right?". Gisel says "Hahaha yes. Friends?". Shemmo says "Yess Friends". Both shake their hands. Sri sees them talking and is thinking something. Shemmo asks Gisel "Nee ore paiyan ah? Illathi brothers sisters iruka?". Gisel says "Illa enaku oru thangachi iruka, nee avala parthu irukiya?". Shemmo says no, Gisel tells him that he might seen his sister during new year function who wore blue saree and was talking with others. Shemmo is shocked.

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Posted: 12 years ago
#95
thanks shammy and tanu ⭐️

haiyo no sb for me aa 😲 enna shobi ippadi cheat pannitenga enna .. but i so lobe the line


Intha drink ennoda urupadaatha son Shemmo ku. Naan starbucks ku pay pannina money la oru house vaangiiruppen".

shobiii unga style talking lae i imagine this and was 🤣

habba enna suspense oru blue saree vaichu. yaarupa shemmo nee parthadhu?? tanu vaa bhagi vaa or kanna rendu laddu sapada aasaiya 😆

Looking forward for more.




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Posted: 12 years ago
#96
Hahahaha Shammy and Tanu... Super-o-super!

Hahahaha Shobi enna kodumai ithu... Eppo u started buying sb for your son? 😛😆 Athula vera you are taking sb to Ratna house..hahaha,,,,, Eppo you started riding bike? 😲🤣🤣🤣🤣


Shammy Gisel meeting was so good😉. So soon Sri into this gang? But Why Sri cut the bike brakes before?

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Posted: 12 years ago
#97
Thanks Shammu and Tanu for the beautiful part 6.


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Posted: 12 years ago
#98
As usual so beautiful...can't help but smile!

Maha uncle; sorry!😛

Shobi aunty, too much! You should have offered Ratna aunty the drink!

Sri; psyco va? like anniyan style? breaking wires...then regretting the same in hospital...now the same staring mode...getting scarier!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wonderful Part 6 Tannuu and Shammy darlings..🤗

Superr was Ratna akka staring the drink..🤣🤣 and Shobi akka merattufying saying I will ride bike ellam..🤣🤣..

Shammy and enoda anna oda scene good..😃
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Posted: 12 years ago

Chapter 7

Shammu is shocked and is very curious to know if his girl is Gisel's sister. For Shemmo's luck Tanu comes running back home to get some book which she forgot. Shemmo sees Tanu and asks Gisel "Iva aa un sister". Gisel says no and glares at Tanu. Shemmo is happy that Tanu is not Gisel's sister. 😃 Gisel says "Her name is Tanu. Namma neighbour". Shemmo curiously asks if Tanu got any more sisters. Gisel gets sad and says "Sister iruntha kooda paravayillai, but she got a brother. Sri ava brother nu theriyaama avan Tanu va sight adikraan nu naan avana poi slap pannithen. Appo la irunthu Sri enna paarthu only muraichufys and en mela romba kolaveri la irukan. Ennoda kashta kaalam naane enakku self aapu vachukitten". 😆 Shemmo is shocked, as he many times noticed Sri morachufying him too.

Shemmo is back home and shouts "Amma rice and keerai ready aa, I wont eat lunch if no keerai ok aa". Shobi replies "Aama da unakku verum keeraya karachu karachu oothuren, grr. Unna petha neram oru erumai maada pettu irunthal aavathu athu enaku milk thandu irukum". Shemmo says "Ponga ma eppovume kalaichu kittu, ah oru kelvi ma, life la ungaloga latchiyam enna?". Shobi says "Oru naal unna adikrathu". Shemmo decides not to ask question and keeps silent. Shobi realizes that she is missing something for cooking and decides to ask Jaya as its too late to goto shop and get. Shobi asks her son Shemmo to go get it from Jaya aunty. Shemmo knocks, Sri opens. Shemmo smiles, Sri too smiles. Shemmo is happy and says that he came to borrow garlic paste from Jaya Aunty. Sri says that he will find it in kitchen and give as his mom is busy cleaning backyard. Sri finds and give to Shemmo. Shemmo thanks him and thinks that Sri is nice and walks back to his house. 😃

Its evening and Pearl and Mini are having a nice chat through phone, about their childhood and how naughty they were and complains the same when their kids does. Jinju is observing her mom's talks nicely. Pearl says "Mini, intha Jinju ennaye parthu kittu iruka. Enna aapu ready panralo, naan koncham careful ah irukanum veedla". Mini smiles and says "Hahaha nee paavom di. Inga Haritha attagasam pannamata. Aana chinnava irukale Sneha romba chutti". Pearl replies "Aana irunthalum nammala vida moshama ivanga ellam illa, appo appo chinna chinna kedi vishayangal pannuvanga. Unaku gnyabagam iruka, naama rendu perum rathiri 12 manikku motta madila ice cream kudichomee?". Jinju in mindvoice "Ohh amma, intha kariyam ellam panni irukangala? Ada cha namaku theriyama pochu. Smiles vantha odane avakitta sollanum". Mini replies to Pearl "Aama antha kalam ellam marupadiyum varuma?". Pearl gets sad and says "Itho paaru pakathula namma veedu iruku, irunthalum phone la pesikirom, hahaha". Jinju says "Amma come here". Pearl says Mini that Jinju is calling her and she will call back later. Both cuts the phone.

Gisel is laying on bed and thinking how to get into good looks of Sri and decides to ask Shemmos help tomorrow. Gisel is thinking about his girl Tanu and Shubba comes and throw the pillow on him. 😲 Gisel asks "What amma?". Shubba says he forgot his pillow and in living room after the pillow fight with Bhaghi. Gisel is sad that his mom interrupt his dream land.

In Pearl house Smiles thinks about her dream boy Gisel and laughs all the time. Jinju in mind voice "Ivaluku enna aachu? Ovvoru rathiriyum ipdi loose mathiri sirikra? Enna kodumaiyoo".
Its midnight and someone rings the door bell. Pearl wakes up and see the time and its 1 AM.

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Edited by Shemmo - 12 years ago

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