Ariya's SS: Humari adhori kahani lst pt pg 30 26-4 - Page 5

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Posted: 12 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: zebbie

Sorry Sumbal..

first accept my apologies.
read the second and the third part in one go.
it was really beautiful and lovely..
aww...
Zayan is so adorable...
sooo sweeet...
loved both the updates...
pm ke liye thanks.



it's allright my dear zebbie,
thanks for comments
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Posted: 12 years ago
#42
First sorry for late comment and nace part api loveit please cont soon 🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
#43
Briliunt update sambu dr...
now i m hundrad percent sure..
Zay is arjun sons..
update soon
Edited by Piyarani - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#44

Originally posted by: Piyarani

Briliunt update sambu dr...
now i m hundrad percent sure..
Zay is arjun sons..
update soon


thanks dear for comments you are right but what about priya?
Who is she? why she hiding her identity, this truth revealing in next two to three part,
but a twist is waiting for you all
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Posted: 12 years ago
#45
great updates..
Zayan is so cute...
Wht happnd k priya is hidng frm atrjun???
Continue soon :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#46
priya is actually Riya na?
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Posted: 12 years ago
#47
Hey nice update. Cntintje soon dear.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#48
Thank you all for lovely comments
, i try to continue soon.

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Posted: 12 years ago
#49
amazing parts
read 3 of them in a go
plz add me in your pm list
thanks
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Posted: 12 years ago
#50
FOURTH PART:
"HUMARI ADHORI KAHANI:"

In Shimla.

Location : Priya home.

Zayan: Maas imama ko dekho kiya ho gaya.

Anu: what happened Priya? Aray Priya ko toh buhat teez bukhar hai.

Zayan: maasi aap doctor ko bulaen na.

Anu: ok I call the doctor.

Priya: don't worry Anu mei nay medicine lay li hai I am fine.

Anu: priya please you need doctor.

Priya: I don't thinks soo.

Anu: are you sure?

Priya: ya, wait anu tu please zayan ko breakfast bana k day day.

Anu: ok.

In kitchen.

Anu is busy in making breakfast , zayan is also there.

Zayan: uff Anu maasi aapko ek chai bhi banana nahi aati aap shadi k bad kiya karo gi.

Anu bend down on her knee: Toh aap mujhe batao k chai kaisay banti hai.

Zayan: meri mama ko sab aata hai, isiliay toh wo world ki best mama hai.

Anu: wo toh hain.

Zayan: oh hoo anu maasi aap kitna slow kam karti ho , mama kitni jaldi breakfast bana leti hain, aap ko kuch nahi aata.

Priya is hearing the conversation between his son and Anu.

Priya: Zayu maasi ko tang nahi karo.

Zayan: ok mama.

Anu: zayu ye lo aapka breakfast.

Priya: lao mei tumhain breakfast karwa dun.

Zayan: no mama mei khud hi kha lunga, aap aaram Karen.

Priya: theek hai beta.

Zayan: anu maasi ap muje drop kar dyn gi warna mei school k laiy late ho jaun ga.

Mr. karan enters in her house.

Karan: hey Priya kaisi ho tum?

Priya: theek hun, tum yahan kaisay.

Karan: anu nay bataya tha k tumhari tabiyat theek nahi hai so isi laiy me yahan tumhara haal pochnay chala aaya.

Priya: ab theek hun mei .

Karan: lag toh raha hai tumahin dekh k abhi uthh k bhagna shru kar dogi.

Anu: kitni baar kaha hai Zayu k sath sath apna bhi dhayan rakha karay magar ye sunti kahan hai meri koi baat.

Priya: sorry madamaainda aapki har baat manun gi. Khush

Anu: ji khush.

Karan: zayu are you ready?

Zayan: yes Uncle I am ready.

Karan: toh dyar kis baat ki chalen.

Zayan: yes Karan uncle.

PriyaPOV: kash aap humaray sath hotay , hum yun is tarha darbadar nahi hotay

In Dehli:
Location: Arjun home.

Arjun pick up a picture from her wadrobe and clean dust from the frames and hugs the frame tightly.

Arjun POV "kash mei tumhain rok sakta, kash tum mujh say kabhi alag nahi hotay kash wo din meri zindagi mei aaya hi nahi hota"

He put that frame on the side table and goes to the balcony of his room and sees stars.

Arjun: kahan ho tum please lot aao, mei tum say buhat pyar karta hun tumhain nahi pata k mei kaisay jeer aha hun tumharay beghir, tums ay hi meri zindagi thi, meri sansein tum say hi the, tum hi meray jeenay ka sabab then, kahan gai wo khushiyan kahan gay wo log, kiya bacha hai mere pass kuch bhi toh nahi, mei kitna akela hun"

In shimla:

Location: priya house.

Zayan: mama aap so jao aaj mei story sunay beghair soo jaun ga.

Priya: ok beta.

Zayan closes his eyes and put his hand over her mother and hug her.

Zayan opens his eyes he sees that her mother is not sleeping she rubs his hairs and lost in her thought.

Zayan: mama aapko nend nahi aa rahi.

Priya; nahi.

Zayan: mei aapko story sunaun aapko nend aa jaey gi.

Priya: ha beta suano

Zayan: ek raajkumari thi , aur ek rajkumar tha, dono khushi khushi ek baray say mehal mei rehtay thay, ek din rajkumar rajkumari say buhat naraz ho gaya, us nay rajkumari ko buhat danta, rajkumari ronay lagi, phir wo apnay saray khilonay lay k mehal say dour nikal gai, Rajkumar rota raha par usay rajkumari nahi mili, mama rajkumar nay ghalat kiya na.

Priya: nahi Rajkumari nay zaroor koi ghalti ki hogi isiliay rajkumar ko gussa aaya tha.

Zayan: mama rajkumar ko aaisa nahi karna chaheay tha na pata nahi rajkumari kahan hai kaisai hai.

Priya: Rajkumar nay theek kiya zaya , rajkumari ko saza milni hi thi, kyun k us nay rajkumar say uski khushiyan mang li the.

Zayan: mama ap ko kaisay pata.

Priya: aaki mama hun na mei sab janti hun, ab aap sojao. She kisses him on heis forhead

Zayan: goodnight mama.

Priya: good night beta


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