MG OS: straight to ur heart april 16

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Posted: 12 years ago
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hiii i new concept

well maan in a new avatar as the banner says...

❤️
STRAIGHT
TO YOUR HEART ❤️




PROLOGUE

Maan ..maan where are you… karan looked for his dear cutie brother who was having some sorts of mental imbalance according to him…

Maan his closed his ears ..he knew that know he is gonna get a good scolding…he looked at his messed up state..he was baking a chocolate cake… chocolate smudged face was looking so cute.. he was looking like a cute child..well who is he kidding , he was just eighteen and now he is almost a perfectionist in cooking… even he had given a tough competition to karan's best shef…

Karan came and looked at his brother and the yummy cake that was lying on the kitchen slab…

Karan came and took apron from his neck..maan frowned a little but karan was quick to put away all the mess…

Karan: sometimes I really wonder why aren't you my sister .. for god sake maan why you always put me in a mess… guys don't cook in our family.. mom will kill me if she will know that my little sister is making a chocolate cake…

He said sarcastically with sweet attitude…maan glared at his brother… he always tease him saying he is is born wrong he should be his sister that he craves for ..but here something is totally a mismatch…

Maan: grow up bhai… and you cant eat it its for someone else…. And you know tomorrow I am going to bake it gain..so you better stay away from this cake…

Karan notted his brows….

Karan: I swear I wont even let you enter in any of my hotels if you again do this…

Maan looked at his brother dangerously…

Maan : fine then be ready for my revenge I am going to tell everything to nandini… and I will make dad to take you with him in his business and then it will be fun that you will be with all those cements and brick.. phir kar lena romance… bhai..

Maan gave a deadly smirk to karan making him to accept his defeat..




so anyone interested in this OS

maximum 4 parts no more than that...

a cute foody love story


waiting for some postive replies..
will write its first part if some readers will be there
after tomorrow... exams will be finished
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Hanishadevi thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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very interesting story..pls do cont soon..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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congrats os queen
came with another cute story
loved the bros bond
Edited by valli22 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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thanks a lot😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice concept
maan love to cook
waiting for next
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Posted: 12 years ago
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woww dii nyc conceot loved itt
soo maan loves cooking waiting for next
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Posted: 12 years ago
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aww cho chweet
my maan loves cooking
who is that special one jiske liye baking ho rahi hai
meri taraf se bhi cake khalo maan
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Posted: 12 years ago
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maan cook.. oh god.. loved it dear
but please give us the first soon will be waiting
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow lovely start dear.. te way my maan cooking and his brother teasing him was so lovely.. te way my maan threatening him was lovely..i love te update so much dear
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Posted: 12 years ago
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so excited to see what happens next
love to see a different avator of maan 😃

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