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Dil me yeh aag hai
Jo bhujne na de mere jalte huye ishq aur junoon ko
Jo hai mera pagal pyaar sirf aur sirf tera liye

There is a fire in my heart
Which doesn't let my burning love and passion burn out
Which my crazy love is for you and you only

This was a very random and not well written poem. I was really bored. I will work on my poetry. Did it even make any sense?

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice 😛 !
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@maneesha @sweetdear @stephanie @vijju

You all are being nice cuz you feel bad for me. This seriously is the worst thing I ever wrote...actually after that one...anyways you guys are so sweet and nice. I want to improve in my poetry. I think poetry sounds better in Hindi than English but I can't read or write in Hindi!!!!but I can speak it properly...very fluent!!!!!

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