Farewell ... Part 15 pg. 30 Updated END - Page 23

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Posted: 18 years ago

And through the sniffles i thought of something,( yep, i can actually cry and think at the same time! 😛), what if you were to, after a little while, write a continuation to this say, set a few yrs later? when, i don't care how (i mean, for all i care, it could involve the space aliens!) Pia is out of Jai's life?
ok, i know, i am a die hard romantic!
Come on, there has to be a meeting, even if it is, as joy said,
".....When the funeral rites are over,
We shall meet,
Freely, unencumbered,
On the river bank
By the abandoned shiv temple,
In front of the splintered terrace,
And behind us the last wisp from your funeral pyre will curl up……"

Give us the epilogue.......

😭 😭 😭
Armana
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Posted: 18 years ago
Sangita
that was a beautiful.heartwrenching.touching.loved it.it was the prefect ending to this story.love the character in your ff.simply superb.will be eagerly waiting for your new ff. 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
That was soo sad!!!!!! 😭 yet, it was such a good ending to such a good fanfic!!! 👏 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
Finally got myself to read it 😕 😆
I love teh way u write, it is only what u write that i have constant problem with... and this surely isnt an exception 😭 WHY? 😭 U didnt even let them meet up before they went seperate ways 😕 😡

All in all it was a heart wwarming story rich with emotions as it always has been with ur fanfics... it surely was a beautiful read.

By the way, wanted to tell u, u better give up on ur depressing ideas... Varna i would only be gald to don the mantle of Gabbar and treat u like Takkur... Very much in the lines of 'Yeh hath mujhe deyde Takkur' 😆 Phir type kasie karogi? Dont push ur luck too much, u know it could be a possiblity sooner than u expect... may be in a week's time 😆


Btw, take care of ur ankle and visit the doc.

Lots of Luv & Hugs
Anu.


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Posted: 18 years ago

"Farewell is not forever... Farewell is not the end... it simply means i'll miss you until we meet again..."


no FF, in fact, very few epi's of the actual show have made me cry so much, feel so sad... and yet the ending is somehow... right.

i'm not sure whether to thank you or hit you... 😭 😛
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Posted: 18 years ago


Everytime I think I will not read your ff as they make me cry but nevertheless I read them and cry my heart out...khub bhalo likhecho...kintu I wish the serial does not turn out like this...Jai & Bani deserve each other...and selfish people like Pia and Jigaysa should be punished...good should always win over evil...no matter what...with this belief we should go forward in life...keep writing...bhalo theko...tin
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Posted: 18 years ago
yaar, ONE MORE PART. I just want to see his visit one Krishna's birthday.


-Rimpy 💔 ❓

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