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Posted: 12 years ago
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Asad slowly drove the car on the highway, showing Zoya where he used to hang out on his school days.

The two had developed a new bond. A bond of friendship.

Though they knew that they hopelessly loved each other, both of them decided to let time being them together.

Zoya Farooqui never failed to make Asad smile these days. He would laugh at her weirdest and lamest jokes.

After all, they say love can change you, in and out.

"Mr. Khan, I never expected you to bunk classes. I mean, you're like the good boy na?"

"Oh shutup Ms.Farooqui, even I can start now."

They looked at each other and burst into laughter. Reason? The almighty
alone knew.

As they moved through the highway, amidst thick fog and humid breezes, Zoya suddenly held Asad's hand which lied on the gear.

He stopped the car immediately and looked at her.

Zoya's face was red. Like an apple.

She pointed towards a cottage. A big cottage surrounded by green trees and blossoming flowers.

What was it?

Asad smirked to himself, remembering what she was reminded of.

That night. That rain. That song. That dance. Him and her, lost in each other.

He entwined his fingers in hers and looked at his lady love's beautiful face.

"Want a dance with Asad Ahmed Khan?" he said in a manly, and arrogant voice.

But she was Zoya Farooqui. Someone who could fix up such a man in seconds.

She let go of his hand, crossed her arms, and looked straight forward.

"I'm not accepting such a horrible proposal. Okay?"

And there she began with her childish antics, which never failed to literally kill Asad.

He got down from the car, and approached her door.

"Mission successful" she said to herself, grinning.

Asad opened her door, and offered his hand to hers, with a highly flirtatious smile.

Offering him a smile too, she slipped her hand into his and got down from the car.

As they walked hand in hand, the clouds above them began to grow darker and darker.

They stopped, and looked up at the sky.

Wide smiles creeped up their faces as their wish was coming true. They were going to dance together, again, consciously, in that rain.

Asad slowly looked towards Zoya and stared at the twinkle in her eye reflecting her overflowing happiness.

Slowly, he moved towards her and planted a small peck on her pink cheek.

Before Zoya could react to this, the rain gods celebrated their togetherness and poured down heavily on the two lovers, who were drenched in a few minutes.

Zoya blushed at the feeling of his kiss that still felt fresh.

She looked at his wet face. And she was close to death.

To give in a little spice to their romance tonight, she seductively moved her body and made him place his hands over her hip.

She rested her hands around his shoulder and touched his neck till he would respond.

The moment Asad felt her palms, he pulled her in and made her stomach touch his.

They weren't dancing at all, they were trying to fulfil each other's desire. It was that desire that they wanted to fulfil since ages.

He slowly passed his hand from her waist, all the way till her neck.

Zoya closed her eyes to the deep feeling that churned her stomach. She tightened her grip around his neck.

Asad slowly leaned towards her neck, and planted a kiss.

He moved onto the other side of her neck, and laid his lips on her wet skin.

Zoya quietly enjoyed his touch. She wanted him to take her away completely. She was always waiting for this.

Slowly she opened her eyes and looked at him.

He smiled at her expressions, which talked her heart. She loved it. And she wanted more.

Slowly, Zoya moved her hand over to his hair, and pulled him forward towards her lips.

He brought her in as close as possible to his body.

Their closeness fastened their breaths and made their hearts race.

It was something that they were yearning for, ever since they fell in love with each other.

Gently, he pressed his lips against hers and indulged in it for as long as he could.

And she found her solace with him, in him.

This, was their life. Love, love and love.

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Okay, this actually didn't turn out to be the way I expected it to. 😆
But please do leave your reviews. 😳
PMs will be sent soon. :)
Edited by Sruthi_Virmanli - 12 years ago

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Bloomingbud thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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thanks dear for the wonderful update. Loved it
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Enjoyed it Sru! Well written!
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It was an amazing update...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Ihateyou. You had to end it there na? 😔
It was beautifully written :)
I missed you! Where were you? :*
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Posted: 12 years ago
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The idea was good for them to return to the place - that was creative. I think that it really need to be fleshed out some more and it ended rather abruptly. It missed depth.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awww sweet! This was lovely 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Sruthi. Wow!!

Wonderful and awesome OS. I can still feel the goosebumps on my arms and legs. Totally dreamy, and superb

(:

Keep it up, and thanks a ton for the PM (: Keep writing more and more.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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its really great!! Ur OS is awesome! Thanks 4 d pm!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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y did u end it out there.. so badly wanted de dance contd naaa

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