lyrics-angad an his unknown luv

hi guys im again here wid my new creativity sorry 4 keep u guys waiting....(if u guys waited 4 my lyrics) i was on my aunt's home she dun hav p.c...so im again here...

these lyrics will suite 2 angad bcuz he dun know luv but hes in luv wid that sweety kripa....ok now juz read

pyar muhabbat say mujh ko to nafrat hai
phir bhi miilee tum tu dil mera gum sum hai

kia iss ko hi kehtay hain chahat
har waqt dil main ek ahahat

pyar sikhao tum
dil ko apnao tum
dil tu tera yaar hai

kaisa ye pyar hai
kaisa ye pyar hai

ok...dat all....now i want ur comments

wow gr8 lyrix keep it up...!!

Hey Ahtika,

I'm glad that you like writing such beautiful lyrics. I just wanted to give you a personal comment on the first line. I don't know if saying "pyar mohabbat se mujh ko nafrat hai" suits Angad. I know he was unaware of what love was earlier, and maybe still is not totally sure, but I don't think he hates love itself. He has changed greatly and hence I thought that maybe if you change around the words a little. I am just giving a suggestion...hope you don't mind (I used your words and changed it a little)

Pyar mohabbat pe ye dil ko yakeen na tha

Tumse milke laga sab kuch naya

Phir bhi yeh dil rehta hai gum sum

Jab samne mere nahi hoti tum

Sweetie keep up the work. Writing such lyrics creates images in people's minds and I personally encourage that. Once again, I hope that you don't mind my suggestion. If you don't like it, then treat it as if it was never there. Always continue writing such stuff.

-Love4ever!