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Posted: 12 years ago
#41
sounds interesting SHreya...
plz conti. soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#42
amazing concept..!
plzz continue n updatee sssoonnn...!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#43
hey when will you start this ss. pl start soon. the teaser is so interesting that i cant wait to read the story. pl pm me when you update.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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plzzz
jaldi update karo cant wait anymore
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Posted: 12 years ago
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ya, pls update fast fast fast. do pm me pls.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#46
its really interesting please continue soon :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hola guys!! Hope aap log iss SS ke baare mein bhule nahi!! FInally aaj mein first part update kar rahi hun.. So no more bak bak.. Here you go.. But yeah! Warning hai.. Its quite.. Umm.. Depressing.. And short!!

Part 1

"THUD!"

He fell on the floor.. How could this be true? How could she just have it? How could god play such a game with her life? He felt tears rolling down his cheeks.. He couldn't stop them... Wait! Did he hear it right? He looked up at her.. She too was in tears.

She knelt down in front of him and gathered him in a hug.. Even she couldn't believe it when she got the news for the first time.. But.. But that was the truth.. The bitter truth.. Life can really play games with you..

"Are you sure, Sharon? Maybe, maybe you just misunderstood or something.. This really can't happen to her!!" he said, still not believing what he heard..

She caressed his back trying to calm him down.. Her tears to didn't stop but she had to be strong to be there with Swayam.. To help him be strong.. She broke the hug and looked into his eyes..

"That is the truth, Swayam. This IS happening!!"

Fresh tears started forming in his eyes.. He hugged her back, this time tighter..

Same Time- The Singhania Residency

The bag clinging on her shoulder fell down as she stepped into their room.. She saw their pictures hanging on the wall.. Photos of their journey together.. Their first day in the college together, the proposal, their first date, some random pics and the day of their marriage.. All the memories were in front of her eyes.. She felt weak.. Her joints pained.. She walked in further and then collapsed.. She fell to the ground.

Tears didn't stop.. She couldn't stop them. Why always her? Why did all the bad in the world happen with her? What was her fault after all?? Only if she could get the answers for these questions..

She cried and cried.. What else could she do? Maybe crying a bit would reduce the pain she felt- in her heart.. But it didn't happen.. She just couldn't stop crying. The thought, the reality, the truth never went out of her head.. What would happen of her? Well, the answer was given today by the doctor.. Her end was written.. But, what would she say to him? Could she tell him? Should she tell him? Would she tell him?

"NO!! No, you can't Taani! You just can't tell him this.. He'll die of pain.. No! I won't tell him. I won't!"

She, after a lot of tries, stood up and went towards the bed.. She picked up a photo frame which has his picture in it from the side table.. "You will need to move on, Rey. *she caressed the picture* I never thought that I could give you so much pain.. *sniffs back a tear* You will need to move on, Rey!"

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Hope you liked it guys!! Bahut sad types ho gaya toh sorry! But yeh SS aage padhne ke liye itni sadness toh jhelni padegi..

Guys, please do like and comment.. I really NEED motivation!!

Silent readers- At least like the post!!




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Posted: 12 years ago
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Res..

Unres..

OH.My.God!! This was beautiful!! I don't know what's the exact word but.. WOW!! Like.. Tune woh pain bhi itni beautifully dikhayi hai na.. Loved it re!!
I simply LOVED it!! I don't know mai aur kya bolu!
I mean.. Tu abhi jaanti nahi hai.. but tera msg dekh ke ki tu update karne waali hai.. I was literally dancing!! Itni khushi toh mujhe RCB ke jeetne par bhi nahi hoti!! Lol! But mere liye no suspense.. I already know aage kya hone wala hai!!😉😆

BUT.. Yeh khushi itne chote pachket me.. Not Done!! Iss baar maaf kar diya hai.. next time nahi karungi!!😆

I know you won't but phir bhi.. Update soon and do pm me!!😆
Edited by Shivangi_Taarey - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#49
I love it but what happened yo taani is she going to die or something by the love the ss
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow shreya amazing update superbly written yaar loved the way u showed all the emotins nd pain my dear u rock nd u are afav writer yaar ...loved it very much plzz update asap nd ill be waiting yaar👍🏼😊⭐️⭐️⭐️
Edited by rakhiankita - 12 years ago

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