The Chase: An ArVi FF Part1 pg4 - Page 4

wowww!!1amazing part dear👏its so out of the box n interesting...wud luv to read more of this ff...its truly amazing!!!grt job sheetal n keshni👍🏼❤️

Sheetal nd keshu two superstar 2gthr..I luv d updt..Its totally different 4rm othr ff,os,ss.Arjun as angry young man nd purvi as chulbuli girl..Keshu my like butten doesnt work so i cldnt like d previous part..Bt plz pm me whn u updt plz

amazinggg love it <3

D first part is up.. 😃 N its Trememdously amazing.. I love every bit of it.. From d introduction to d equation they share.. Every character is bein given justice.. B it Khadoos Arjun or Strict Sachin.. A geek yet humble ovi o A cool dude officer Romil.. *Applause*

loved how u created d atmosphere.. I cud actually visualise everything easily.. Lik a movie is bein played..

M super eager to know whos d chor??? 😆 😆

N Purvi's entry.. Mind blowing.. N Purvi even managed to cool Arjun.. Wow.. Impressive hun!

Honestly,I cnt wait fr d 2nd part.. Sheetal.. Tryn updatin it real soon 😛

Outstanding work Guys.. 👏

That was a great start!! Loving the classic khadoos Arjun ;D While all the characters were being introduced I was like 'where the heck is Purvi?!' but she's a new member so we will see exactly how she bond with the rest of the team, excited and looking forward to how this FF shapes up. Amazing start and keep it up 👏