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Posted: 12 years ago





tabhi ap itni intelligent ho
ap apni padai ka poora fayada utha rahi ho 🤣 🤣 🤣
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Posted: 12 years ago
di yeh kya naya zhole he abhi
kya hua he mayank ko and usne kyu dekha liye he
i am scare di pls jaldi jaldi update na di pls
its awesome and romantic too and emotional too di
baata nahi ab kya hoga mayur ke zindagi me
pehle se hi itni tension and uperse yeh ab


thanks for pm me and sorry for late comment

di lagata he galati se and net prob se double comment go raha he
love u always
di

deepa
Edited by deepa5 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
ooohhh partner kitna mast update tha...seriously u were so right...i loved it...

how well u have started to know me na...i loved the flashback..."despo" lolzzz...and the famous line "main tumhare bachche ki maa banne wali hoon"...
loved it :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
Aww fizu!! Dat ws such an cute update!!
But I'm worried abt d last lyn!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Plz don't let anything happen to nupur. Plz
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Posted: 12 years ago
superb update...
Very nicely written
I liked every dialogue especially Nupur's 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hyeee... Mayur scenes were so beautiful.
Dono ek dusre se romantic revenge le rahe the.
I ws missing it.
Mein kl hi soch rahithi k is mein koi mayur scene hi nahi hai.
Bt my wish is granted.
Thnx for updating and Pm.
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Posted: 12 years ago
flashback is awesome
beautiful
thanx for the pm
cont soon dear
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Posted: 12 years ago

Thnks for ur lovly comment …I need to get my helmet ..marna maat trust me

Chapter 10

He opens the door and was stunt to see the sight… he sigh more in like now wht evr he was keeping himself will shattered now… he rushed inside

Mayank: mom… he whispered

And she spread her arms for him, knowing wht she is feeling she has gone through evry day when nupur get out to fight… but wht he is feeling is worse as he has never felt so helpless about nupur… he hugged her tight and closed his eyes tightly and she caressed her hairs to calm him down

NM: kuch bhi nhi hoga beta usko…. Shhh… relax

He looked up to her she knew…

Mayank: mein kuch bhi nhi ker paraha hoon mom kuch bhi nhi

NM: asay kasay… aao yaha bhaito… she sat on sofa and he placed his head on her lap… tum asa kasay soch rahy hoo… dekho ur doing wht evr u can

Mayank: but there is no result till now… nothing…

NM: u will find a way…. Dekhna sab thik hoga… tum kerlo yeah… mayank tum asy har thori nhi man sakty ho

Mayank: kuch bhi nhi hona chaiy … its hell… hamesha meray sath hi asa kyun hota hai

NM: is baar tum asa kuch nhi hony do gay …. Im sure of tht…

Mayank: u think so

NM: I believe so… thora rest kero chalo jab tak samrat aur benji atay hain..phr kam per lagna

He lye back on her lap..

Mayank: apko benji lay ker aya

NM: haan.. aur acha hi hua… mjhy ajeeb sa lag raha thaw aha..

Mayank: acha hua ap agai mjhy acha lagraha hai ab….

He was resting his mind for few mins when the cell rung and looking at the id he frown

……………

He can see that woman again being to restless… god she is doing worse..

Yeah aurat mera deemgh karab kerday gi

Sir ap kyun itni fikar ker rahy hai.. maarti hai maar jay…

Mein yaha kisi ko marnay nhi aya hoon samjhy tum… subha tak huamra kam hojay ga baat kahtam… bus..

Ji …

Nupur: mein khud baat kerlo gi un se… dekhna…

Agar tumhari yeah halat nhi hoti nah tu mein tum ko ab tak maar chuka hota samjhi tum… mjhy majboor maat kero k mein tum ko maar dalo … aur is bachy ko bhi…

Nupur: pls.. sirf ek daafa pls..

Nupru knew they will not let her talk no.. sigh wht to do… she thought she has to take the risk… she need a the wireless device they are using to communicate with each other… just one of it… one of the man is sitting behind the chairs in the corner has it… and if she can have it there.. she can call mayank last time… she stod up n appeared as she is walking.. and than went n sat down there on the chair…

The man was still there with the device.. she closed her eyes n pretend as if she is sleeping.. and was praying that god do sum miracle and he disappear from there.. her prayer got answered after sumtime and he moved away…

She tuned herself such tht still she appeared asleep from far but can access the recvier… she knew to how ti put the code on… and tried to connect the signal to nearby catchable…

Shit no body was receiving… got in it…

His cell rung and he saw samrat n benji too entered

Mayank: wht..

Sir we are receiving sum signals continuously from frequency near the airport…

Mayank: she has lost it… god she has lost it.. he thought.. transfer it now.. now…

Mayank: its nupur… benji n samrat rushed to him ..hello…

Us waqt asay phone kyun rekh diya tha

He was panting and she can feel the anger and frustration in it… How she wished to make it quick n just inform him all… but she knew they will get to know tht she has broken the signal… and they will observe it.. and how he wish to scold her left right n center… wht the hell she is doing bt than he know he cant

Nupur: woh log mera itna kayal ker rahy hain kafi nhi hai kya..

Mayank: tum thik hona

Nupur: han baba thik hoon… hum sab thik hai yaha…. Tum thik ho ya sab ko maar rahy ho

Mayank: ab asa bhi nhi hoon

Nupur: mjhy ajeeb lag raha hai

Mayank: kya ajeeb lag raha hai…. Tabiyat thik hai….

Nupur: han .. bus kuch ajeeb se rahti hai… mjhy is baray mein baat nhi kerni ..

Mayank: thik hai tu kuch aur baat kertay hain…. Aj kay kya kiya tha mjhy surprise dayny k liyan….

Nupur: kuch bhi nhi… Tumhain yaad hai woh burkhay wali larki… jis hum se 25 September ko takeri thi… haan mjhy ab tak woh date yaad hai… aj bhi asai hi larki mjhy se yaah takari thi…. Bulky wasy hi.. ek dam andheray jasi…

Mayank: Kahin wohi larki tu nhi thi…

Nupur: Nhi baba woh larki yaah kasay aay gi.. tum bhi nah…

Mayank wrote on the note pad to check the date wht happen than…. Samrat noded nad start searching and so as benji…

Mayank: strange baat hai tum ko yeah date yaad kasay rah gai… ur to bad at all this…

Nupur: oye mera mazak maat urao samjhy…. Wasy hi tumhary betay ny mjhy bht tang ker k rekha hai…

Mayank: donot u dare say anything to my son… samjhi… tum tang ker rahi hogi us ko..

Nupur: KYa.. mein kyun tang kero gi us ko…

Mayank: kyun k tumhara kam hai sab ko tang kerna

Nupur: sabar ker jao pati dev mein na tum ko aker batao gi… samjhy…. K mein kitna tang ker sakti hon…

Mayank: bechara mein…

Nupur: rahny do koi larka na behcara vichara nhi hota huh…

There was a silence for few mins..

Nupur: mein thik hoon …

Mayank: hmm…

Nupur: Acha woh choro…. Tum hotel ki reservations cancel keradain nah…delhi INn

Mayank: Kaun se hotel ki

Nupur: Woh.. woh mein ny book keraya tha….

Mayank: Ohh…woh kyun…

Nupur: Acha tang maat kero..

Mayank: Mein ny kya kaha …

Nupur: Kafi khusoorat hotel hai woh… us ko room 458 strange hai woh room 132 ko connect kerta hai… us room se direct view itna haseen hai k bus… matlab ksisi ny socha bhi nhi hoga k waha se itna sab kuch dekh sakta hai …

Mayank: really…. Aur kya acha hai waha se..he frown and so were smart n benji…and start noting evry detail

Nupur: aray best to the k woh airport se srif 18 mins k drive per hai….

Mayank: zara bhi time waste kerny k mood mein nhi thi ap.. kya baat hai….

Nupur: very fuuny… mein ny soch liya hai k "park view" mein wasa hi ghar bano gi jasa socha hai…

Mayank: kasa socha hai

Nupur: dekho us ko andar sirf 5 tu floor hain… aur woh bhi har floor per ajeeb kism ki segregation…. phly floor per 5 rooms.. aur ajeeb tareqys se 45 ki angle per…

Dosray per 7-8 hongy… aur ek jaga corridor k ek taraf …

Third floor per sirf 2…. Strange hai I mean.. ya shayd mein ny dekha sahi se nhi….

Four aur fith per suite se hain…. Per kya well equipped hai.. aur sab se zayda suit hi hain… just imagine 10… hain nah ajeeb sa architecture…

Mayank: kafi ajeeb sa hai…. Aur tum ko asa ghar chaiy ghar k andar suite.. waha ghar km hotel zayda lag raha hai…

Nupur: so tu hai.. acha suno mjhy jana hoga… mein aur baat nhi kerskti …

Mayank: magar…

Nupur: tum kerskaty ho… bye

The moment she placed back the receiver she looked up…. knew now she is in trouble.. the man grip her from hairs but carefully not to harm her.. and brought her to the leader…

He placed the gun on her… this was not she has expected…she knew it was daam risky but she has no other way.. but she has done wht she has meant to do.. maybe mayank will hate her all his life….but all this people will have there loved ones with them… may she will not… she closed her eyes….. and she just can see his worried face infront of her… she placed her hand on her womb and whispered a sorry …

SHOT…..

Edited by drfizaahmed - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
plzzz plzzz update soon...

nice one...

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