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Hi,this is tia

The story going on in kaa is quote boring

So I decided to start my own fanfic

Its titled:Kya Pyaar Karoge Mujhse

It starts from where it ended on Thursday:Shiv meeting Shashank.And their conversation.

The next morning,shiv wakes up to see gauri wearing a red coloured sari,with red bangles.She was looking so pretty that shiv could not takes his eyes off from her. Gauri goes to her dressing table to complete herself by putting the vermillion,Shiv rushes towards her in order to stop her.But god had something else in his mind.Just as Shiv snatches the vermillion case,his legs slipped and the vermillion landed on gauris forhead.Gauri is too shocked to react.All this is silently watched by shashank.Though Shashank is very sure that Gauri loves only him,and not Shiv, somwhere down his heart he knows that gauri and shiv were always together,and will always be together

At the dining hall:

Nikhila:Shiv.gauri where are you?Come down right now...

see who has come.

Shiv and gauri come down hurriedly to see Mrs. Raima Shah....Ipshitas mother(enacted by Shilpla saklani...Ganga of Kyunki.)

sorry guys for this utterly butterly pathetic fanfic.plz point out my mistakes so that i can make the story more interesting.
predictions and suggestions are always welcome.

wow! sweetie..

u soo have to continue!!

i loved it!!

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wow! sweetie..

u soo have to continue!!

i loved it!!

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thank u
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i am feeling at the top of the world 😳 😳

hy...gr8 starting...bt it waz a very short part...
cont soon...

Originally posted by: angel_tia

thank u
soooooooooooooooooooooo much
i am feeling at the top of the world 😳 😳

hunnii.. i am glad that ur feeling on the top of the world.. coz then u will be
able to write up longer parts to ur wonderful ff.. loved the title as well..!!

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Recap:Shiv accidentally puts vermillion on Gauri.Entry of Ipshitas mom:Mrs.Raima Shah
[Raima Shah has a past with Shivs dad Mahen Kapoor.She dislikes Mahen,but holds no grudge against his family]
Shiv at once recognises Raima aunty and bends down to seek her blessings.
Raima is utterly butterly shocked
Raima:Nikhla ye Shiv ko kya ho gaya hai?use kabse paaon chhune ki aadat pad gayi?Kya aap sab sure hai ki yehi "Shiv Kapoor"hai?
Nikhila:Are yeh sab meri bahu Gauri ka kamal hai.Usine hame ye din dikhaya hai.
gauri smiles
Nikhila:are gauri,tu wahan kyun khadi hai?
Shiv:Ma,Gauri ko ye kaise pata hoga ki Raima Aunty kaun hai?Gauri,ye Raima aunty hain,Ipshita ki mom
Gauri:Aur ye baat aap mujhe ab bata rahe hain?
Gauri goes and touches Raimas feet to seek her blessings
Raima:Are!Tumlog pati patni ho ki nahin?You should take blessinngs together
Shiv and Gauri both bend to take Raimas blessings
Raima:You look like a pair made in heaven.Tumlogon ke liye yehi dua karungi ki maut bhi tumhe judaa na kar paye
Hearing this,both Shiv and Gauri smile in their minds.They get up.
Raima Aunty kisses Gauris forhead nd remarks

that was nice
continue soooon 😊

very cute ff 😳 😳 😳 ...plz continue soon and longer parts plz 😊