Kriyaansh: love awaits- *Chapter 10: page 51* (updated)

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Kanchi..

@Kanchi..

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Posted: 12 years ago

#71

wow!!! awesome update...

luvd kriya's trust 4 rey...so nice...😊

hate dat arjun...😡 gadha kahin ka...

hope sab jaldi sortout ho jaye aur kriyaansh fir se ek ho jaye...

update soon...

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Maneet

@moon_cupcake

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Posted: 12 years ago

#72

amazing update

loved it

so curious to know the reason behind kriyansh separation and whose the arjun??

updt soon

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-spongy-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#73

wowieee

it was a really nice update..

story toh aur bi interesting hoti ja rhi hain...

kriya's trust on rey is commendable 👏

bt yeh arjun kan hain and why is rey listening to him...

really loving the plot...

hope ki rey swayam se jaldi yeh sb share kare... after all best friend hain... 😊😊😊

thnx for the pm.. 😊😊😊

do pm me when u update the next chappy... 😆😆

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darshita

@sweetydiyafrien

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Posted: 12 years ago

#74

why is it always our rey and kriaya that the world are after them break apart...
continue soon and pm me...

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Neeraj

@nature2

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Posted: 12 years ago

#75

iski toh just hit him

emotional update love it

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shelly_Arsha

@shelly_Arsha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#76

Originally posted by: nature2

iski toh just hit him
</div><div align="center"><font color="#6600ff" size="7">emotional update love it </font><font color="#6600ff" size="7"></font>

lol aapko animation ki bhot shok hai right 😆 thanks

Edited by shelly_Arsha - 12 years ago

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VAISHNAVI MURALI

@-vaishnavimural

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Posted: 12 years ago

#77

who d hel s arjun... y s he behind kria n y s he keen on separating KR.. i hate him 🤬... loved d trust kria has on rey loved d way u showed d flashback.. i hate to c KR suffering like this.. plz remove that looser arjun n bring KR together.. cant c them suffer update next part soon..

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prabhjot ARMA

@bluelashes

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Posted: 12 years ago

#78

sun mera res maar lena firt one warna no comment to meri jgha tu res marna okay

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shelly_Arsha

@shelly_Arsha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#79

First of all! Happy kriyaansh anniversary guys!! thanks for ur likes n comments
I'll try my best to give kriyaansh in this.. Special thanks to Aroma di for the ending 😊
heres the update:

Arjun: yeh mujhe chaiye! *pointing at a pik*

Boy: lekin bhai.. yeh toh.. rey.. reyaansh singhania ki gf
hai..

Arjun: toh? uski gf thi.. ab nai hai..! reyaansh singhania!
agar kriya ghai meri nai ho sakti..
toh aur kisi ki bhi nai ho sakti.. Samjhe tumm!!

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Chapter 2(b):~ the night had passed with great difficulty for kriyaansh. Not a single one of them had slept, the night was surely a long one..Apart from kriyaansh, Sharon too had a difficult sleep! Wondering why kriya had suddenly asked about her previous boyfriend would not let her sleep..

Sharon: (self talk) kriya ne.. mujhse achanak kyun poocha k mera swayam se pehle.. urgh sharon tu kiskey baarey mein soch rhi hai.. chuck it!

Kriya: goodmorning.. subah subah kiss se baatein kar rhi ho?

Sharon: bas khud se.. tum poori raat nai soi na?

Kriya: er..erm nai voh.. *sigh* kaisey soh paati... aur tum bhi toh nai soi na.. apne aankhen dekhi hain kya? batao kya baat hai.. swayam ki yaad ah rhi thi? 😉

Sharon: kriyyaaa.. nai bas.. acha kriyaa.. tumne mujhse kal yeh kyun poocha agar mera swayam se pehle koi bf tha?

kriya: tu abh bhi uss baarey mein soch rhi hai..

Sharon: nai bas.. bataa na

kriya: obvious si baat hai koi toh hoga.. afterall college times ki diva thi tum.. har larki ka dream tha tum jaisa bann na.. aur har larkey ka dream tum ko paana.. sab pagal hojaatey thai!!

*Sharons flashback* girls: wohh dekho girls THE SHARON RAIPRAKASH..

girl 2: kitni hot lagh rhi hai na? isiliye koi guys humme dekhte hi nai hai :(

Boy 1: dude voh dekh sharon ja rhi hai!

Boy 2: abhi aya.. *goes to sharon* Hey beautiful, this ones for u.. 😉 *handing a rose*

Sharon: 😳 thanks

Boy 2: Aaj shaam ko dinner?

Sharon: ERM.. OK I don't mind.. waise tumhara naam kya hai?

*flashback ends*

kriya: Sharonn!! kaha khoy hui hai? bataa na kyun pooch rhi thi?

sharon: *self talk* kriya ko abhi batana teekh nai hoga... apne hyper mode mein chali jaye gi

kriyaa: Sharon!! *shakes her*

sharon: haa.. haan.. nai woh bas aise hi pooch rhi thi.. kal
neend aagaye thi na toh baat poori nai ho paye...

Kriya: oh.. toh ab hojaye?

Sharon: er..erm mujhe bhook laggi hai.. aakey naashta kar le.. *goes to the kitchen*

Kriya: *sigh* isse kya hua.. bohot ajeeb behave kar rhi hai..
kaash swayam hota ya pe... aur rey bhi.. *a tear strolls down her eye*

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swayam: *self talk* rey abhi tak soh reh, raat ko kriya ki yaad ne nai soney diya aur yaha mein na soney doon... naa ussey disturb nai karta *about to leave the room*

Rey: swayam.. kaha jaa reh.. ah na sorry mein.. kuch zyaada hi soh gaya..

Swayam: 😊 don't worry it's fine.. mein samjh sakta hoon.. kal poori raat nai soya na?

rey: *sigh* swayam.. agar sawaal ka jawaab pata hai tujhe toh kyun poochta hai.. haan nai soya..
uski yaad soney de tab na..

Swayam: im sorry dude

rey: no, why u sorry for? Achaa listenn!!

Swayam: haan kya.. mein yahin hoon chilla kyun reh? bol..

Rey: erm.. shar.. sharon se baat hui?

swayam: nai abhi nai kyun? sab teekh toh hai na?

Rey: *self talk* i wish i could tell u swayam, patta nai tu kaisey react karega jaan kar K..

Swayam: dudee!! kaha khoya hai?? kyun pooch rah tha?

Rey: han.. woh waisey pooch rah tha.. kriya ka haal jaan leta

Swayam: don't worry, she'll be fine.. le mere phone se phone karle sharon ko...

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kriya: sharon.. tera phone bhaj reh..

Sharon: kiska phone hai uttha loh

Kriya: Hello swayam.. it's me kriya

*loudspeaker*

Rey: *self talk* Ahh kitna acha lagrah hai iski awaaz sunn kar.. mein swayam bhan kar issey haal pooch leta hoon..

kriya: swayam? u there?

Rey: haa.. *coughs* haan kaisi ho.. baatc..mera matlab hai kriya

Kriya: swayam mein teekh hoon.. ab toh aadat si hogi hai mujhko...

Rey: tu..tum teekh se khana kha lena haan.. aur apna khayal rakha karo.. kri..kriya tum usse bhool.. bhool jao kriya *a tear escapes both their eyes*

Kriya: apne pehla aur aakhri pyar ko hi kaise bhool jaon swayam?
Aur bhoolne mein bhi waqt lagta hai
say kehtey hai log.. sammey k saath log bhi badal jaatey hai..
kya kaha tha usne.. 1 khaftey mein waapis..
shayad meri hi kismat mein nai tha rey k saath apni zindagi bitaana..
meine kuch zyaada hi maang liya tha kya?
sirf apni poori zindagi uske naam hi toh karna chahti thi swaym..
iknow uski zaroor koi majboori hogi..
varna mera rey apni baatcutter k saath aisa karey.. ho hi nai sakta

reys eyes became wet, his throat got stuck.. unable to find the right words to speak he hands the phone over to swayam

Swayam: kri..kriya tum fikr mat karo.. sab teekh hojayega haan.. and rey ko bhi waqt doh

Kriya: he's got all the time he wants swayam.. i trust him and i'll be waiting...

rey who was hearing all this became emotional on how his baatcutter still trusts him..tears flowed down his eyes.. he was standing their numb with all the mixture off emotions running through him

kriya: acha.. sw.. swayam mein sharon ko phone deti hoon

sharon: hi swayam u ok?

swayam: mein teekh hoon.. tum teekh ho na? and kriya..

Sharon: im fine swayam.. kriya bhi tumhe dikha rhi thi k woh teekh hai..
but i know uspe kya beet rhi hai

Swayam: rey ka bhi yay haal hai..

Sharon: han? rey ka.. kyun uss idiot ne hi toh chora hai isko.. uska haal kyun hai aisa?

Swayam: sharon relax.. mein jaanta hoon rey ko uski koi majboori hai

Sharon: what majboori swayam.. k woh apni zindagi kriya ko hi chor de..

Swayam: shar.. voh mujhe nai patta par bohot jald mein patta laga loon ga

Sharon: ok i'll speak to u later

Swayam: ok love u

Sharon: love u 2 bye

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kriya: sha..sharon.. vo... rey kaisa tha?

Sharon: kaisa hoga? enjoy kar rha hoga... kyun soch rhi hai uske bhaarey mein?

kriya: shar plz.. sirf haal hi toh pooch rhi hoon

sharon: tu uska haal jaan rhi hai aur voh.. shayad teri yaad bhi na aari ho usko

*kriya wipes her tears*

sharon: acha im sorry nai boloongi..

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rey: *in tears* itna trust hai meri baatcutter ko mujhpe? itna sabkuch hone k baad bhi.. kyun karti ho itna trust baatcutter... kyun?

swayam: dude.. relax.. mat roh.. rey koi toh hoga na jiss se apni problem tu bata sakey?

Rey: *self talk* Kon ho sakta hai woh?.. swayam mein abhi aya

*Rey walks towards the door, he opens it but what he sees gives a happy but surprised feeling*

rey: kr..kriyaa..

Kriya: kyun kiya tumne esa??

rey: kriya.. listen to me.. mein voh

Kriya: no rey mujhe kuch nai sunn na..

rey: lekin kriya.. meri kuch..

Kriya: mujhe sab patta chal gaya hai! itni barri baat tumne mujhse chupaye kyun rey?

rey was feeling guilty and also sad.. he didn't know what to do

Kriya: tumne yeh sab khud hi sehn kar liya.. kissi ko kuch bataya bhi nai.. mujhpe trust nai tha kya?

Rey: kriya.. its.. its nothing like that meri baat toh..

kriya: nai rey.. hum milke sub kuch solve kar lete lekin tumne.. batana zaroori nai samjha na?

rey pulls her into a hug

Rey: im sorry kriya.. mujhe yeh sab karna parra.. usne mujhe majboor kardiya tha aur..

kriya parts away and cups reys face

Kriya: im proud of u rey!! ab hum isko saath mein solve karegain

rey smiles and they hug again... rey was first to break the hug

rey : abhi itni mehnat ki maney tumharey liye to ek kiss to banta hey na

kriya : reeyy 😲 😳

rey : arey we love each other na to kiss to banta hey na

kriya about to run when rey pulls her back in a kiss .. they start of with a soft kiss ...but then it turned into a wild pessionate kiss ... rey showed his love ...care and all his emotions ...both were enjoying it when some one disturbed them..

Sochte roh guys... leave ur likes and comments :)

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prabhjot ARMA

@bluelashes

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Posted: 12 years ago

#80

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kal unres kroogi abhi going mom shouting luv u by

unres
main a gyi comment unres karney
tuney upar mera name add kiya abhi san merey pishey per jayegey
ki kriya kha sey ayi
dimaag chlao guys
ekta kapoor k serial nahi dekhtey kya
but update it was amazing
hww kriya ko rey ki awazz pehchaan mey kyu nahi ayi
swayam ki awaz mey talking kya
but phir b baat to ho gyi

haye kriya kitna trust karti hey rey pey
and sharon ka first bf arjun tha na i know *patting my back*
main bohat smart hoo
thanku ha *bows*
but m loving it
sharon is baar jhansi ki raani hey
kriya bichari ...shaan hehhehehe
last part
uskey barey kya bolu
tuney already pm mey meri bohat tareef kar di thi
to kuj nahi bolna
in short update dhasoo tha
i love it
kya baat kya baat kya baat
update soon
ur di
aroma_rubharu😉