Eternal Love- a Swaron FF (updated Chap. 8)

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Shivani

@shivheena123

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Posted: 12 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: spongy
a really amazing strt for an amazing SwaRon FF

plz do pm me when u update...
😊😊

Thank you! Swaron fans forever! 😛

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Sunil

@Suni1986

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Posted: 12 years ago

#12

It was nice start of this FF
Sharon POV was superb
i really liked to read more
nd first chappy was nice re

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Simren

@DanCing_DiVa_SK

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Posted: 12 years ago

#13

Mind blowing start dear...please continue soon 😊

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lakshmi

@ShasthaaPriyaa

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Posted: 12 years ago

#14

Awesome start.continue soon.😊

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Shivani

@shivheena123

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Posted: 12 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: Suni1986
It was nice start of this FF
Sharon POV was superb
i really liked to read more
nd first chappy was nice re

Thank you very much! I appreciate all the nice comments! I will be updating soon. So until then, bare with me and be a little patient! Thank you.😛

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Shivani

@shivheena123

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Posted: 12 years ago

#16

Chapter 2-

He looked at Sharon, open mouthed and numb. "Sharon?" He spoke with the voice that soothed Sharon. Jennifer looked, confused at what was going on. Jennifer finally caught her voice "Swayam, you know her?"

Swayam looked at Jennifer, angry but also happy. "Can I have a word with Sharon?" Jennifer nodded, still in shock. Sharon did not know what to do. She was just as confused as Jennifer. Swayam grabbed Sharon's wrist and took her where no one could possibly be watching. He stared at her for a good 5 minutes with locked eyes and then he backed out! Tears were forming in the warm eyes of his. He pushed his hair back and spoke.

"Why Sharon? Why?" A tear rolled down his cheek. Sharon wanted to wipe it so bad but she knew if she did, things wouldn't be the way she wanted. She would accidentally reveal the truth. "Huh? Why? Why did you leave us all? Everything was going great, so what happened? I thought you were with us all in this dance career. At least, if not for me, you could have stayed for Rey, your best friend Sharon!! Why did you leave us all?" Seeing Sharon not responding, Swayam grabbed his love's shoulders and gave a slight shake. "Do you know how much I cried? Just because you had left!" More tears rolled down his cheeks. The tears had eaten up his words and he was unable to speak. He took a step back.

Finally, Sharon spoke. "Swayam, please. Please don't cry! You're going to-" she was cut off by Swayam.

"That's all I have left to do. Cry! What else can I do?" Sharon bursted out in tears and leaned against the wall they were standing by. Swayam finally noticed the dress that Sharon was wearing and he couldn't handle the pain anymore. Swayam walked away into the building, still crying. Sharon broke down. She fell to the ground and bursted out in tears.

She started talking to herself and cursing herself for everything. "Why Swayam? Why do you make me feel this way? Why can't I just forget about you? Why are you a piece of my heart?" She kept sobbing. She finally controlled her tears and got up. Making herself look as if nothing had happened, she went to Jennifer. After a few minutes she saw Swayam come back and step onto the stage. There he brought out his team and there they were, Rey, Simmi, Rinni, Nilesh, Vicky, Neha, Aashi, Bharat, and Amar. Sharon dropped her gaze and tried to ignore them. They started their performance.

She remembered all the dances she did with the crew. All the ones in happy and sad times. She recalled Footloose and the start of their professional career. But then she came back to reality and ran out of there without saying a word. She cried her way home...

Edited by shivheena123 - 12 years ago

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_bellaSwan_

@_bellaSwan_

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Posted: 12 years ago

#17

It's interesting one its mystery now . Yup Iam excited for next update

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Shivani

@shivheena123

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Posted: 12 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: bhanumathitanha
It's interesting one its mystery now . Yup Iam excited for next update

Thank you! And I will actually be posting/updating very soon!

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Trushna

@swaronland

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Posted: 12 years ago

#19

hey 😊 just now read both parts of ur ff😃

amazing start👏 swaron separated 😭 thank god at least they meet now😃

plz update soon & pm me next time

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bumblebeeluna

@bumblebeeluna

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#20

Oh man, poor Sharon.
Her dad made her leave b/c of Swayam ?
Nd poor Swayam !!
I hope the whole team jumps on her the minute they see her - haha !
Nd if Jennifer likes Swayam then poor Jennifer too ! Haha

Chapter was awesome - left me wanting more !

Update !!!