AsYa OS : It's not home without you part 2 Pg 4

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heyy just me dropping in with another OS. Just had an AsYa power moment LOLLL and cant access my FF things to update since my laptop's gone to fix 😭😭😭 enjoy this OS please in the meanwhileee. haven't proof read it, plz forgive any mistakes 😊leave your comments tell me what you think😉

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He ran as fast as his legs would take him. It didn't matter that he didn't know what he would say to her or as to why he was speeding as though his life depended on it, though he was pretty sure his life really did. He dashed through the doors of the airport in search of his 'musibat'.

Finally he spotted her sitting in a cafe in the airport and let out the breath he had been holding. He darted up and loomed over her sulking form as she sat on the waiting chairs. She looked up at him, upon sensing his presence. Rubbing her eyes, she muttered under her breath, 'Allah miyan what's wrong with you Zoya? Why are you thinking about such a heartless person. Hmph, not once did he stop me or speak to me before I left so he obviously won't show up here. Uff, main itne pagal hoon!' She buried her face in her hands, out of frustration.

Asad couldn't help but let a tiny smile escape his lips. He kneeled in fornt of her and cleared his throat.

She grunted and mumbled something about hearing his voice and still wouldn't move her hands off her face. Asad leaned forward and pulled her hands away, obtaining a loud gasp from her. She stood up instantly.

'Aap! What are you doing here?' she yelled.

'Shhh stop screaming Miss Faruqui. This is an airport, not our home where we tolerate your loud nonsense.' He said in a firm tone.

Zoya didn't know if to smile at the fact that he said 'their home' or to give him a hard kick for yelling at her once again.

'OH reallyyy, Mr Khan. Anyways I don't have much time to waste. So if you have something to say, which I hope you do, say it quickly!' She shot back at him, in an equal tone. She fumed yet tried to hide the hope and relief at seeing him in her eyes.

'Woh .. actually I came here'. To ' Wait why did I come here..' he stammered and questioned himself.

Well done, Asad. You ran all the way here without thinking about what to say and now, well boy, do I look like shit. What should I say?

'Forget it!' She snapped and took her bag and began walking away from him.

Asad motioned his hand, as if trying to reach for the words to say. This was harder than I thought. Why did I even really want to stop her?

'Wait!' He hurriedly said, seeing her quicken her pace.

Zoya halted, as her heart soared. Could Mr Emotionally Challenged actually express his feelings to me. Is he going to stop me? Her face lit up but she pushed it back down and turned to face him, with a long face.

'Yes, Mr Khan?'

'I'. You can't go.' Zoya's head bolted it straight to meet his eyes.

'WHY!?'

'''' because.. uum.. woh...' he looked around hoping the random passing people and walls would give him something sensible to say. He saw someone eating french fries in the cafe with pepper and immediately continued.' haan I just wanted to make sure you had your pepper spray!' he blurted out without thinking.

'WHAT THE HELL!' Zoya was steaming red by now. Both realized they were making a spectacle and discreetly exited through the door next to them.

'Haannn. Aap jante hai, ki aap ek magnet hoon. A magnet for trouble. Iss liye. If something happened to you...'

'Mr Khan you are wasting my time. I have my pepper spray. And why do you care if something happens to me. Hmph.' She pouted

'Anyways my i have already checked in and in about a half an hour i have to go in. You can go back home now. Don't worry. I'm out of your house. You have your House back now! Soon I'll leave this country and you won't see me again! Then you'll be happy' she said sharply, with every ounce of sarcasm she could put in.

'You're right.' he said.

'Allah miyan! How could one person be so cruel! If you have nothing good to say, then say nothing at all. And why the hell did you even come here, huh? To insult me more than you already have? Believe me, Mr Khan, you've already accomplished that. You're just ridiculous!' She bitterly shoved these words at him, gritting her teeth.

'Nooo!! Allah miyan what's wrong with YOUUU?'

'Mr Khan you're taking my line!' Zoya cut him off before he could continue.

'Oh just shut up! I did not mean that! I said you're right because you were right in saying i have my house back!' he screamed. 'Without you i have my house back!'

'Because... without you it's not home.'


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so should i continue this? maybe one or 2 more parts??????

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Posted: 12 years ago
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This is sooo sweet and a bit filmyy to like jaise filmo mey hota hai ho raha hai hobahu 😉
In the end who doesnt love such a last min proposal... 👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey ...
That was sooo nice !!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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i loved it. very very very well written
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Aww..! Really nice..!
Yh.. Definitely continue...!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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very well written. plz continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Gosh, this was so way too filmy, in a good way though. Not over-exaggerated. Mayne, Asad had issues talking something sensible and whatever he uttered until the last line was utter rubbish. 😆 But nevertheless, you've done a fantastic job, and yea, do continue it. :D
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Posted: 12 years ago
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A bit filmy. Bt i love filmy stuffs lyk dis. Cont soon nd plz pm me plz plz
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Please continue!! I found it very cute! 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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cute
n y do u even ask, u know u have to continue this

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