Second res
😊----Edit----Mayyo... how love filled & romantic part this one was... 😳
It was?
Anya's family is so cute ... & so much like regular family, with all the spice & savoury in each member adding up to whole essence. Her mom, sisters are such a bundle of peppiness it must be appearing so lively to Geet & also a small part wanting to be with her family. Pia & Sia 😆... Yes as Avi said they did remind me of some of the readers drooling over here on Maan 😉... Their talks & discussions over some celebrity made me to feel it to be someone like HR. ❤️ they then proceeded to discuss on the same plane about Maan. I don't know why But I feel it was so much to be like this only (Are you getting what I'm trying to say..?) They could relate Maan with HR... something that I usually do ... Though for now it would be Maan for me as not married & let Sia + Pia take HR... at least till M-G move ahead form their tortoise speed.
I totally get what you're trying to say because I've always related Maan to HR myself. The scene where I feel these two resembled the most is the Laung Da Lashkara part where they're on the cycle. 😳
Anya - Geet's bond has grown from where it had initially started from. Sometimes it just takes few moments & few interactions to form strong bonds... & yet a lifetime of nurturing & delicate handling to keep the bond intact & always just getting deeper with time. Anya & Geet have achieved that type of bonding to greater extent. Almost on similar lines that of Anya, Ayush & Maan who know each other since ages. Just showing that time doesn't decide the strength of the bond but its foundation being love, trust & care and proper cherishing is needed whatever be the age of the relation Similar it is with all four of them ...But the whole selecting of clothes, decking up did subtly show the bonding of this nature between Anya- Geet.
I was about to highlight the parts I loved in this paragraph of yours and then found out that it's the whole of it! Very well-said, Onir! Time doesn't decide how deep a bond goes. Where it can take years to come to talking terms, it can take just a few moments to form the deepest of bonds. Very well-put! 👏
Maan welcoming the girls ... Hayee, loved how he was stumped seeing Geet in the new avatar, though not much but his inner voice so well spoke of his missing words & actions. Ranbir ... I like him for the ease in which he went & complimented the girls without much of a hesitation. While Maaan babu has to tread with caution & proof read what he is going to compliment Geet as he is afraid of losing out on whatever little progress they've done. Loved it how you showed that both Khurana boys welcomed their lady loves at the entrance itself. Also loved the progress how Geet FEELS & WANTS Maan to compliment her, was sweet. She wants to know that she is beautiful in Maan's eyes. It is as if every compliment feels incomplete without his words to add to it. Neil ne Jess ko busy kar diya... Chalo now Maan is saved. I liked the bonding between Maan-Anya- Ayush's families.
Ranbir is way too different from this shy Maan to have to think before complimenting a girl. 😆 Yes, Geet wants to know how Maan likes her but she still hasn't given much thought to why she wants to know it. As for Jess, yayy! Maan is free, free, free! 😆 (It sounded like 3 idiots wala scene! 😆)
Bechara Tortoise Maan wants to compliment Geet appropriately this time & not in relation to decoration or anything else. I love How 'G' was teasing him, & also testing his patience... She wanted him to try harder. I have told you before also I suppose that G reminds me of Nisha... Her actions, words are so Nisha-style. He did compliment her this time'. Though he initially goofed up little bit by bringing in Anya-Ayush talks but yet not bad. ..."You look beautiful..." Three words & so many changes, Geet has a glow & happiness of knowing she is beautiful for him... and for Maan quite a progress form the times when he used to just see her from afar. Sometimes putting words to the emotions felt however few they may be, does leave a greater impact, & is much needed.
Tortoise Maan doesn't want to keep standing in the shadows all the time. 😉
True, words - however little they are - sometimes hold a lot more importance than we can think...
Ranbir-Zara...😳. Loved his romantic confession & proposal. Those lines he spoke were quite simple & not OTT but held depth, commitment & spoke of true emotions. Also the way the whole family (As everyone there were a single unit happy with the love & bonding of two souls... ) was joyous with this new relation. Liked how Geet each time landed up trying to find the smile on Maan's face to feel the complete happiness.
Thank God it wasn't OTT! I don't have any experience with proposals you see, so I wasn't sure about it. 😆
@Underlined: Now that is a minute observation! 😊
Love is in the air ... A-A, R-Z. Hope something rubs off even on the tortoise couple. 😆
I hope! 😆
The diary features again, & this time she could actually pen down some very coherent & continuous thoughts about someone very special. It also showed how she has started enjoying the college life to the fullest with these new friends, all thanks to Maan. I agree it wasn't like first she never enjoyed college, but now it just feels she is enjoying & living each moment of her life with such friends around her. Her first Poem, ... It just spoke of everything, putting all her unconscious & felt emotions in few lines. You have great way with words. Those few lines spoke of everything ... Loved it so very much. The lines spoke more of Maan's characteristics, & how she feels for him after all the moments spend together. Each word in the poem was somehow a recollection of all their memories. 👏❤️
Ahh, yes, the diary had to come back to actually show Geet's thinking processes which she doesn't share with anyone at all.
Glad you liked the poems. They were meant to be a recollection of memories and somewhat a description of how she sees Maan. 😊
The urdu poem... What should I say, I guess I have already told you I'm in love with this rich language, only that I don't have much understanding of it & not that fluent, but yes it just feels so serene & connects so well.
Yes you have told me about your liking of the language. 😊
"...Jab kisiki aankhon ki gherayian mein tum apni parchayi dekho toh... "
These lines were so deep, mesmerising. When you feel & can see your image in the others eye it just means that you have started reading the person deeply, also that somewhere you want to be the person who will reside in his soul. As eyes are mirrors to the soul. They conveyed the depth of her feelings towards him, how aware she is of his presence & each thing related to him, showing subconsciously she has made peace with the feelings ' only now she needs to admit it to self & Maan.
Wow! I wouldn't have taken such a deep meaning to that line! I love the way you throw light on things the way I won't normally see. 👏
Yes, all she needs to do is admit to herself and to Maan. But will she, before she has to leave?
The end was a bit scary... But the whole part was good that for now I want to overlook it... & will leave it to you the actual progress & efforts Maan will take to confess & make even Geet to confess.
I'm scared of the end too. And even more nervous now, about how the story's going to move forward. 😕
Waiting for more... .. very eagerly!!!!
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