Sulbala SS/FF: Destiny (Chapter 1 pg 3)

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Hi sulbalaians!! I m Mally. I am writing a FF on Rishabala so thought why not on Sulbala.

Guys I m both a Rishabala and Sulbala fan.



PS: Ignore my mistakes.



Note: This is for Sulbala fans. Rishabala fans are also welcomed if they want to read it. But please guys no bashing here.


(Banner coming soon!)

So here is my SS/FF: Destiny!



Sultan the gangster and Madhu an ordinary girl. These two are totally imperfect for each other yet love is meant to be between two imperfect persons. Will they both end up falling in love for each other or hating each other?



Character Sketch below



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Character Sketch



Sultan

He is the God in the underworld. He has a dark past (same reason as in the show). He is a tall, good-looking man. He has a five year old kid named Aryan. He is very strict with him yet he loves him a lot.



Madhubala Shamsher Mallick

She is a sweet, bubbly girl who loves to help others. She is a living angel. Words fail to describe how beautiful she is.

Guys here, Madhu is not married to RK in short RK doesn't exist in Madhu's life.


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Other characters are

Padmini, Trishna, Aryan and kaka


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Guys please leave your precious comments and likes. Will update soon!


Till then have fun.




Index

Prologue: pg 2!
Chapter 1- pg 3
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Nice concept...do pm me when u update :D
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Originally posted by: Aneri401

Nice concept...do pm me when u update :D


Will update soon dear 😊
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nice...
continue soon...& do plz pm me
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Nice...
Will be looking forward to your update.
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thnks for the comments guys
will update today
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Hey guys i am back with the updates. Please ignore the mistakes and leave lots of comment and likes.


Prologue



Madhu was on her way back to her home when she heard someone begging for his life from someone.

She panicked. She quickly hid herself behind the nearby tree and peeped through the side to see what was actually going on. "I warned you Bhujang to stay away from Aryan! How dare you try to kidnap my son! Sultan's son!" He roared for which Madhu got even more scared.

"Sultan please! Don't kill me!" Bhujang begged for his life. "Sultan doesn't like people who betrays him! And you had audacity to betray me! But since you were my right hand I shall give you one more chance. I won't kill you but I won't let you live peacefully!" Sultan exclaimed. "Take him away" Sultan ordered his men.

Madhu was too shocked to react. At this moment the best thing she could possibly do was to run away. But fate wasn't in her favour today. When she tried to run away she tripped over a stone and she fell down for which she hissed in pain which was noticed by Sultan. He ran towards her and pointed his gun on her. "Who are you?" Sultan asked.

Madhu lifted her gaze and saw a blue eyed guy standing with a gun on his hand which was pointed towards her. Madhu got up. She couldn't stand properly bcuz of the sprain in her leg.

But before she could say anything someone hit her with the back of his gun and Madhu fainted and fell down on the ground. It was Sultan's men who hit her as per Sultan's order. He feared what if someone else just like Madhu saw them here.

He ordered his men to handle Bhujang while he took Madhu wi him to his house.Madhu was on her way back to her home when she heard someone begging for his life from someone.


Edited by SPNnIPKKNDlover - 12 years ago
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wohooo another sulbala ss :D
awesome! great start!
plz pm me next time u update!

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