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Posted: 12 years ago
so he is not alive plzz bring him back...loved the update/...
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awesome!!!
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hope arnav comes!!!
intezaar ka pal meeta hota hai !

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Hey!!! Sweetheart!!!!
I want to read it further!!!
Hope u understand!!!

I know... if Khushi is alive... Arnav can't be dead!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Waiting the mystery to unfold!!!!😊

Great os!!!
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oh pls don't seperate arshi... 😭

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Nice Concept
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PLEASE Let Arnav Be Alive!
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MAITHLY'S INDEX...

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Maithly

INTEZAAR………..

Waiting for you till my last breath………….

PART 2

Flash back continues…..

In the whole engagement function,, arnav was staring at khushi like hell,, khushi could feel his heated staring ta her,, she will turn to see him in-between and those time he will smile at her ,, his beautiful smile,,

After the sagai,, khushi and her some relatives done their dance making everyone dance with them,, making everyone happy,, and this made arnav also smile,,

In the whole sagai dance sequence arnav was admiring khushi only,, only khushi,, and naani was watching arnav intently,,

She came to him and asked,,,

Naani: chote,, what are you staring at??

Arnav: she is so beautiful naani,, and her dance it's too,, [arnav stopped as he hit reality,, he looked at his naani,, who is now smiling at him, and he saw she is now narrowing her eyes,, as she caught him,,]

Naani: chote?? Did you just now praised someone??

Arnav: naani wo,,,

Naani: chote I had bring up you and anjali bitiya and I know what you are thinking and saying ok,,

Arnav shook his head,, and naani touched his face and said,,

Naani: chote if you liked her then tell me we will ask her hand for you??

As arnav heard this he looked at his naani with wide eyes,,

Arnav: naani wo,,

Naani: if you like,, love her then tell me I will talk to priya and raj beta [khushi's parents]

Arnav: wo naani,,

Naani: chote if you will take so much time for think then you wont get her,, someone better than you will take her away,, [before naani could complete,,,]

Arnav: naani,, no,, I ,, I like her,,

Naani smiled and cupped his face and said,,,

Naani: I know chote,, I will talk to them today itself ok,,

Arnav nodded his head in yes,, he was really happy by this,, he never felt this much happy before,, may be love at first sight,, and he smiled inwardly,,,

It was after an hour when every guest were left, and guptas and raizadas remained,,

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[raj and priya gupta khushi's parents,, shashi and garima payal's parents,, buaji is raj and shashi's sister,,, so raj and shashi are brothers,, raj, priya and khushi lives a little far away from the place shashi and family lives,, buaji is with shashi whom is the elder in brothers,,]

The guptas family along with raizada family sat together after the guests left,, they chatted about the upcoming puja,,, that's when naani said,,,

Naani: raj beta when you are going back??

Raj: wo maa ji may be today evening or tomorrow morning,, you know I am little busy with my work,, and textile business,,

Naani: ji beta,, and what about khushi bitiya and priya beta??

Priya: maa ji wo I am also going with him,, but khushi beta will be here till the wedding,, her graduation is also now complete so she is free,,

Naani: hmm,,

Everyone looked at naani suspiciously,, what is naani is planning to do,, and arnav also looked at naani is she going to talk about his and khushi's alliance..

Shashi: why maa ji why were you asking this???

Naani: wo nothing,, I have an alliance for khushi bitiya if you all likes then we can put forward it,,,

Buaji: for titaliya??

Naani: yes,, the groom is 27 years old,,

Garima: 27,, our bitiya is only 21 maa ji,,

As she said 27 ,, they knew who was it?? Only arnav,, their chote,, arnav bituva,, bhai,,

Then anjali asked,,

Anjali: why aunty you are looking younger than that??

Garima: wo bitiya,,

Buaji: its ok garima,, you know me and your jijaji had about 15 years age difference,, [buaji said blushingly,, everyone smiled at this,, khushi looked at buaji shocked,, she and payal were standing with their mothers,, even arnav also smiled at this,, so the age difference is not a matter,,]

Naani: and he is a business man,, and have a lovely family,,

Priya: businessman,,

Naani: why beta you are not looking a groom who is a business man,,

Priya: nahi maa ji wo,,

Raj: why priya ji,, I am also a businessman,, and you married me hai na,, then why not our bitiya??

Priya: no ji,, you are not understanding,, now a days these businessman have many affairs and their married life goes ,,,,

Before priya could complete naani said,,

Naani: no beta he is from a good family,, and I think till now he didn't had any affair with a girl,,

Hearing this raj's eyes twinkled ,, his daughter will get a good life and husband what a father wants more than this,,

Raj: that's good maa ji,, what is his name?? and his family,, can we talk to them,, and meet them,, if you know them,, then I know they will be nice family,,

Naani: thanks beta,,

That's when khushi said,,

Khushi: papa I don't want a marriage now,,,

Hearing this everyone shocked,, raj and priya stood up and came to her,,

Payal tried to talk to khushi,,

Payal: khushi what are you saying,,,

Khushi: I am saying the truth jiji,, I don't want a marriage now,,

Raj: why beta??

Khushi: papa I want to do work,,,,

Raj: beta you have done fashion designing and works in our company then,,

Khushi: but papa,,

Raj: beta see your jijaji is also is getting married na,,

Khushi: but papa she is 23 and I,,

Buaji: titaliya you are 2 year younger than payaliya,, and it's your age too for wedding,,

Raj: yes beta,, you don't understand, you know if a daughter gets a good groom,, good in laws, the girl's parents will be at peace and you are lucky if you are getting a person who will love you,, keep you happy,, a family whom will take care of you like us,,

Hearing this arnav felt immense happiness and respect for his soon to be father in law,,

Naani: raj beta you don't worry,, we will take acre of your bitiya very well,,

Shashi: what did you say maa ji?

Naani: beta wo I was asking your daughters hand for my grand son ,, chote,, arnav,,,

Shashi: what??

Naani: yes beta,,

Anjali: and see uncle ji payal ji and khushi ji won't be get separated,, they two will be together,, life long,,

Payal smiled widely,, akash was little shocked first,, but he know khushi is a nice girl she will lighten his bhai's life,, anjali and shyam are happy,, arnav also is going to get settled,,,

But in all these khushi was get little irritated,, but arnav was looking at her lovingly,,

Naani: beta if you,,

Raj: maa ji what are you saying,, we are really lucky to get you as our family and arnav beta,, we know him very well,, he is a diamond,,

Priya: yes maa ji and our khushi is too lucky,,

Anjali: so when we can do the roka,,,

Buaji: whenever you want,,,

Naani: then rishta pakka,,

Raj: ji,,

Then they hugged each other and congratulated them,, arnav also bend down to touch their feet,,

Raj: no beta you are not our son in law you are our son,,

Shashi: yes raj,, now we have two sons,,

Maami: and we two daughters,,, plus anjali bitiya we have 3 daughters,,

Shyam: what about me maami ji??

Maami: you are our first son damad ji,,

Shyam: thanks maami ji,,

Khushi was looking here and there what is happening here her marriage got fixed and no one asked her,, that's when buaji said,,

Buaji: payaliya you go and bring sweets for everyone… itni khushi ki moka hai,,

Payal: ji buaji,,

Payal went to kitchen and brought a packet of sweets and gave that to buaji,,

Buaji took one from the packet and went to khushi,, and put the laddu in her mouth and said,,,

Buaji: first for you,, you are really lucky titaliya,,,

Khushi give her an angry glare,,

Then buaji went to arnav,,

Buaji: khush raho damad ji,,

Arnav: thanks buaji,,

Then buaji gave everyone the laddus and congratulated each other,, that's when khushi said,,,

Khushi: hmm,, I want to talk to Mr. Raizada,, means arnav ji,,,

Raj: what? what do you want to talk?? [He asked shockingly,, eh knew his daughter very well,, she will do something to stop this wedding,,]

Buaji: titaliya you have all the life to talk then why now??

Khushi: buaji you were an old generation one,, but I am a new generation girl you know,, now groom and bride talks here before marriage,,

Buaji: but,,

Khushi: at least agree for that buaji,,

Arnav and the raizadas looked at each other arnav knew she have some plans in her mind,,,

Naani: madhumati ji bitiya is right,, I too think chote and khushi beta have to talk,, what say chote??

Arnav: ji naani I am ready,,

Buaji: ok titaliya take arnav bituva to your room,,

Khushi: j buaji,, come arnav ji,,

Then arnav followed khushi to her room,,

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As khushi and arnav reached khushi's room khushi suddenly closed the door seeing this arnav asked,,

Arnav: why are you closing the door?? We can talk even it is open,,

Khushi: why are you afraid of me?? That I will do something to you?? [Khushi narrowed her eyes,,]

Arnav: no someone will think opposite to that so I told,, [arnav said smirking,,]

Khushi's mouth formed an "O"

Arnav: ok tell me what you want to talk??

Khushi: yeah wo,, I don't know what you are feeling now,, but I am totally irritated,, I know jiji is 23,, perfect for wedding,, but I am only 21 not the age of wedding,, and I want to study further,,,

Arnav: you can study even after marriage,,

Khushi: You are not understanding arnav ji,, after marriage girls wont be bale to study in a pass like they did before,, and you know I want to marry a person I love,, I like,,,,

Arnav: What?? You love someone else??

Khushi: No,, I don't love anyone till now,, but I want one,,

Arnav: You can love me,, before or after wedding,,

Khushi: But how will that happen?? We met first time today,, and today miring,, see in the after noon we are literally going to get married,,, then how come love will happen???

Khushi was totally blabbering everything when arnav held her arm,, khushi stopped her talking and turned to look at him,, and he made her close to him,, and said,,

Arnav: who said we don't love each other or like,, I love you,,

Khushi: ji???

Arnav: yes,, I started to love you from the time I saw you,, I like you and want to spend my life with you,,

Khushi's mouth again wide open,,

Arnav: I like when you are shocked,, your eyes and lips are looks cute,, and your nose turns red,,

Hearing this khushi looked away,, feeling shy,,

Arnav: and I like your shyness,, and all in all I love you,, I like you,, and I promise,, I will love till my last breath,, only you,, will be in life,, and I will support

Arnav said holding khushi's arms,, and she could feel his words meaning,, khushi smiled at him,,,

Arnav: 'now I am waiting for the day you to come to my life,, I never said this to anyone,, and I truly mean it,, khushi,, I love you,,

Arnav said cupping khushi's face little,, the two pairs of eyes became little wet,,, with happiness,, completeness,, sadness or love,,,

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Then everything was really very fast,, roka,, puja,,,, their engagement in a week,, and mehendi,, haldi everything,,,

And today their wedding along with akash and payal's,, as akash insisted to have the two wedding at the same day,, and it happened,,

As arnav made khushi his,, akash made payal his,,, wife ,, partner,,,

After the wedding,, the brides were taking a little rest, and talking to each other,,,

Payal: khushi I am really happy,, you know,, we two will be together in same house,,

Khushi: yes jiji,, I am also happy,,

Payal was smiling but soon she tensed about something and looked gloomy and khushi caught this,,

Khushi: what happened jiji?? You look tensed,,

Payal: nothing khushi wo I was thinking about my first night you know,, [payal said shyly,,]

Khushi: what is in it to shy like this jiji?? Everyone have first night and you and me too,, [khushi said coolly,, and payal shocked to hear this,,]

Payal: khushi you are nit little,, a little tensed by this,,

Khushi: no jiji why would I will be tensed,, what will happen in first night,, nothing,,

Payal: huh??

Khushi; jiji ,, first we will have to sit in the big bed in our room,, and then covering our face we will sit there looking down,, then our husbands,, come,, [khushi stopped realizing something,,]

Khushi: jiji me and arnav ji will be in same room,, in a day,,

Payal: khushi not for a day,, it's for life long you know,,

Khushi: hey devimayya I didn't thought this before,, what will I do now?????

Payal looked at a frightened khushi,, this is not the one she saw a minute ago,,,

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Precap: the unusual wedding night,, " consummation or confusion????

I need good number of Likes and comments…..

So please Read Like and Comment……

Will update MY UNKNOWN BRIDE today evening...


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Posted: 12 years ago
Loved d update
amazing nd beautifully written
wen I read d conversation between khushi nd payal
I was like this wen 🤣🤣🤣
she realised d actual meaning of first night
pls update soon
yay am first
👏 🥳
Edited by --MISHTEE-- - 12 years ago

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