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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome i loved it soo much especially virat's pov . please do continue soon⭐️
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PART 8

Time to call Hitler aka my mom to come pick me up. Ring ring ring. God!! Mom pick up the goddamn phone. Seriously I can't f**k*** believe this. She gave me a huge lecture on how irresponsible I am and now she is not picking up her phone when I am here waiting for her. Maybe I should call dad, or maybe not- he is probably playing doctor to his patients. I called mom's office and as usual Stacy answered. "Stacy where is hitler?"

Stacy giggled at the hitler part and answered, "Ma'am is in a meeting."

So what am I supposed to do? Stand here all day and wait for her? God I am not one of her employees. "I feel bad for you woman. You are working on a weekend too?" I inquired out of curiosity.

"Yea ma'am wanted me to work this weekend." Stacy replied grudgingly. Poor girl.

"Okay when your ma'am gets out tell her I called."

"Sounds good. Have a good day." Stacy said cheerfully.

"Yeah whatever." I hung up.

Virat who was comfortably seated on the hood of his car called out to me, "I'm not going to kidnap you or anything. Why are you disturbing your mom and her employees? I told you I'll drop you."

"God Casanova I'm not dumb. I know you can drop me but that will cause another drama in my house. Mom will start another lecture on how I didn't obey her orders." From the way he was looking at me it seemed like he didn't believe me. "Dude you don't know my mom so shut up an stop giving me those looks. Lady is a control freak and after the party last night she has lost it. So let me handle her my way."

"Why are you so scared of your mom?" He asked amused that I was actually following orders.

I smirked at him and replied, "Because I want to go to Hawaii for spring break."

"No way, you are coming too?" He asked excitedly.

"Ermm yes I am. Jeez whats with the excitement?" I'm going to Hawaii and he is excited? Does not make sense to me at all. Wait a minute. "Wait are you going too?" Now I was excited.

"Slow aren't we?" He asked sarcastically then continued, "Ofcourse I am. I'm a senior and chicks dig me. Without me the trip would be incomplete."

There we go with the oh I'm so cool talk. "Not chicks just s**ts." I laughed at his expression while he pushed me from the hood of the car causing me to fall flat on my ass.

I was on the floor with my mouth wide open in shock while he started laughing at my expression. Soon he too fell down and that made him laugh more.

"You pushed me and now you are laughing at me?" I asked angrily whilst dusting my pants off.

Ring ring. Finally mommy dear got enough time to call me. I raised my index finger signaling him to quiet down and picked up the phone.

"Yes?" I sighed into the phone.

"Where are your manners Manvi? You say hello when you pick up the phone."

Are you serious? She made me wait for more than an hour and now she is going to lecture me on how to pick up my phone? "Are you coming or should I ask my friend to drop me?" I questioned without bothering to listen to her any further.

"No you are not hanging out with any of your useless friends. I have another meeting and dad is busy. It is a weekend so I don't have enough employees here to send someone for you. I have called a cab and it'll drop you home." I rolled my eyes and thanked my lucky stars that she couldn't see my face otherwise I would be in for another lecture.

"My project partner has a car and he can drop me. Why should I take a cab?"

"No arguments. The cab will be there in a couple of minutes. Call me as soon as you reach home."

Virat's POV

So Manvi and I are now friends. I don't know what to think of it though. We became friends because it was a necessity considering the fact that we were project partners but I sort of like it. I mean I enjoy spending time with her. My opinion about her is still the same, she is abnormal and she always will be abnormal but that is what sets her apart. Do you know how annoying it is to have every girl in school look at you like you are some Greek God? I'm not going to lie I enjoy the attention sometimes as I get my way because of it but all this attention 24/7 can be nerve wrecking. Then there is Manvi who doesn't give a shit about anything or anybody.

She does not swoon like other girls when I'm around or does not start blabbering non sense like other chicks. Thank God for that. She is completely mental though. She says whats on her mind, I don't know if it is a good thing or a bad thing, ermm we'll decide later.

After spending over a month with her for this stupid project now she is like an open book to me. I don't know how her friends can't read through her? She is so easy to read. Besides me the only person that knows the real Manvi is her best friend, Jeevs. One of the biggest secrets of Manvi is that she cares. She pretends like nothing hurts her and nothing bothers her but she is a big fat liar. She doesn't show it and acts all Mike Tyson with everyone but on the inside she is sensitive. She says she can't cry, please, after we watched a documentary on dowry and how women are treated in under developed regions, I've seen her wipe her tears when she thought no one was looking.

She acts like she doesn't care about her parents but she does. She has a love and hate relationship with her mom; she keeps complaining how her mom does not spare any minute for her then she'll miss her mom and end up going to her mom's office only to get scolded. She treats her sister badly some days, makes fun out her but mind you if you dare say a word against her sister she'll rip off your head.

When I was assigned to work on the project with her I hated it, I hated her and I hated my professor for doing that to me but now I couldn't be more thankful. In less than a month we have become buddies.

Oh my my look at that! Virat is sitting by the bleachers all by himself lost in deep thought? Time for some fun.

"Booh." I screamed close to Virat's ears and he jumped out of his seat.

"Arghh Manvi why do you always have to give me a heart attack?"

"You are such a pussy." I said sitting next to him.

He frowned at me, "Language Cribber."

What is he now? My mom? "Okay mom." I said folding my hands and bowing my head. "I hate that nickname. Don't call me Cribber."

He dragged me towards the school building and put his arms around my shoulder, "You are a cribber Miss Cribber."

I elbowed him and glared at him, "You are so annoying sometimes Casanova."

He made a face at the nickname. "Why is it that you are allowed to call me Casanova but I'm not allowed to call you Cribber?"

"Because I'm Manvi and you are nobody." I ran for my life.

He ran after me and shouted, "God Manvi stop already. I'm not going to do anything I promise."

There is no way I was going to buy that. If I stop running he will tickle me like last time. "Nah nah."

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"Hello Virat." I said hurriedly.

"Manvi is everything alright?" He asked worriedly.

"Yes stupid."

"What is your problem girl? It is freaking 3 in the morning. Can't you let me sleep?" He asked drowsily. "Okay I'll hang up now. See you in school tomorrow." He continued.

"Shut up Virat and listen to me." I said urgently.

"Ever since I have become friends with you all I have been doing is listening to you. You even come in my dream and give me orders. Leave me alone."

I laughed at his comment and he continued, "I feel bad for the guy that will someday be your boyfriend or marry you."

"Don't worry about that I don't want to trouble some other guy so I'll marry you." I joked.

"NO." He screamed into the phone. "No way in hell will I EVER marry you. You have already made my life hell imagine living with you that too forever."

"God I'm not dying to get married to you either. I mean neither are you good looking nor are you intelligent. You don't have a good personality either. Eww." I said scrunching my nose.

"Did you wake me up at 3 in the morning to insult me? Bye." He replied offended.

"VIRAT. No wait."

"What?"

"I need your help to convince mom to send me to Hawaii for spring break." I finally told him why I'd called him so late.

SONG: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6HiDSfHbw7s

I didn't want to drag it any further. Comments please.

Btw this year for April fools I told my mom I'm pregnant and she believed me! LOL Infact when I later told her that it was a prank she was like "Are you sure it is just a prank?" Wow my mom really has a low opinion of me. She still asks me if I'm really pregnant. Oh lord.

Edited by nisha33 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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woww am the first one to comments...yipieee that feels great 😃
and thanx alott for the double update tht just made my day 😊
and no doubt the updates were just amazing ...👏⭐️
i loved manvi's thought on romeo and juliet thts mine thought aswelll...
and virat's thoughts were just hilarious...😆
i just enjoy reading manvi's thoughts on everything its just so damn fun ...
and virat and manvi finally being frends 😃

i like the way virat understood her soo well and didnt behave all sympathetic with her...that shows they are going to share an awesome bond...and he understood her every behavious knowing her soo well in just few dayzz...
want to know manvi's thought over their frendship ...did she notice him like how he did ...

update sooon plsss
and do pm me 😊
Edited by kulsum_virman - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
gosh i love this ff ❤️
first things first...shakespeare has never been as much fun to read before i read ur take on him nisha 😆

part 7 was hillarious!!!! loved it to the core and cudnt stop laughing...lolz...

part 8...ahh da new beginning to friendship! gr8 start...and da way they talk in ur story...i so so so wish da cvs of da show had half da creativity u have 😛

WARNING :
now update this ss asap...this one is my personal favourite...and if u take such long gaps to update...most of us will forget abt da story
😆
Edited by deepika03 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Omfg your prank 🤣
I can imagine your mumma's expression 😆
Coming tocyour update.. As usual it was fab.. And I love quick updates.. Manvi is like Coconut acc to Virat... Virat loving Manvi's company... Cant wait for Hawaii trip.. 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
WOW BOTH THE UPDATES WERE FAB
THANKS 4 THE PM
PLS CONT SOON
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Posted: 12 years ago
Lmao 🤣 I can't say what is making me laugh more. . The update or your April fool prank 😆 it was hilarious Nisha.. Ummm your mom does not think low of you for sure. Its just that you talk all honest stuff sarcastically 😛 so she just got worried lol. I love your sarcasm. And I loved the update. I mean math and economics with Shakespeare? That was totally out of the box. Virman have bonded so well. Best buddies 😊 Manvi is so unique. She called her mom 'mom' then next moment again 'lady'. Sweet stubborn girl. Ok may be not so sweet lol. But like virat figured out she is secretively caring and sweet 😃 i'd loved the sisters in the opening parts. Virat seriously needed sum1 who wud not jst stick to him and be his true friend and i'm happy both of them got each other. Erm... Manvi asking virat for help to convince her mother? It does not seem to be a good idea lol. There is a lot of drama to cum 😉 looking forward to their hawai trip... Thank you so much for updating... And thanx for the pm 🤗
p.s- i hate typing on touch screen phones. I'd to edit this thrice -_- i love typing on my old dabba phone more. 😛
Edited by shona_virman - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey hi...😊
Ok sorry for not commenting before but I can say that your SS's is one of which I follow regularly.
Your SS's always show a beautiful emotion between two people and love-hate relation among two people's.
The way you potray hurt,happiness and especially humour was always excellent👏.
Coming to the updates the way you showed maanvi's character was superbbb ,a girl who is strong from outside but innocent from inside...Her relation with her mom is just like my relation with my mom...My mom also always give some lecture like "don't do this,don't hangout with them,don't go their" but she is my best friend but i never showed her.😉
The Romeo and juliet part was hilarious and I liked maanvi's point of view *I think its your point of view* lol😆.
liked how virat understood maanvi and her character and also her emotions.
Now they are friends and I was like "good going".
Waiting for, how maanvi convinces her mother for hawaii trip and also how virat and maanvi are going to bond together.
Do PM me please.
Take care and also thank you for your valuable time for writing.
With lots of love.

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Posted: 12 years ago
First of all Sholly for not commenting on ur last update... It was just fab & hilarious.. I don't remember ever laughing so much in an update before 😆

Coming to latest update, I am so happie shappie Viraat & Mannu are finally buddies
Loved Viraat's POV 😃 He understands Mannu so beautifully😳

Sometime I just wish u could be the creative head 4 EHM... Our show wud have been such an HIT always ...

Luking frwd to the Hawaii trip😉 Viru will convince Hitler 4 Mannu 😆 Eeeks excited to read...
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update do continue soon😊

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