SS Manvi and Virat from the beginning part15,16

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.Yamin.

@.Yamin.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#281

Wohoo...douple updates Nisha...superb damakedaar updates...👏👏👏...really loved it...⭐️..perfectly written..⭐️

Chapter 7_awesome update👏👏👏...both manvi and pov were fabulous...⭐️glad tat he didn't show any sympathy towards manvi...he really noe her well..😛manvi is damn hilirious...😆...the way she write down about the Shakespeare's plays was soo damn funny.😆romeo IQ level...😆...i was smiling n laughing throughout the update... 😃loved virat reaction when manvi called his name...😉so finally virman are friends...😳...loved every bit of the update...😊...

Chapter8_superb update again Nisha...👏👏...virat is enjoying spending time with manvi...great...😃...virat noe her in n out...she is open book to him...wow...⭐️...the way he noe her was awesome 😳...loving their friendship bonding a lot...❤️..."Ever since I have become friends with you all I have been doing is listening to you. You even come in my dream and give me orders"...loved this line...😆...so manvi want help from virat to convince her mom...interesting...really looking forward for the Hawaii trip...will be eagerly waiting for the next update...the way u described everything was fabulous Nisha...👏👏
loved the way the story is proceeding...really enjoy reading it...😳...thank u so much for the pm...
ur April fool was hilarious Nisha...😆...omg ur mom would be really shocked..😆...take care Nisha...😊

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keerthana

@keerthu27

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+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#282

hey i din't read tis for long time i don't know how i missed it.

but i have cmntd in the first page😆

loved virman friendship they are just impossible.

waiting for next part and ur the stories wich u have stopped in

the previous stop so plz start it 😉

THANKS FOR THE pm

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naina

@naina927

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+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#283

oh my god nisha...😲 what a prank u played on ur mum... i really cant think of doing so n u did it... 😆 n on the top ur mom believed u and the question she asked u... it cracked me up...🤣 🤣 she really does think low of u... 🤣 🤣 🤣sorry to say but its true nisha... 🤣 🤣

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Syed695

@Syed695

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#284

Part 8,Loved it...❤️! they have opened up to eachother really well...Dunno if Maanvi has seen the real Virat in him...But Virat actually knws the real Maaanvi...Like u have taken a little faster though i have written in the previous comment that m likin u taking it slow...see the change u have got in my opinion...Damn good.⭐️~!! they spoke abt relationship n Maanvi refused, but she din notice what virat has said she comes in his dreams n orders arund,.Lady u missed that point..😆 Now Virat will convince her Mom..Wow but how...he is anyways liked by the ladies be it any age...Ahh cant wait for the charm to work on Mommy...😉👍🏼...Thanks fr the PM Nisha...~!!!

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hangok

@hangok

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Posted: 12 years ago

#285

ohh god, i loved part 7
liked was manvi wrote about shakespeare and the moment when she called him by his name just perfect,
and dont forget to mention, that how easily virat knows about manvi, i mean about her feelings thatt when he felt sympathy with her she would be anoyed..

at last they are now friends, this is would be a good start

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naina

@naina927

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#286

i am soo happy that u gave double updates...!!!! i think it was worth waiting...!!! i loved both the updates...

chap 7 was just too hilarious n a new beginning for virman... as they became partners... they became friends... now i am eagerly waiting for their friendship turning into love phase... ❤️ i want virman to fall for each other very soon... 😃 as this manvi n virat are too naughty n chilled out, i cant wait to see their " censored " romantic moments... ufff...!!!! n coming to the hilarious part... manvi's thoughts on shakespeare writings was way too hilarious... she called them unrealistic, unreasinable... n the iq thing about romeo was just too funny... but cmon manvi was somewhat right... i am with her on this point.. romeo could have checked juliet's pulse... loved every bit of it nisha... ❤️ ❤️

chap 8 was a mix for me... at times emo, at times funny, n at tyms so realistic... i loved virat's POV the most... ❤️ for me it was the highlight of the update... and the virman nok jhok moments were just bang on... manvi waking up virat at 3... what are friends for... 😉 i too have done this and taht too many times... 😆 its soo much of fun... 😆

my fav8 portion

fter spending over a month with her for this stupid project now she is like an open book to me. I don't know how her friends can't read through her? She is so easy to read. Besides me the only person that knows the real Manvi is her best friend, Jeevs. One of the biggest secrets of Manvi is that she cares. She pretends like nothing hurts her and nothing bothers her but she is a big fat liar. She doesn't show it and acts all Mike Tyson with everyone but on the inside she is sensitive. She says she can't cry, please, after we watched a documentary on dowry and how women are treated in under developed regions, I've seen her wipe her tears when she thought no one was looking.

She acts like she doesn't care about her parents but she does. She has a love and hate relationship with her mom; she keeps complaining how her mom does not spare any minute for her then she'll miss her mom and end up going to her mom's office only to get scolded. She treats her sister badly some days, makes fun out her but mind you if you dare say a word against her sister she'll rip off your head.

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hangok

@hangok

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Posted: 12 years ago

#287

cant say enough that i love this ss
oww this virat is sweet how easily he can read her, i mean in a short time of a month he knows her so well, this is true friendship...
dont know what i liked more in this part
hawaii holiday
virat tickles manvi 😳
or manvis joke she will marry him😃

im know excited to see how virat will handle mavis mom for the hawaii trip

thanks for pm

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rasp_berry

@rasp_berry

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#288

Wowww awesome...they r a frds now...nice cont soon

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Aashika_virman

@Aashika_virman

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#289

hi nisha..

i am great fan of you.love all ur stories..will comment on update after reading

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Lara / Clara

@devilaonmoon

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#290

hey... its unbelievable... how i didnt read this ff before!!!... every chapter is more than awsm.. superb... the way u described both virmans pov ... fabulous... manvis thoughts r really hilarious... was clutching my stomach nd laughing when virman were reading the paragraphs they wrote on shakespeares stories... now im never gonna be able to take romeo-juliet seriously...ha..ha... but the fact was so true about their death... nd thanks fr the pm... cont soon...;)

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